Part 5: Dheere dheere pyaar ko badhana hai...hadh se guzar jaana hai...you know I was humming this song all the time when I read this update of yours! Fantastic!
Res aaisha aati Hun Deepu ke birthday ke Baad
First of all, extremely sorry for the late response..
Preeti ki shayari toh matlab kamal ki thi.. Kyun na ho, tumne jo likhi thi
Finally they met!!.. But Sameer came directly to her home to meet her.. 2 months bhi wait nahi kar paya bechara..
"Bohot pyaar karte hai tumko sanam.. I was listening this song yesterday.. But the song sequence was written with beautiful balcony romance, that I loved it..
O bai bich mein hi tapak jaati hai hamesha.. SamAina's romance kharab karne ko
Like Preeti said, it's true that Naina is a bit boring but our Sameer is totally romantic
Nanu ne Sameer se sab ugalava hi liya.. Please yaha Nanu aur Naina ki achhe se meeting karva do
Just loved Naina Preeti's conversation about Sameer and how Preeti was teasing her about him.. Aur Sameer and Preeti ki bhi meeting karva dena jaldi se
Naina's gudgudi and Sameer's fantasies, that part was amazing dear
Thanks for the PM
Naina's VO : Us raat jab Sameer meri balcony ke niche aya to hum
dono ko ye ehsaas hua ki hum mil nahi sakte to kya hua? Kum se kum ek
dusre ko dekh kar khush to ho skte hain. Aur bas fir kya tha? Uska mere
ghar vali gali me ana jaise ek aadat si ban gayi. Vo aata, hamara
secret signal deta aur mai kisi na kisi bahane se balcony me chali jati.
Kabhi kapde sukahne ke bahane to kabhi achaar; ya kabhi antenna signal
nahi de raha uska bahana. Vaise humari ye chupke chupke vali prem
kahani sirf balcony tak seemit nahi thi; jab bhi mujhe kisi kaam se
chachiji ya Taiji ke saath market Jana hota mai Sameer ko ek missed
call kr deti thi aur vo jhat se aajata tha. Gharwalo ke kade pehre ke
beecho beech, puri duniya ke samne humne na jaane kitne pyaar bhare pal
jeeye the. Meri Taiji jo vaise to kehti hain ki mai udti chidiya ke par
gin leti lun, ek baar bhi nahi pakad payi ki ek hi ladka bar baar hmare
aas paas kyu nazar aa jata tha, fir chahe vo golgappe ki dukan ho ya
saariyo ki. Hahaha, ji haan koi mauka nahi chodte the hum ek dusre Ko
dekhne ka. Yahi to tha hamara 90 ke dashak ka vo anokha pyaar.
Naina cursed her luck as she glanced through her cupboard and didn't find anything decent to wear. Frilled skirts, loose tops, two year old gaudy suits, neither of it was suitable for an ocassion as special as that day. She was going to meet Sameer's nanaji. How could she wear anything stupid? She had to look her best.
felt anger rising in her veins and to calm herself, she sat down on the
bed holding her head in her hands. Few moments later, she felt a tap on
"Ye le, tere liye", spoke Preeti as she waited for Naina to react. Naina looked up and jumped in excitement.
"Haaa, itna sundar suit, kahan se aya?" Naina asked as she admired the finely embroidered work on the suit.
"Kahan se aya matlab? Mai le kar ayi tere liye. Ye pehan kar ja Nana ji se milne. Vaise to mujhe ye tere birthday par tujhe dena tha. Fir socha birthday ke din dekh lenge kya karna hai , aaj ka din jyada khaas hai" Preeti smiled.
"I love you, I love you, I love you, tu hmesha meri har problem solve kr deti hai, Naina hugged her tightly.
"Bas bas ab tu over acting mat kar . Jab Jijaji se teri shadi hogi na, itna kharcha krwaungi tera yaad rkhegi tu, Preeti said teasingly and hugged her sister tighter.
One night, owing to the fact that taiji was away at one of their
realtives, when Naina had got the opportunity to talk on phone for a
long duration , Sameer had requested her to meet his Nanu. Naina, who
always feared her taiji finding about her and Sammer, declined initially
as getting out of the house alone for a long time would be impossible
for her. But Sameer's repeated requests and the fact that Sameer's nanu
was the only family he had, forced Naina to change her decision. When
she told Preeti about it, she being a smartass, immediately hatched out a
plan. It was decided that when tauji would be out of th city for his
work, Preeti would make a hoax call to taiji's house forcing her to
leave for her mayka in jamnagar. And, it was a lways easy for them to
convince Bela and Anand for going out. Even if taiji would find out that
she was made a fool, the time taken by her to go and return would be
more than enough for Naina and Preeti to meet Nanaji and Sameer. Naina
who dreaded the consequences of such an act, was hushed by Preeti and
they desperately waited for the day when they could put their plan into
As the autorickshaw took a left turn from market road towards Sameer's house,, Naina's heartbeat increased mutlifold. She repeatedly fidgeted with her dupatta earning stern glances from Preeti.
