Part 9It was unsaid but still, I am loving how you are showing Naina and Rohan's bond. They seem to be best of friends with all the plans done together whether it is clearing misunderstandings between Sameer and Vishaka-Vivek or planning his birthday surprise and the proposal.
I believe in Forgive but never Forget but there are some things that are better when you let it go. There are some problems where you feel for it so strongly that it can affect you very badly, harbouring negative emotions inside us will only bring us ill effects and nothing else.
Sameer can never go back being the same dear son for them once he longed to be but he is willing enough to try and be a son and maintain a cordial relationship where respect and faith will bloom with time. Also, I loved the dialogue where Rohan tells Mr.Somani that this is just a give and take relationship and you are being nice just because he took care of you during your bad times. Bang on! And later, when Sameer acknowledges the fact that that he knew both Naina and Rohan was a part of this and he thanked them from his heart!
So, you gave us such a Hatke proposal, Aaisha Di!
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It was so beautiful and it felt like you recreated the Mount Abu night again. The stars and the moon are indeed a special witness of their love.
And, they kissed! You wrote it very well!
I am loving how Sameer is helping Naina achieve her dreams. He is really a gem! I am sure, she will complete her MBA too with Sameer beside her. Their love is strong enough too overcome all the hurdles but Chachaji needs to agree for and to one thing; her MBA and their love!
Loved the way you ended the chapter with them going back; together! Really, what all have we covered in the past 9 chapters! 😳😳
Edited by Mayashika - 5 years ago
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