Anjaan FF: Yaadein (COMPLETED) - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11
I cant wait. It is so amazing. Just update ASAP.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update!! Vik and guru ki 1st meeting kafi funny thi..🤣
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I just love guru!!!!!SIR JAB EK GHANTE MEIN KUCH NAHI HUA TOH DO GHATE MEIN GHANTA KUCH KAR PAUNGA🤣
SUPERRR SE UPARRR POST BABYGIRL
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi everyone, sabse pehle ek baat batani hai k last part me Guru ki "sir jab ek ghante me kuch ni kia toh do ghante me ghanta kuch yaad ayega", woh maine exam dete time sochi. Meri halat Guru jaisi ho gyi thi,ek question ka answer aa hi ni rha tha,but thanks to god time pr answer aa gya aur sare exam ache se ho gye aur ab mai free hu ðŸ˜ƒ.
Ok toh ab next part.
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Chapter-3
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(11:44 pm)
(Life care hospital)
(OT ki light band hoti hai aur Doctors bahar aate hai and Vikrant turant unke pass jata hai)
Vikrant: Doctor Guru I mean Advik kaisa hai?
Doctor: actually operation toh successful raha but...
Vikrant: but?
Doctor: dekhiye uske sir pr kafi gehri chot lagi hai. Abhi unhe 12 ghante observation pr rakhna hoga,agr 12 ghanto me unhe hosh aa gya toh thik wrna...
Vikrant: warna?
Doctor: warna ya toh wo coma me chale jayenge ya fir...dekhiye mai aapko koi jhooti ummeed ni dena chahta but Advik k theek hone ki ummeed kum hi rakhiye aur khud ko buri khabar k liye prepare kar lijiye waise bhi aise cases me patients ka bachne k chances kum hi hote hai like only 1% ya 2%.
Vikrant (khud ko sambhalte hue):kya mai use dekh sakta hu? 
Doctor: thodi der me hum usse ICU me bharti kar denge tab aap uske pass baith skte hai,baatein bhi kar sakte hai but wo apko sun ni payega.
Vikrant: hmmm...
(11:56 pm)
(ICU)
Vikrant(teary voice): Abe uth kitna soyega? Doctors bhi keh rhe hai k isse jaldi uthao aur apne sath le jao,woh bhi pareshaan hai tujhse...unhone ye bhi kaha ki tu mujhe ni sun sakta but mai janta hu ki tu meri har baat sunta hai bas manta ni but please iss baar maan le na meri baat bhai. Uth ja.
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(Aditi and Vikrant case solve karne ke liye ek bungalow pr jane k liye nikalte hai)
Vikrant: kamaal hai mai last ten years se Suresh sir aur unki family ko janta hu,unki wife and bade bete Kartik se mila hu,arre mila kya hu Kartik ko Police department join karnse pehle meri advice chaiye thi toh woh bhi di thi but ye Advik k baare me maine kabhi ni suna.
Aditi: ha toh kehte hai na jab jisse milna likha hota hai tabhi hum usse milte hai.
Vikrant: waise toh mujhe woh  sir ka beta lagta hi ni 
Aditi: kyu?
Vikrant: sir,sir ki wife yani Shobha ma'am & kartik sab kitne elegant and descent hai aur Advik ek number ka chichora
Aditi: chichora?
Vikrant: aur kya kitna flirt kar rha tha tumse aur tum bhi mere jokes becar lagta hai but uske PJs pr khub has rhi thi
Aditi: pehli baat to ye ki sharam karo bacche se jal rahe ho,dusri baat wo PJs ni the & the most important thing mai beautiful hu toh log flirt to karenge.(last line full attitude k sath kaha)
Vikrant: uff ye attitude.
(Asha Bungalow, Mumbai)
Rohit:abe konse bhoot bangale me le aya be?
Guru: abe bhoot bangla ni hai chal chup chaap
Rohit: bhai dosti k time ek contract sign karwana chahiye tha k sath sirf sundar jagah pr jayenge &girl hostel ka bahana bana k dost ko bhoot bangale pr ni layenge.
Guru: sale pehle toh bhoot bhoot karna bandh kar darr lagta hai &chinta mat kar agar yeh bhoot female hui toh teri setting karwa dunga ðŸ˜†
Rohit: sale tu dost to hai ni
Guru: ab jana tune.
Rohit: abe koi aa gya,chup jaa
Guru: commissioner ka beta hu,aane do jo ata hai
Rohit:bhoot hua toh
Guru: bhoot ambani ka reshtedaar hai joh gaadi me ayega? Kon hai be
Vikrant (gaadi se nikalte hue): hum hai be
Aditi: Vikrant behave
Guru: hi Aditi
Vikrant: aye ye haye haye baad me karna pehle ye bata tu yaha kya kar rha hai?
Guru: meri marzi mai chahe jaha jau.
