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Posted: 6 years ago
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Its awsome. Update soon.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks for the advice babygirl...well u can call me by my name...manjot or even manu my friends call me by that name
Well lets come to the story now...
I left at vikrant's dialouge
Vikrant:Aditi mujhe pata hai k yeh tumhare liye kitna mushkil hai...maine humesha tumhare moonh se sirf tumhare papa k baare mein suna hai. Bahut pyar karti ho tum unse. Aur woh bhi karte honge. Aur tumne mujhse yeh bhi kaha tha k tumhare papa tumhein sherni bulate hain.. Aur bulayen bhi kyon na tum ho hi sherni
(A TEAR ROLLS DOWN HIS CHEEK)
Par tum aise kamzor nahi pad sakti na. Tum hi toh kehti ho k mushkil waqt mein hi insan ki himmat ka pata chalta hai aur tum aise himmat haar jaogi..hmm. 
(Suddenly aditi starts opening her eyes)
ADITI:Papa,papa aap mat jao papa (she wakes up with a jerk)papa
VIKRANT:Aditi,aditi relax relax hmm
ADITI:Vikrant papa papa chale gye vikrant woh chale gaye mujhe humesha k liye chod kar
VIKRANT:Nahi aditi,tumhare papa to.  humesha tumhare saath hain tumhare dil mein (and he gives her a tight hug)
(aditi also hugs him tight and feels free to cry in front of him. She bursts out.)
VIKRANT:Aditi tum rona chahti ho na,rolo,apna saara dard nikal lo. Behne do aansuon ko. Hmm
(Aditi nods in yes)
(Suddenly a voice came from outside)
VOICE:Aditi,aditi beta kahan hai tu?
(ADITI AND VIKRANT MOVE DOWNSIDE)
VIK:Jee aap koun?
MAN:Beta main mayank aur yeh meri biwi.
Aditi:Yahan kya.. Kya karne aaye hain aap
(the lady caresses aditi's hair)
LADY:Aditi,beta main main teri maa beta tu mujhe mujhe nahi pehchaanti
(Hearing this aditi throws the lady's hand away)
ADITI:Kya bakwaas kar rahi hain aap?Aap meri nahi hain meri mom woh hain(SHE POINTS TOWARDS A PICTURE)
MAYANK VYAS:Nahi beta,hum sach keh rahe hain main tumhara papa aur yeh tumhari maa
ADITI:JUst shut up shut up kuch bhi bol rahe hain aap?
LADY:Tujhe yakin nahi hai na tu tu ruk ek second 
(THE LADY AND THE MAN MOVE TOWARDS MR SHARMA'S ROOM)
ADITI:Arey,waha kahan jaa rahe ho mere papa ka kamra hai woh
(All come inside the lady opens the left drawer and finds out that tojori..)
LADY:beta,sharma saab ne tumhein bataya tha na iske baare mein
ADITI:Haan par aapko kaise pata?
LADY:Bas pata hai..iska password???
(aditi tells her the password)
LADY:Yeh dekh(she shows her some photos)
Ab tujhe yakeen hai na k hum hi tere maa baap hain
ADITI:Yeh toh mere bbachpan ki photographs aur...
MAYANK VYAS: Aur tera har woh saaman jo tera favourite hai woh bhi humare saath...aur yeh dekh tere birthday ki photo main tum aur tumhari maa
(ADITI IS HELL SHOCKED AFTER THIS SHE IS GETTING SHOCK AFTER SHOCK)
LADY:Aditi beta kuch toh bol hmm
(ADITI JUST RUNS AWAY TO HER ROOM)
VIKRANT:Aditi,ruko aditi stop aditi
ADITI:Vikrant mujhe kuch der akele rehna hai plzzz jao yahan se
VIKRANT:Nahi aditi main main tumhein aise chod kar nahi jaunga
 I care for u aditi.tumhein aisi haalat mein chod kar main kahin nahi jaaonga
ADITI:Vikrant tum meri fikr karte ho na toh tumhein meri kasam jao yahan se
(HEARING THIS VIKRANT HAS NO CHOICE BUT TO GO AWAY.)
(ADITI SITS ON FLOOR WITH HER FATHER'S PHOTO)
ADITI:Papa yeh sab kya ho raha hai mere saath. Ek jhatke mein meri life palat gyi papa..woh log mere maa baap nahi aisa ho hi nahi sakta..par woh cheezein..papa I need u papa plzz aa jao na..Aur ajeeb baat hai na papa k itna sab kuch ho gya. Mujhe itna kuch pata chala mujhe rona chahiye na par dekho na aankhon ke aansuon ne bhi behne se jawaab de diya hai. Main rona chahti hoon par aansu nahi aa rahe hain..main kisi ke saamne apna dil kholkar rakhna chahti hoon..par koi nahi hai mere paas
(suddenly a voice comes)
Voice:VIKRANT HAI NA BETA
ADITI:Papa,papa yeh yeh aap hi ho na aap aa gye main main jaanti thi aap aaoge
VOICE:Main toh kahin gya hi nahin tha beta main toh humesha meri adu k saath hoon aur tera vikrant bhi toh hai tere saath..tera har mod par saath dega woh hmm meri sherni adu 


