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Babygirl728

@Babygirl728

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

Hi everyone,ye FF Aditi & Vikrant ki Guru se first meeting par based hai. Waise jise ni pata ki ye Guru kon hai,toh chota sa description Guru ka:- Guru ek 20 yr old college boy hai,jisne ek case me Viditi ki help ki thi (uss case k bare me ye FF hai) and then Aditi ne use team ka part banwa liya. Guru ek technology genius hai,wo new gadgets banata hai jisse atmao ko dekha ja sake & unhe catch kia jaa saki. Guru uska real name ni blki college k boys ne use ye naam dia hai coz woh tech expert and flirt expert hai,college ki sab girls uski diwani hai. Guru ko Aditi pr bohot bada crush hai,and Vikrant isi wjh se usse chidhta hai & Guru Vikrant se chidhta hai. Vikrant & Guru tom & Jerry k jaise hai. Guru is mazedaar character hai & puri trh se mera imaginary character hai. Aur janna hai toh "Viditi SS: Jealously" read kare.
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AMIKA14

@AMIKA14

Senior Member

Posted: 6 years ago

YEAH!!!!GURU!!!PLZ POST SOON!CANT WAIT FOR A JEALOUS VIKRANT😉

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Dishi

@TunesOfHeart

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+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

Update plzzz

Amazing concept!!

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Babygirl728

@Babygirl728

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

Character sketch :-

Vikrant: ACP hai,jaisa show me hai waisa hi but ab Aditi se pyaar karta hai but confess ni kia & Aditi ki feelings se unaware hai.

Aditi: ASP hai,show ki hi trh hai,Vik se pyaar karti hai aur uski feelings k bare me bhi janti hai but chahti hai k Vik confess kare.

Guru: commissioner Suresh Dutt ka beta hai,Advik (Aditi+Vikrant) naam hai but sab use Guru bulate except his father. Atmao ko dekhne aur unhe pakadne k liye gadgets banata hai. Aditi pr bada wala crush hai.

Suresh dutt: Guru's father,usse sudharna chahte hai isi liye Aditi ki request pr Guru ko unki team join karne di.

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Guys raat me first chapter post karungi.

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siya

@loveinshi

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 6 years ago

Mujhe Advik pasand Aya babygirl 😛 aur ViDiti ki development bhi acchi Hai😛

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Shristhi19

@Shristhi19

Senior Member

Posted: 6 years ago

Hey it is amazing

I seriously loved guru's character and now he is Suresh sir's son. Best part.

It's crazy thing, but I like guru and vikrant's silly talks more than any other of vikrant's conversation, especially when both the boys are talk on the topic -"aditi's love interest "

Post soon

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Babygirl728

@Babygirl728

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

Chapter 1

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(Present Time)

(Life care hospital, Mumbai)

(9:00 pm)

Vikrant: doctor doctor jaldi ayi dekhiye iss ko kitni chot aayi hai,arre koi doctor ko bulao (chillate hue)

Doctor: kya hua isse? Ye toh police case lagta hai,pehle police ko bulana hoga

Vikrant (angry & shouting): abe aaye mai ACP hu,ye bhai hai mera,5th floor se gira hai yeh,ilaz kar iska,abhi

Doctor: ha ha jaldi ise OT me le chalo sir aap zara form bhar denge tab tak

Vikrant: ilaz kar uska jake

(Flashback)

Case k time Guru ek problem me fasa aur Aditi & Vik ne usse batchaya)

Guru: thanks tum dono ne batcha liya

Vikrant: are tu jb bhi kisi problem me fasega toh mujhe apne pass payega

Guru: problem door karne k liye,haina?

Vikrant: abe ni problem ko badhane k liye (Vikrant laughs)

(Flashback ends)

(Present)

Aditi ka Vik ko call aya)

Aditi: ye kya Vikrant jab mai Delhi aa rhi thi tb toh bol rhe the k din me chaar baar call karunga but ab dekho mera call hi ni pick kar rhe & Guru bhi tumhari trh ho gya hai,kab se call kar rhi hu aur wo...oh my god tum dono jhagad toh ni rhe na?

Vikrant (rote hue): Aditi

Aditi: Vikrant kya hua,are you ok?

Vikrant: Guru

Aditi: kya hua Guru ko?

Vikrant: hum case k liye,ek construction building me gye the & waha ek spirit ne usse 5th floor se gira dia

Aditi: woh kahan hai abhi?

Vikrant: OT me,Aditi mai wahi tha aur usse ni bacha paya mai,kuch ni kar paya

Aditi: Vikrant relax,dekho mai kal ki first flight se aati hu. Waise tumne Suresh sir & ma'am ko bataya?

Vikrant: woh Kolkata gaye hai ek shadi me toh ane me time lagega but plz jaldi aao please.

Aditi: ha mai aati hu.

Nurse: excuse me sir

Vikrant (khudko sambhalte hue& rona band kar k): Aditi nurse ayi hai,form fill karna hoga toh,jana hoga. Tum jaldi aao

Aditi: ha Vikrant, take care.

(Phone cut kar dete hai dono)

Nurse: ye form bhar dijiye plz

Vikrant: ha,Guru kaisa hai?

