Ariya ss Jajzzba :an emotion part 9 updated 9 july - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
#31
Superb update
Interesting cocept
Sam arjun ko bohuth support karraha hai samjhane ki koshish bhi karraha hai
Rosh ke samja ne se arjun mission join karne ke liye tayar hogaya
Hope wo log milke rosh aur baaki masoom logo ko insaaf dila paye
Cont soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#32
Ariya ke liye ek paur maun ready.                                            could u please add lrl group?but please dont make abhimanyu bad please.riya ko mujrim mat banana.update soon.please pm me
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Posted: 6 years ago
#33
Nice start...
Arjun is really broken..
Loved Arni's convo..
Hope Rosh gets justice soon..
Ok...so team heading to Ambala..Waiting to see what's next!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Arjunpremi

Ariya ke liye ek paur maun ready.                                            could u please add lrl group?but please dont make abhimanyu bad please.riya ko mujrim mat banana.update soon.please pm me



Abhimanyu kon 
Riya ?????? Ko mujrim kyo banaungi yaar 
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Posted: 6 years ago
#35
awesome start
update soon
do pm me
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Posted: 6 years ago
#36
Rajeev khandelwal ke show left right left ke ek kirdar hai abhimanyu.lrl show army based.abhimanyu show ke lead rajveer(rajeev)ka dost tha jo jealous hoke ekbar galti kar diya tha.lekin lrl ff main har writter usko villain banata hai.lekin banda accha hai.jaruri nehi sab ekdum perfect selfless ho.tum ne kaha ki tumhare ff main army hai,to main suggest kiya ki left right left ke charecter ko add karo agar karoge to please abhimanyu ko bura yani villain mat banana.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Arjunpremi

Rajeev khandelwal ke show left right left ke ek kirdar hai abhimanyu.lrl show army based.abhimanyu show ke lead rajveer(rajeev)ka dost tha jo jealous hoke ekbar galti kar diya tha.lekin lrl ff main har writter usko villain banata hai.lekin banda accha hai.jaruri nehi sab ekdum perfect selfless ho.tum ne kaha ki tumhare ff main army hai,to main suggest kiya ki left right left ke charecter ko add karo agar karoge to please abhimanyu ko bura yani villain mat banana.




Hey i know my FAVOURITE show lrl 
Naina singh yudi hudda alekhh omg 
Nahi nahi dont worry me isme abhimanyu ko negative nahi banaungi 
Actually isme abhimanyu character to hai but wo kon hai ye baad me pata chalega 
Edited by NainaSM - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38
Awesome update 
Continue soon
Plzz add me in ur buddy lisy and pm me also arita story

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Posted: 6 years ago
#39
Thank u all for ur response here another part plzz suggest tital 
Wana share i m unable to thank everyone individually
Update mobile se hi karungi to error honge 


Sam and Arjun ...and ETF (chotu shree liza and sakshi)
Shree : wowww yaha ka mousam kitna accha hai naa
Chotu : jab weather itna aacha hai to socch khaana kitna tasty hoga 
Sakshi : chotu tum humesha khaane k baare me hi socchate ho 
Lizaa : kyaa chotu kabhhi to pet ko chhod kar kuch aur soccha karo 
Sam : guys tum sab bhul rahe hoto bata du hum yaha ik case k liye hai ... tafari karane yaa holidays par nahi ... all of u r officers dont forget that 
All sorry sir 
Shree : yaar sakshi mene to soccha tha thoda enjoy karenge 
Sakshi : shree chup nahi to abhi samjhe ya samjhau bhi sunna padega 

Sam to arjun ...
Sam : hume Major vikrant Roy k ghar par abhi jana chahiye yaa pahale guest house chale 
Shree :sir hum na pahale guest house chalate he ye thik rahega haa
Sam gur k dekhta hai ... liza and sakshi smiles 
Shree : sorry sir 
Arjun : hume guest house jakar time waste nahi karna chahiye 
Mai aur sameer Major se milke aate hai tab tak tum sab guest house jao 
Sam : lekin rawte ye log 
Shree: sir hum bhi chalate hai aapke sath 
Lizaa to sakshi .. agar aaj shree chup nahi hua to rathod sir to iski band bajaa denge 
Sakshi :ur right liza
Sameer again shree ko gur k dekhta hai chalo tum sab bhi 