SO GUYS THAT'S IT DO TELL ME HOW WAS IT? And all types of comments are welcomed..
MUjhe yeh bhi bataana k aditi kp aage kya karna chahiye

Bye
Take care
loveinshi thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update many !!πŸ‘πŸΌ waiting for the next one.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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awsome update

love it..

plz continue soon

n plz pm me when you update next time
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Tera Vikrant bhi toh hai Tere saath ... 
Best line ever ... Seriously Kash show mein aisa kuch sunne ko milta 
Jaldi update karna can't wait 
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Posted: 6 years ago
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It is so emotional manjot(I hope I got it right) 
You are an amazing writer. 
Your story made me imagine aditi's helpless and devastated condition and made me cry. I hope both realise their feelings soon. 
Even Mr. Sharma got it right about their relationship. 
Post the next part soon 
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey manu!!That was such an amazing post.I can literally imagine Aditis condition.Loved it.Plz post soonπŸ€—
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Guys,thanks for ur amazing replies...so I know I m vry late but forgive me guys...let's continue..Toh maine chhoda tha k aditi is crying and her father's spirit is guiding her
Then after sometime aditi comes out of her room and sees vikrant sitting on the floor near the wall
ADITI:Vikrant, yahan kyon baithe ho?ghar mein sofa hai
VIKRANT:Aditi,aditi tum theek toh ho na pata hai mujhe kitni chinta ho rahi thi k kahin tumhein kuch ho na jaye
ADITI:Kyon,tum hi toh mujhe sherni bulate ho aur yeh nahin jaante k shernian itni kamzor nahi hoti
Khair woh dono kahan hain?
VIKRANT:You mean tumhare mom dad
ADITI: Main pehle bhi keh chuki hoon woh mere mom dad nahin hain.
VIKRANT:I'm sorry aditi i didn't mean it
ADITI:It's ok vikrant.I know tum jaan boojhkar mujhe hurt kabhi nahin karoge.
(Aditi's real mom dad arrive)
LADY:Aditi,beta bata na kya hua?
MAYANK VYAS:Haan beta bol na.kya socha tune?
VIKRANT:Aditi,isse pehle tum kuch bhi kaho meri baat yaad rakhna k yeh faisla tumhara khud ka ho.kisi pressure mein mat lena faisla
ADITI:Vikrant,main pressure mein koi kaam nahin karti
LADY:Beta,ab mujhse raha nahin jaa raha bata na
ADITI:Dekhiye,maine bahut socha par kuch bhi kehne se pehle aap se yeh puchna chahti hoon k aapne mujhe chod kyon diya?
MAYANK VYAS:Woh beta,woh baat yeh hai k
ADITI:Kya baat hai woh woh kya kar rahe ho?
MAYANK VYAS:Beta woh jab tu 5 saal ki thi tab humein business mein bahut loss hua tha humare paas khane tak k paise nahin the,us waqt humein laga k agar tujge anath ashram mein chod denge toh koi tujhe god le lega aur tujhe ek acchi parvarish dega
ADITI:Aur pyar,uska kya?
LADY:Beta,pyaar k sahare Zindagi nahin jee jati..zindagi jeene k liye paisa chahiye jo us waqt humare paas nahin tha aur hum tujhe bhooka nahin maar sakte the..
ADITI:Toh agar aap logon ne mujhe chod diya tha toh aaj phir se kyon chale aaye?
LADY:Beta,jab sab theek ho gya tha hum tujhe lene aaye the Mr.sharma se par unhonnein mana kar diya yeh keh kar k tu unki beti hai par aaj jab woh nahi rahe toh hum tujhe toot ta hua nahin dekh sake aur chale aaye