"Naina, tu jijaji ke nanu se milne ja rahi hai, kisi jung par nahi ja rahi. Ye kaisi shakal bana rakhi hai?" Preeti scolded Naina.
"Preeti tu samajh nahi rahi hai. Agar Nanaji ko laga ki mai Sameer ke layak nahi hun to ai kya karungi?" Naina asked nervously.
Naina's stupid question made Preeti slap her forhead in disapproval. "Naina tu ye sawal na kal rat se 100 bar pooch chuki hai aur mai tujhe samjha samjha ke thak gayi. Ab na nanji se milne ke bad hi is bare me bat karenge.
Par Preeti, Naina tried to speak but Preeti kept her hands on her ears forcing Naina to stop her jibber jabber.
As the autorickshaw halted at it's destination, Naina and Preeti got off it. "Preeti, ghar me kisi ko pata to nahi chalega na ki hum Kaamya ke ghar nahi gaye hain? Naina rooted to her spot, asked Preeti.
"Naina, vo sab na hum baad me sochenge. Abhi tu andar chal". Preeti held Naina's hand and took her to the door and
nudged her to ring the bell. Before Naina could gather the courage, the
door flew open and she saw Sameer staring at her with a mischievous
grin. As soon as she saw Sameer, the unknown emotions she has
experienced the other day Sameer came to see her, rushed along. She felt
her stomach flutter and heartbeat increase. She was at loss of words,
"Mujhe pata tha tum hamesha ki tarah time se pehle aa jaogi. Mujhse to
wait hi nahi ho raha tha apni sali sahiba se milne ka", Sameer walked
past Naina breaking her reverie and offered the rose in his hand to
Preeti. Sali ji, bohat suna tha aapke bare me, bohat khushi hui mil kar".
"Jijaji khyal hamare bhi kuch aise hi hain', Preeti accepted the rose and winked at Naina.
"Agar sali jija ka bharat milap ho gaya ho to Nanaji se milne chale?" Naina asked.
"Jijaji aapki madam na jalti bohat hai," Preeti replied and both she and Sameer burst out laughing.
"Ahem ahem, jale mere dushman, aap apni saali ko sambhaliye, mai ja kar aone do do devaro ko sam bhalti hun. Theek hai na?'' Naina asked innocently.
"Ji madam, aapse koi jeet sakta hai bhala. Tum log chalo andar.
Left me pehla kamra mera hai. Mai tab tak Nanaji ko bula kar laata hun
unke kamre se". Sameer said and Naina nodded smilingly.
"Ae pandit, tu rahega to ponga ka ponga hi", Munna hit Pandit on his back.
"Chenu ke bacche kyu maara tune mujhe, tu ruk abhi batata hun tujhe", Pandit said as he rolled up his sleeves.
"Are to aur kya karun. Sameer aaj hume bhabhi se milwa raha hai, teri hone vali dulhan se nahi jo tu subah se shishe ke saamne khada ho kar khud ko sawar raha hai", Munna teased Pandit as he imitated his actions.
hello, hum Sameer bhai ki girlfriend se mil rahe hain, impression to
accha padna hi chahie. Aur vaise bhi, bhabhi ki behan bhi to aa rahi
hai, kya pata uska dil mujhe dekhte hi fisal jae", Pandit said shyly
while Munna erupted into laughter. "Han han, bilkul, Ahmdabad ki saari
ladkiya bas Pandit ji ke intezar me hi to jee rahi hain, haina?" asked
Before Pandit could think of a befitting reply, they both heard someone shout in horror, "Munna, Pandit tum? Tum dono yaha kya kar rahe ho?" As Mundit turned towards the door , they were shocked to the core seeing Naina and Preeti standing in front of them.
"Kya matlab hai hum yaha kya kar rahe hain? Ye hamare bhai ka ghar hai. Tum dono yaha kya kar rahe ho? asked Pandit in return.
"Matlab tum dono jijaji ke best friends ho? Naina, bas yahi bacha tha dekhne ko". Preeti said disapprovingly receiving a light smack from Naina?
"Jijaji?" Pandit scratched his head unable to understand anything. Suddenly realisation dawned on him and he squealed " Naina, tu Sameer ki Naina hai? Munna, sun raha hai na tu?" Pandit asked Munna who was lost in his own thoughts.
"Ji haan, ye hai meri Naina aur tumhari bhabhi jisse milne ke liye tum log itne din se pagal ho rahe the. " Sameer replied excitedly as he entered the room. "Vaise kaisa laga mera surprise?"