Vikrant: oye ye mat samjh k commissioner ka bera hai toh kuch bhi karega agar kuch gadbad ki toh mujhse bura koi ni hoga tere liye.
Guru: ha toh tum bhi police me ho toh iska ye matlab ni k kuch bhi ilzaam lagaoge and
(Beep beeep beeep beeep)
Vikrant: ye kya awaz hai? Kya hai tere bag me dikha
Guru: kuch ni hai
Vikrant: kuch ni hai toh dikha na
Guru: pehle search warrant lao
Vikrant: oye akalmand search warrant ghar check karne k liye hota hai aur tu dikha rha hai ya sir ko phone karu?
Guru: dekho mere baap ki hool mat do mujhe
Vikrant: abe oye mai...
Aditi v Vikrant ek minute,Guru agar bag me kuch ni hai toh dikha do na,tum jab tk dikhaoge ni ye aise hi karega,to dikhao
Guru: thik hai Aditi tum keh rhi ho toh dikhta hu. Sikho Aditi se k kaise baat karte hai
Vikrant: gyaan ni bag dikha
Guru: ye tha 
(Beep beeep beep)
Vikrant: chote bacho ka khilona,tu isse khelta hai
Guru: kyu ispe koi naya kanoon bana hai jo maine tod dia
Vikrant: dekh...
Aditi: Vikrant andar koi hai
Guru: ha koi toh hai
Rohit: Guru andar koi kaise hoga? Ghar pr taala laga hai.
Vikrant: Aditi kyu sure hai mai janta hu but tu kyu keh rha hai k andar koi hai?
Guru: ummm...I trust Aditi
Vikrant: andar chalo ab,tum dono bhi kyu I don't trust you
Rohit: but taala
(Dishkiyaoon)
Rohit:oh ha gun se tala...dekha hai shows me
Vikrant: chalo
(Guru bag se ek chashma nikalta hai aur pehenta hai)
Vikrant: ghar k andar googles?
Rohit:bhai mana k tu college ka most fashionable banda hai but ye toh too much ho gya
Guru: mai chahe ye karu,mai chahe woh karu,mai chahe joh karu meri marzi (ditto Govinda k song ki trh sing kar k)
Aditi: tum teeno ka ho jaye to aa jana mai talashi lene jaa rhi hu.
Vikrant: tum dono yhi ruko,hilna mat wrna
Rohit: tale k baad humara number, haina?
Vikrant: correct
(Viditi k jane k baad)
Guru:oye tu yhi ruk mai aya abhi
Rohit:akele ni ni,mai tere sath chalunga
Guru: maro fir aur kya,chal
(Talashi k doraan Aditi ko rocking chair pr ek aurat dikhti hai,mtlb aatma dikhti hai but Aditi ko ye maloom ni hota ki uske alwa koi aur bhi uss aatma ko dekh rha hai)
Guru: Aditi ko dekh k lagta hai ki use wo spirit dikh rhi hai,yani wo aur bhi bina kisi gadget k but how?
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Kaisa tha?
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Man!!!That was super funny!!🤣
FIRST:YOU ARE NOT THE ONLY ONE BABYGIRL...I TOO HAVE THE SAME THOUGHT DURING EXAMS.
SECOND:ROHIT AND HIS CONTRACT...AND GURU FEMALE BHOOT SETTING🤣
THIRD:ADU AND VIKRANTS CONVO...AND VIKRANTS BANDOOK DIKHAKE SCARE KARNA.
PLZ POST THE NEXT PART SOON
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice one babygirl!! Do continue soon😛
Aur exams ye khayal mujhe bhi aate te..🤣
Edited by loveinshi - 6 years ago
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Just read your ff after long tiring day the comic punches just made it wonderful 
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Update soon... it's awsome
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Thanks for your support everyone.
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Chapter-4
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(Hospital)
(Present time)
Vikrant: Guru uth na ab sale,kitna soyega? Bohot yaad aa rhi hai tere songs ki,technology se bhari bakwaass ki,even teri flirting bhi. Please uth na bhai.
(Aditi ka phone call Vik ko; phone conversation)
Aditi: Vikrant Guru kaisa hai ab?
Vikrant: Doctor ne use observation pr rakha hai aur kaha hai ki...(now in teary voice)...ki agar use 12 hrs me hosh ni aya toh woh...(finally broke down)
Aditi: Vikrant plz sambhalo khud ko dekho mai do ghante baad ki flight se Mumbai aa rhi hu,ok. And humare Guru ko kuch ni hoga,hum usse kuch ni hone denge.
Vikrant: mai toot rha hu Aditi plz jaldi aao.
(Aditi's POV & flashback)
Aditi: kya ho hai tumhe Guru,tum toh shant rehne se door bhagte the fir aaj yun shant padhe ho. Jaldi utho,mere waha aane se pehle uth jana chahiye,wrna bohot marungi tujhe.