All went to vikrant roy house ...sab bahar hi khade rehte hai sam enter ... its a nice house with garden 
A girl is practicing shooting but she is missing her aim 
Sam to girl excuse me 
Girl : aa gaye tum bhai ne to kaha thaa army man time k punctual hote he aur tum late ho 
Sam . Lekin me 
Girl : kyaaa lekin aab aa hi gaye hoto shoot  karke bhi dikhao me bhi to dekhu tumko shoot karte aata bhi hai yaa 
Sam :dekhiye miss meri 
Girl : haa tumhari hi shooting dekhna hai ... pakado isse ( gun uske hath ne deti ) abb mera muh kya dekh rahe ho chalao 
Sameer gun leta hai and shoot correctly on aim ... wo baki k saare points par correct nishana lagata hai 
Girl : maanaa padega bhaiya ne banda to sahi chunaa he 
Sameer : dekhiye miss me 
Girl : aree haa pata he mujhe salary ki koi tension maat lo me acvhi salary dungi waise shooting k alwa kya karte ho tum 
Arjun ye ETF mai chief hai 
Girl looks confuse what ... tum nishant verma nahi ho 
Arjun ji nahi ye ETF chief sameer rathod hai 
Girl : oops i m sorry to tumne i mean aapne bataya kyo nahi kab se fijhul ki baate kar rahe hai 
Arjun smiles haa wo inko baat karne ki adaat thodi jayada hai naa
Sam gur k dekhta hai try to say but 
Arjun : mam we want to meet Major Roy could u plzz 
Girl sorry sir aap log baithe me abhi bulati hu ... 

Arjun smiles 
Sam : kyaa yaar tu ... kotna bolati hai ladki
Arjun laugh : saale ladki k samne bolati band ... yaar kuch to bolta 
Sam : bolta yaar usne kuch bolane ka mouka hi nahi diyaa 
Arjun : waise she is beautiful pasand aayi ...
Sam : Arjun dekh 
Arjun: kuch nahi to damm it hi bol deta 

Girl suniye aap baithie bhaiya aa rahe he aap andar aayiye sab (abb tak waha ETF k log aa jate he)

Vikrant roy : good morning hand shake with sam and arjun 
Plzz have sit 
Vikrat roy : sorry aapko meri sister ne koi aur samjh liya ...
Sam thats okk
Vikrant : mujhe aap sab yaha kyo aaye ... ye sab pahale hi bata diya gaya hai cohelo sir se meri baat ho chuki hai ...sorry aap log kuch lenge 
Chotu : haa
Arjun : no thanks 
Vikrant  plzzz have breakfast with us ... and very important no formalities plzzz abb sath kaam karna hai too 

Tabhhi 2 girls waha aati hai ... 
Girl1 : bhai breakfast is ready 
Vikrant inse miliye meri sisters ... this is aashu aisha ... and ye 
Sakshi: inko to me janati hu ye riya mukharji hai ... inse mili thi mai 2 saal pahale ...
Riya : excuse me ...
Aisha : riya wait 
Shree : sakshi kuch bhi bolati hai ... unko bura lag gaya shayad 
Sakshi: lekin shree me 
Vikrant: she is right ... ye riya mukharji hi hai ... actually hum ye sab baad me discuss karate hai ... pahale aap log breakfast kar lijiye plzzz 
Aisha : wo breakfast room me hi karegi 
Sakshi : i m sorry mene 
Vikrant: no actually  she is not feeling well 
Sabko ajeeb lagta hai but koi kuch nahi bolta 
Arjun : aap kab se iss case par kaam kar rahe he 
Vikrant last month se ... aapke liye data aur files everything is ready sorry me aap logo ko yaha rehne k liye nahi bol sakta 
Sam : uski koi jaurat nahi hai waise bhi team yaha ... sirf simple investigations par aayi hai ... next time se hum aapke ghar bhi nahi milenge 
Vikrant  : right sameer ... next koi bhi discussion hum mail k through karenge ...ya fir yaha pass me hi ik orphanage hai waha me har sunday ko jata hu to wahi par baat hogi ...
Vikrant give papers to sameer 
Everyone leave house
Arjun i think i forgot my mobile ... me lekar aata hu 
He just enter ...
Riya : lijiye aapka mobile 
Arjun Thank u 
Riya no reply ... 
Arjun feels strange 
Everyone left 




So this is another part ... yes aisha riya ...ETF ka part nahi hai 
So howz it let me know agr boring lag raha hoto me abhi discontinue kar dungi 
Sorry i m unable to send pm 
Plzzz mobile is not working properly plzzz jhel lo itna to 
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow! me first .. congratulations Ariya !!

Oye didu discontinue ki baat kiyi na to aap ko hi mein block maar dungi .. ye concept bht hi accha hai.. something new ha... so jayda socho maat .. baas aap page no story name k saath likh do wahi chalega n date v... n nyc update .. iss me na jayda other shows ka characters maat add karo coz unhe janti nahi huna so.. agar kia v to thora description de dena...Edited by Aayat.ariya14 - 6 years ago