Nurse: operation chal rha toh kuch keh ni sakte

Vikrant: usse kuch ni hona chahiye ye baat doctor ko yaad dila dijiye. Ye lijiye fill kar dia

Nurse: sir relationship bhi batani hogi,wo apka kya lagta hai

Vikrant: bhai hai mera

Nurse: but aap singhal woh Advik Dutt,cousin hai?

Vikrant: ni muh bola aur dil ka mana. Khoon ka rishta ni but dil ka gehra rishta hai humara.

(Tabhi ek nurse OT se ati hai)

Vikrant: nurse kaisa hai Guru?

Nurse: woh unka blood group kya hai?

Vikrant: ummm...ha yaad aya O positive

Nurse: oh no

Vikrant: kya hua?

Nurse: woh unka kafi blood loss hua hai,khoon chadhana hoga

Vikrant: toh chadhaiye

Nurse: but humare blood bank me O+ blood group ka blood ni hai

Vikrant: arre toh mera blood le lijiye Guru k liye,mai O+ hu.

Nurse: ok chaliye

In Vik's mind: sale ab toh humara khoon ka rishta ho gya hai,ab toh thik ho jaa.

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So everyone kaisa tha ye chapter? Comments kar k batao

And next part me mai viditi & Guru ki first meeting k bare me bataungi.

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siya

@loveinshi

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 6 years ago

Nice chapter babygirl!! Thik to hoga na guru?😕

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AMIKA14

@AMIKA14

Senior Member

Posted: 6 years ago

Loved it babygirl!!!Guru ko thik karna afterall Vikrant aur Guru toh aab khoon ke rishte se bhi baandh gaye🤗😭

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Babygirl728

@Babygirl728

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#10

Hi guys thanks for the support, here is the part.

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Chapter-2

(Flashback)

(Suresh sir apne cabin me jate hai & waha ek surprise unka wait kar rha hai)

Suresh: tum? Yaha kyu aye?

Guru: Desai batao

Desai: sir wo ye 150 ki speed se car drive kar rhe the

Suresh: what? 150?

Guru: ha but kisi ko chot ni lagi,150 ki speed pr bhi ni,kyu Desai?

Desai: ha sir wo toh hai

Suresh: jao yaha se Desai

(Desai jata hai)

Suresh:kyu aye ho,wait tumhara to exam tha gye ni?

Guru: gya tha,de ke aa gya

Suresh: abhi exam time over hone me 1 &1/2 hours left hai,itni jaldi exam kar dia

Guru: ye hi same cheez examiner bhi bola,toh maine usko kaha "sir jb ek ghante me kuch ni hua toh do gante me kya ghanta mai kuch kar paunga" hahahaha...

Suresh: usne tumhe aane dia?

Guru: pure college me hool di hai ki "maine commissioner ko apna baap rakha hai"

Suresh: kya kaha?

Guru: I mean mera baap commissioner hai ye pure college ko pata hai.

Suresh: nikal warna rash driving k liye andar kar dunga

Guru: yaar kaise baap ho? Apne bete ko andar karoge,sharam karo zara

Suresh: out now

(Guru bahar jate waqt kisi se takra k gir jata hai)

Guru: oye ye deewar kisne khadi ki darwaje k saamne?

Vikrant: abe deewar ni insaan hu

Guru: bhai body me iron hona chahiye na ki puri body hi iron ki bana kr Iron man banna chahiye

Vikrant: oye mai iron ka ni tu paper ka hai

Aditi: Vikrant kya tum bhi kahin bhi shuru ho jate ho

Guru to Aditi: hi I'm Advik,but pyaar se sab mujhe Guru kehte hai,aiwaye apke commissioner yani mere baap k

Aditi: mai Aditi

Guru: such a cute name just like you

Aditi: thanks

Guru: dad ne apke bare me kafi bataya hai

Vikrant: aur mere bare me?

Guru: mai achi cheeze sunta hu sirf

Vikrant: sir ne tumhare bare kuch ni bataya hume,sir ye?

Suresh: ye batane wali cheez ni

Guru to Aditi: dekha isi liye inki tarraki ni hoti,bad sense of humor. Meri dekho har saal hoti hai

Vikrant: har saal kaise?

Guru: ek minute,Aditi pucho na kaise

Aditi: kaise?

Guru: har saal naye class me jata hu na,to hui na tarraki meri

Aditi: hahahaha...good one Guru

Vikrant (in a very low voice): PJ mara

(Vikku jealous ho gya 😆)

Suresh: acha ab tum jao yaha se

Guru: ha ja rha hu,BTW exam postpone ho gya hai,wo sab mai masti kar rha tha.

Suresh: Advik tum...

Guru: sorry, bye Aditi

(Guru waha se bhaag gya)

(Flashback ends)

(Present: 10:38 pm)

Nurse: sir aap kaha kho gye uthiye

Vikrant: oh sorry,mai kuch soch rha tha

Nurse: ok,mai woh pichle 10 minutes se apko awaz de rhi thi apne suna ni toh darr gyi k weakness ki wjh se toh...anyways khoon le lia hai & dusre blood bank se aur khoon mangwa lia hai. Aap bahar wait kijiye.

Vikrant: Guru?

Nurse: Operation chal rha,plz wait. & mai dua karungi ki woh theek ho jaye,chinta mat kiziye

Vikrant: thank you sister.

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Kaisa laga ye chapter? Batana zaroor.

Next chapter Monday ko milega.

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