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Posted: 6 years ago
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Guys this is my first fanfiction on viditi do comment how is it
I would first like to give a character sketch:
Vikrant:A rough and tough cop jo pichle 10 saalon se police department mein jhak nahi maar raha hai pehle bhooton mein believe nahi karta but then yes
ADITY:A sweet but sharp ASP.Able to see ghosts and tries to help out vikrant always and,also helps...A sweet adu of her dad
SURESH SIR
MR SUDHEER SHARMA :Adity's dad
VEDIKA AND MAYANK VYAS: Inke baare mein baad mein bataungi

CHAPTER 1:
(A sweet morning,aditi and vikrant in shaitaan chowki reading case files)
VIK: Vaise Aditi main na kabhi kabhi sochta hoon k tumhein jo yeh aatmaein dikhti hain,uske baad tum inmein bada busy ho jati ho...mujhe darr hai k kahin agar tumne shaadi k liye bhi ek aatma ko pasand kiya toh tumhare dad bechare kya karenge?😆😆
ADITI: Bad joke
Vikrant
😡
VIK:Arey its not a joke I am serious...
(TABHI ADITI KA PHONE BAJTA HAI CALLER ID PE USKE PAPA KA NAAM HAI)
ADITI: Papa ka call..😛
Hello papa,(aawaz kisi aur ki hoti hai)oh I am sorry...papa kahan and unka phone aapke paas kaise?...(woh kuch kehta hai aur aditi ka phone uske haath se gir jaata hai)
                            (HOSPITAL SCENE)
                             (AT RECEPTION) 
ADITI BAHUT GHABRAYI HUI HAI..VIKRANT BHI SAATH HAI DARA HUA
ADITI:Pa..pa papa kahan hain??
RECEPTIONIST:Jee...kiske papa??
VIKRANT:Humara matlab hai Mr.Sudheer sharma,unka accident hua tha...humein phone  aaya tha
RECEPTIONIST:OH!woh ICU mein hain...aage se right
VIK:Thanku so much
(ADITI IS JUST GETTING MAD WOH LOGON SE TAKRATI HUI ICU TAK PAHUNCHTI HAI)
(OPERATION CHAL RAHA HOTA HAI...)
VIK:Aditi relax,kuch nahi hoga tumhare dad ko
ADITI:Agar unnhe k..kuch..kuch ho gggaya toh main mar jaungi vikrant unke bina koi nahi hai mera... 
(TABHI DOCTOR BAAHAR AATE HAIN)
ADITI:Doctor,papa kaise hain??
DOCTOR:Dekhiye,hum poori koshish kar rahe hain,par chances bahut kam hain..and kya aap aditi hain?
ADITI:J..jee
DOCTOR:dekhiye,woh aapka naam pukar rahe hain hum nahi jaante  k hum unhein bacha payenge ya nahi..aapko unse mil lena chahiye..
(VIKRANT AUR ADITI ANDAR JAATE HAIN)
ADITI:Papa...papa kuch nahi aapko aapki strong adu aa gayi hai na kuch nahi hoga aapko(SHE KISSES HIS HAND)
MR.SHARMA:Aaaddu..adu beta mmer..meri bba..baat dhy..an..dhyan se sun...
Tu puchti thi na k tu koun hai kiski beti hai toh aaj main tujhe tere sare sawalon ke jawaab dunga
ADITI:Nahi papa,mujhe kuch nahi jaan na main aapki beti thi hoon aur humesha rahoongi
MR SHARMA:Nahi beta,aaj mujhe bolne de..humare ghar mein mere kamre mein lef...left dra..drawe...drawer ke neeche ek..ek ti..ti..tijori hai..us..uska..uska password a..a..adu hai..us..usmein tere saare sawalon k...ke jawaab hain...dekhlena aur appne asli maa baap kke pppaas Chale jaana beta...
(AND HE LEAVES ADU ALONE IN THE WORLD)
ADITY:Papa,papa,papaaa aap aise nahi jaa sakte papa utho na papa plzz utho papa,abhi toh aapko meri shaadi bhi karwani hai mere saath jhagde bhi karne hain..utho na plzz papaaa 
VIK:Ad...Aditi,woh..woh jaa chuje hain
ADITI Nahi,unhe kuch nahi hua hai,abhi uthenge maine itne dinon se ph..phone..phone nahi kiya na papa ko toh naaraz hain,utho na papa plzzz (SHE CRIES BADLY)
(YEH DEKH KAR VIKRANT KI AANKH SE BHI AANSU GIRTA HAI..WOH SOCHTA HAI K KYON WOH ADITI KO ROTA NAHI DEKH SAKTA)