ADITI:Oh!toot toh main usi din gyi thi jab mujhe yrh pata chala tha mrs.vyas aur jo bhi ho Aap shayad apni jagah par sahi hon par koi bhi maa baap chahe kitna bhi majboor ho apne bacche ko khud se alag nahin karta. Aap ne apni daleelein di aur maine suni bhi..ab aap ja sakte hain
LADY:Lekin beta,hum majboor the
ADITI:I said leave
MAYANK VYAS:beta
ADITI:Darwaaza wahan hai
LADY:Beta humari baat toh sun
ADITI:I said get out of here
(Both of them go fron there.)
VIKRANT:Aditi,kya tumhein lagta hai k tum ne jo kiya woh sahi tha
ADITI:Pata nahin vikrant,par maine sirf apne papa se kiya promise nibhaya k main zindagi bhar unki beti bankar jeeungi.Aditi Sharma bankar jeeungi.
VIKRANT:Hmmm. I hope yeh decision sahi ho..Tum theek ho na
ADITI:Hmm bilkul theek hun main and agar tum nahib hote na vikrant toh shayad main khud ko sambhal hi nahin paati.Thank u vikrant
VIKRANT:Aditi,main humesha tumhare saath hoon har problem mein tumhara saath doonga main. I promise hmm
ADITI:Hmmm
(TWO WEEKS PAAS LIKE THIS.ADITI JOINS DUTY BACK)
(IN SHAITAAN CHOWKI)
ADITI:ASP ADITI SHARMA reporting back on duty sir.
Vikrant:Aditi,tum itni jaldi I mean kuch time aur le leti
ADITI:Vikrant,zindagi ne mujhe aise zakhm diye jinhein bharne ke liye poori life bhi kam hai.bur thanks to u.main atleast akeli nahi hoon in sab mein.
VIKRANT:Ab woh toh hai main hoon hi aisa k jab main kisi k saath hota hoon koi khud ko akela hi nahin samajhta.(in pov)par pata nahin kyon jab tum mere aas paas nahin hoti tab main khud ko bahut akela mehsoos karta hoon
ADITI:Kahan kho gye vikrant?
Vikrant:Nahin,kahin nahin..haan woh ek case aaya hai chalein
ADITI:Yeah sure
(TILL NIGHT THEY SOLVE THE CASE AND ARE SITTING ON A BENCH AND SUDDENLY ADITI NOTICES A SHOOTING STAR i.e TOOTTA TARA)
ADITI:Vikrant,woh dekho,tootta tara
VIKRANT:Vishwas karti ho ismein?
ADITI:Main?nahin nahin bilkul nahi.tum?
VIKRANT:Mujhe toh tum jaanti hi ho.not at all
ADITI:Haan
(BOTH FACE IN OPPOSITE DIRECTION AND JOIN HANDS TO PRAY)
VIKRANT(IN POV):Maine jhooth kaha k main tootte tare mein nahi yakin rakhta.par yes i do believe..god meri aditi ko humesha khush rakhna and mujhe himmat dena k main har mushkil mein uska saath de sakoon.
ADITI(IN POV):Bhagwaan aap toh jaante hi ho k main is mein kitna vishwas karti hoon. Bas itna maangoongi k mere vikrant ko khush rakhna.aur give me the strmgth k main humesha uska saath de sakoon.usne bahut kiya hai mere liye god.
(BOTH OF THEM OPEN EYES AND FACE EACH OTHER)
BOTH TOGETHER:Kya maanga?? 
They share a laugh
Again,BOTH TOGETHER:Tumhari khushi.
Both. AGAIN SHARE A LAUGH.

SO GUYS,THAT'S IT..IN NEXT CHAPTER THAT IS THE FINAL CHAPTER SOMETHING INTERESTING IS WAITING
..plzz review



Take care. 
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GOOD BYE




AMIKA14 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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You cant leave me like that manu!!!Gosh I am dying to know what happened next.Plz post soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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end part kitna cute tha..
pata hai K2H2 meri favorite movie hai..πŸ˜‰