"Surprise"? asked Preeti and Pandit together.
"Haan, surprise. Mai jaanta tha ki tum sab log ek hi school me ek hi class me padhe hue ho. Lekin maine jaan boojh kar tum me se kisi ko bhi ek dusre ke bare me nahi bataya ye soch kar ki kitna accha hoga jab tum aise achanak se miloge. Dekho na kaisa ittefaq hai, meri zindagi ke sabse khaas log ek dusre ko pehle se hi jaante hain. Ab batao kaisa laga surprise?" Sameer asked again.
"Bhai, bohat zor se laga", Pandit said in an inaudible tone.
"Bohat accha laga Sameer. Aur mujhe to lagta hai Munna aur Pandit to khushi ke maare speechless hi ho gaye hain, Maniben ko apne saamne achanak se dekh ke" , Naina replied teasing Mundit.
"Maniben, ye kya bol rahi ho Naina tum, mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aa raha", Sameer said clulessly.
bhai kuch nahi, bhabhi na ekdum sahi keh rahi hai. Kya bhabhi kya
purani baatein le kar baith gayi ho, chalo na kuch movie dekhte hain.
Vaise nanaji kahan hain Sameer ?" Munna intervened trying to brush off
"Are rahu ketu bulae aur nanaji na aayen aisa ho sakta hai bhala? Lagta hai hamari bahu time ki bohat paaband hai. Sorry beta vo office se phone aa gaya tha, zaruri tha isilie attend akrna pada" Nanaji said as he entered the room smilingly.
On seeing Nanaji, Naina immediately touched his feet to seek his blessings. " To ye hai mere Sameer ki Naina", Nanu said lovingly as he put his hand on her head to bless her making Naina blush. "Mai jaanta tha mere Sameer ki pasand laakhon me ek hogi. Vaise beta mjhe ek sawal hai jiska jawab mai kitne din se dhundh raha hun lekin kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai" Nanu asked suspiciously.
"Kya nanaji?" Naina asked as Nanji's tone terrified her.
"Tum jaisi ladki ko ye buddhuram kahan se pasand aa gaya?" Nanaji asked and everyone busrt out laughing.
"Nanu, this is not fair. Aap aisa kaise keh sakte ho?" Sameer asked sulkingly.
"Ab beta jo sach hai vo to hai, kyu Rahu Ketu?" Nanu looked at Munna and Pandit.
"Haan haan Nanaji, pata nahi ye Naina ko ye Sameer me dikha kya aisa? " Mundit joined Nanu in teasing Sameer.
"Accha beta, tum log bhi. Preeti tum to meri side ho na?" Sameer asked confidently.
"Sorry jijaji, aaj to main bhi nanaji ki baat se sehmat hun", Preeti joined the bandwagon.
"Preeeti, Munna, Pandit, Nanu, Rohan, Deepika sab Naina ki side aur mai akela. Huh" Sameer sulked again.
tum kaise akele? Mai hun na tumhari side. Aur jab mai tumhari side to
baki sab automatically tumhari taraf" Naina replied sweetly with a hint
of teasing evident in her voice while everyone laughed whole heartedly
at Sameer's kiddish antics.
"Chal bas kar ab rona" Nanu said and hugged Sameer along with Mundit.
looked in awe at the scene unfolding in front of her. She was home
today. When Nanaji blessed her, she felt as if she was the most luckiest
girl on the planet. Her own father had never looked at her in the way
Nanaji had. His eyes reflected pride at his grandson's choice while his
mannerism were filled with happiness on seeing Naina. Munna and Pandit
who teased her by calling her names like teacher ki chamchi and maniben
whenever she got them pubnished , accepted her whole heartedly today in
the same way Deepika and Rohan had. She looked at Sameer with love
filled eyes as she wondered how destiny had its own ways which no one
ever understands. The same vulnerable guy who found solace in her
whenever he cried missing the family he could never have, had given her a
family who loved her without any condition. Seeing Naina engrossed in
thoughts, Preeti nudged her and smiled reassuringly as she knew what
exactly was going on in Naina's mind.
kuch kaam yaad aa gaya, mai bas abhi aya". As nanji left the room,
Naina looked at Sameer questioningly and he replied that he had no idea
what work was Nanu referring to.
"Chalo koi movie dekhte hain saath me. Pandit said excitely as he tried to find a movie casette from a bunch of them lying in the cupboard while Preeti, Sameer and Munna decided where they would sit.
on the other hand, went out of the room to look for Nanaji. As she
finally found him in one of the rooms, she sighed heavily as her guess
was right. Nanu was sitting on the bed with tears in his eyes, holding a
photograph which she assumed it to be of Sameer's Nani.