A/N:SO GUYS,how was the chappy?I know,a bit bad but agle mein high voltage drama dungi pakka yeh dukh k badal zyada der tak nahi rahenge...Hmmm...so bye... I'll try to post soon

CHAPTER 2 
(All the relatives have reached Aditi's house to pay last respect to her father) 
(Aditi is sitting beside her dad's body crying badly) 
LADY: Aditi beta ab bas kar jaane wale ko koun rok sakta hai 
ADITI: Kahin nahi gye hain mere papa...woh mujhse naaraz hain kyon...kyon..ki main..main unhe har roz phone...phone nahi karti thi na isliye...par..par ab i promise u papa aap...aap..aapko har roz phone karoongi...uth jao na plzz
LADY:Aditi,bhaisaab jaa chuke hain..
ADITI:NAHI...jhooth bol rhi hain aap...
(TABHI VIK AND SURESH SIR AATE HAIN)
SURESH SIR:Vikrant aditi sadme mein hai woh yeh accept hi nahi kar paa rahi k uske papa jaa chuke hain...tum sambhalo use
VIK: Jee sir
(HE GOES NEAR ADITI AND SITS)
VIKRANT: Aditi sambhalo khud ko tum aise kamzor nahi pad sakti 
ADITI:Vik...vikrant accha hua tum aa gye dekh...dekho na papa uth nahi rhe tum sabko acche se samjhate ho na toh pap...papa ko bhi samjhao na plzzz uthne ko bol..bolo na unhe
VIK: Aditi woh jaa chuke hain kabhi nahi uthenge woh
ADITI:Nahi,tum jhooth bol rhe ho(she rushes towards suresh sir)
ADITI:Sir,aap...aap toh boliye na papa ko k..kk uthein I...I promise main kabhi unhein tang nahi karoongi...
SURESH SIR: Aditi,yeh sach hai tumhare  papa humesha k liye jaa chuke hain
ADITI:Nahi,nahi aap aap sab jhooth bol rahe hain aap log mil..mil..mile hue ho papa k saath hai na...Par main bhi aditi hoon haar nahi manoongi...
(SHE MOVES BACK TO HER FATHER)
ADITI:Papa ab bhut ho gya utho utho naaa
(She gets out of control vikrant tries to control her but when evrything fails,he slaps her hard)
VIKRANT(shouts):Aditi,sambhalo khud ko woh jaa chuke hain kabhi laut kar nahi aayenge
(HEARING THIS ADITI JUSH BURSTS OUT CRYING AND HUGS VIKRANT TIGHTLY SHE SHOUTS PAPA PAPA AGAIN AND FAINTS)
VIKRANT:Aditi...aditi utho
(VIKRANT PICKS HER IN BRIDAL STYLE AND TAKES HER TO HER BEDROOM. Suresh sir calls doctor)
DOCTOR:Dekhiye ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai..stress ki wajah se chakkar aa gya hai jald hosh aa jayega
VIKRANT:Thanks doctor 
(He sits besides aditi's bed)
VIKRANT:I know aditi k yegh





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All the best 
Post soon 
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Seems interesting!
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intresting..

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Waiting for your update yaar,so update soonest
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Interesting lag raha hai jaldi update karna 
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It was amazing Viditifan!😭😊Do continue...👏
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quite an interesting start 
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Interesting hai bhaut jaldi update karna
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Bechari Aditi,I'm feeling bad for her,but happy coz tumne jaldi update kia aise hi jaldi se next part bhi update karo,mujhe bhi janna hai Aditi k real parents k bare me.
Next part post karne k liye 'post reply' pr click kar k usme likh k post karna,aise edit karne ki wjh se like ni pate.