(Flashback)
(Shaitan chowki)
Aditi enters.)
Guru: Aditi bachao mujhe
Aditi: kya hua?
Guru: dekho na ACP hoke bhi Vikrant meri ragging kar rha hai
Aditi: hawww...Vikrant!!
Vikrant: arre ni ye jhoot bol rha hai,pata hai abhi iski ek GF ka phone aya usne milne bulaya toh ye bola ki iske dost Vikrant ko fever hai toh ye uske sath hai,wo ladki bhi shaadi (smart) nikli temperature pucha toh bola 401,401!! hai aur ICU me le ja rhe hai. Abe tune meri body ka temperature bataya ya meri chita ka? Kyu ki 401 pr bande ko ICU ni morgue me le jate hai,ruk tu pitega
Guru(Aditi k kandhe pr hath rakh k) Aditi bachao na
Vikrant: ayye hath hata hath hata
(Vikrant & Guru ka tom & jerry game shuru ho jata hai)
(Present time)
(Hospital, Mumbai)
Doctor: do ghante me bhi koi sudhaar ni hua
Vikrant: abhi ni hua but 12 ghante se pehle uth jayega,mujhe pura bharosa hai
Doctor: well chances are low but I hope you are right.
(Flashback)
(Victim k ghar)
Vikrant: ma'am kya koi aisa shaqks aya tha Anil ki maut se pehle jo thoda ajeeb ho
Sudha: ji ha college ka student aya tha ek,pehli baar dekha tha Anil aur maine use,baar baar kisi Priya k bare me pooch rha tha,Anil toh bohot gusse me aa gye the,dhakke maar k nikala tha use
Aditi: kon tha woh? Kuch pata hai apko?
Sudha: ha,usne khud bataya tha, JKV college ka Advik dutt,mujhe ache se yaad hai
Vikrant: Aditi,Advik Dutt.
(JKV college)
Vikrant: oye ladke ye Advik kaha hai?
Boy: kon Advik dude?
Aditi: Guru,Guru kaha hai?
Boy: arre ye dhun k piche jao aur jaha college ki sab girls ho wahin Guru hoga.
Vikrant: dekha maine kaha tha chichora hai
Aditi: dhundh le pehle use 
(Viditi ko Guru canteen me guitar pr gata maila,aur sab girls ne use ghera hua tha)
Guru: woh dekhne me kaisi seedhi saadhi lagti,hai bolti ki woh toh kuch ni samajh ti andar se kitni tez hai...
(Vik Adu ko dekhta hai)
Guru: kabhi ajeeb si kabhi haseen lagti,philosophy ka craze hai,kehti hai ye ek phase hai...
(After song ends)
Vikrant: oye Anil se kyu mila tha?
Guru: kon Anil?
Vikrant: dekh jhoot bola toh bohot marunga
Aditi: Vikrant kya hai,mujhe baat karne do
Guru: Aditi, mujhe iss baare me kisi se baat ni karni
Vikrant: acha ruk
(Vikrant Suresh ko call karke sab batata hai aur phir suresh  Guru se baat karta hai)
Guru: yaar Dad apko ni lgta ki like once in a moon apko apne andar ki baapta thodi dikhani chahiye
Suresh: aay baapta k bache,Vikrant & aditi k sath cooperate kr wrna abhi jail me daal dunga
Guru: usse pehle mai home minister ko phone kr dunga 
Vikrant: sir ye Home minister ko bhi janta hai,mtlb aapne iske bare me ni bataya toh chalo samjh ata hai,but aapne ye bhi ni bataya
Suresh: Vikrant phone Guru ko do
Vikrant: le
Suresh: tere pass home minister ka number kaha se aya?
Guru: HM mtlb Maa,apki patni,jiski ghar pr sabse jada chalti hai,aur unhe subah jagne k baad aur sone se pehle mera super handsome face dekhna hota hai,agar ni dekha toh aap kisi ko muh dikhane layak ni rahoge,samjhe na?
Suresh: Vikrant ko do phone
Vikrant: yes sir
Suresh: usse mai ghar pr baat kar lunga,tum log dura kuch dhundo,thik? Jai hind.
Vikrant: jai hind sir.
Guru: ho gya,mere baap ki hool de rhe the. Aditi ye lo (gives her a chit)
(Uss chit pr ek address aur time likha hota hai jaha Guru usse milna chahta hai)
Aditi: theek hai
Guru: bye
Aditi: bye
Vikrant: mai to dikhta hi ni hu kisi ko
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So guys kaisa laga. Like & comment plz.
Next chapter me no comedy,emotional bhi toh hona chahiye na jara.
Edited by Babygirl728 - 6 years ago
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I mean i m speechless... it was sooo awsome.. dialogues are laa jawab🤣