The Girl & The Ghost | ArShi | Completed - Page 74

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Posted: 5 years ago
Wonderful ending.  Not a routine one.  Liked it.👏
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice ending
But I thought that Arnav is some where in coma
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Posted: 5 years ago
Gr8 ending I'm sad that he's not alive but finally they r together so I'm happy 😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
A very different story.. I thought Arnav will alive by some magic... anyways they are together and happy... had a good time with the story... 👏
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Posted: 5 years ago
V nice. Absolutely loved this
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Posted: 5 years ago
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AMAZING STORY , SO DIFFERENT ...

NOTHING IVE READ BEFORE .

BEAUTIFULY ESSAYED CHARACTERS OF ARNAV AND KHUSHI.

YOU DEFINITELY NEED AN APPLAUSE FOR THIS STORY .


LOVED IT .

NANCY .
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

I had thought Arnav would turn up alive in coma somewhere and find a way to get to her. At least they still have each other.


I understand your thoughts about Arnav. :)
Though I had planned the ghost part from the start. I wouldn't have titled the fic that way if there was any chance of him being alive.
Thank you so much for reading and staying with the fic till the end.
Loved your comments :)
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Savera84

Wonderful update.  I liked the way you tied Arnav with Khushi.  Nice thought.  I was a bit worried that Payal is going to put a break in Arnav Khushi's Hamesha.  Phew! Khushi tackled it well.  They can now live peacefully.  Nice way to finish off the story.  Hope  to read more stories from you

Cheers...


Thank you! 😊
Even though the fic's set in fantasy/supernatural I wanted to retain some realism (?) in it and hence that ending. Glad you liked it. Payal's side was the last remaining thing that needed to be tied in wrt Arnav's presence in her flat.
Love and appreciate your support/encouragement throughout the fic and thank you so much for supporting till the very end.
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: g.s.p.r.9.4.3.

amazing story...loved reading it...a very different tale of arshi... waiting eagerly for an epilogue...


Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! 😊
I haven't thought of an epilogue for it though.
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: anjs

nice ending...cause eventually they are together, thats what matters...but i really wished somehow Arnav had been able to manifest himself into his own body and they wud have a fulfilling life... as a couple...


I know, a human!Arnav would have had a more fulfilling life 😊 but this is an idea I had struck off at the very start. This concept is a bit diff and I had fun drawing out the plot/the interactions and where I wanted to take these two very diff characters. I am glad you found the end fitting. Thanks a ton for reading till the very end!