"Nanu, kya hua?" Naina asked as she sat down on the floor facing Nanaji.
"Naina, tum, vo kuch nahi beta, koi khaas baat nahi bas Sameer ki nani ki yaad a agayi." Nanu wiped his tears.
"Apne to mujhe thodi der pehle beta bulaya tha na ? Aur ab aap mujhse kuch chipa rahe ho. Aap mujhse share kar sakte ho. Mai pakka Sameer ko nahi bataungi" Naina sweared.
made Nanu smile and he decided to bare his heart to Naina." Naina,
Sameer ne apna bachpan jis haalat me bitaya hai vo shayad tumse chipa
nahi hoga. Mai apne aap ko is duniya ka sabse badnaseeb baap maanta hun
ki mai apni beti ko sahi raasta nahi dikha paya. Aur usse bhi jyada dukh
mjhe hamesha ye khalta raha tha ki mai apne naati ko vo khushiya aur
pyaar nahi de paaya jiska vo haqdar tha. Paise ki koi kami nahi beta
lekin mai Sameer ko kabhi uski maa nahi lauta paaya. Aaj bhi jab vo 5
saal ke sameer ka vo adhura bachpan mere saamne ata hai, to mai tut jata
hun. Mera Sameer bohat bhola hai lekin duniya ne uske is bholepan ko
kabhi dekha hi nahi. Ye Munna, Pandit hain na, Mai inhe chahe jitna bhi
daantu, mai jaanta hun ki ye dono mere bacche ka saath kabhi nahi
chodenge. Nanu paused and continued, Pata hai jab Sameer ne mujhe
tumhare baare me bataya mai itna khush hua ki mai tumhe bata nahi sakta.
Mai nahi janta kyu lekin tumhare bare me sun kar hi mujhe aisa laga ki
mere Sameer ke liye tumse behtar ladki aur koi ho hi nahi sakti. Aur aaj
jab mai tumse mila to mera yakeen aur mazboot ho gaya. Aaj agar Sameer
ki nani yaha hoti na to vo mujhse bhi jyada khush hoti bas yahi soch kar
meri aankhen bhar aayi. Lekin mai Sameer ke saamne rona nahi chahta tha
islie yaha aa gaya."
wiped his tears with her hands and said " Nanu, kisne kaha aap Sameer
ko uske hisse ki khushiyan nahi de paaye? Aagar Sameer ki mummy bhi
Sameer ke saath hoti na to bhi vo Sameer ko kabhi utna pyaar nahi de
paati jitna aapne diya hai. Mai maanti hun Sameer bohat aisho aaram me
pala badha hai lekin usne kabhi apne paiso par gurur nahi kiya. Pata hai
kyu? Kyunki usme aapke sanskar hai nanaji. Mai ye bhi jaanti hun ki aaj
tak sabne Sameer ko ek bigda hua ladka samjha hai par us bigde hue
ladke ne kabhi kisi ka dil nahi dikhaya kyunki use kisi ko urt karna
aata hi nahi hai, kyunki uske Nanaji ne uspar kabhi galat sangat ka asar
hone hi nahi diya. Aap sahi maayno me uske mummy aur papa ho Nanaji.
Aapne to SAmeer ki adhure bachpan ko apne pyaar aur bharose se seencha
hai. Islie aap ye khyal aaj aur abhi apne dimaag se nikal do ki aapki
taraf se kabhi bhi koi kami rahi hai. promise kijiye mujhe ki aap aisa
kabhi kuch nahi sochenge. Kijiye promise", Naina put forward her hand
and Nanu obliged.
"Pata hai mujhe hamesha dar lagta tha ki mere baad Sameer ka kya hoga? Lekin aaj mera dar bilkul khatam ho gaya. Mere Sameer ko uska saathi jo mil gaya hai, vo saathi jo uska saath kabhi nahi chodhega aur use hamesha hausla aur vishwas dega. " Nanu said as he lovingly caressed Naina's head.
"Nanu, fir se galat baat". Naina stood up in anger. Ab agar aapne ye sab baatein kari na to mai aapse bolna hi band kar dungi.
"Hahaa, tum bhi sameer ki tarah ziddi ho. Theek hai aaj ke baad se aisi koi baat nahi." Nanu said as he walked towards the cupboard. He took out a saree and handed it to Naina. "Lo beta ye tumhare liye".
"Nanaji , ye main kaise le sakti hun? " Naina replied hesitatingly.
overwhelmed by emotions, nodded in affirmative and hugged Nanu. Sameer,
who had come to look for Naina and Nanu and had listened to their
conversation, wiped his tears and smiled at the bond the duo had
developed in a matter of few minutes. His family was complete, finally !
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