Edited /Updated post for Chapter 4 moving to Chapter 5 😉
Edited /Updated post for Chapter 4 moving to Chapter 5 😉
Chapter 5
Superb Chapter Lakshmi
The way you write gives clarity to the situation
Can't stand people like Manjit...
Poor Geet have to bear all the pain pasting a smile on her face ... so that her loved ones aren't hurt... but for how long will she be able to keep this act..
It wouldn't be easy for Maan to mend his mistakes ... the hurt he has caused runs too deep in Geet's heart..
Past
Another twist
Maan meets Pari again but the situation isn't in his favour...
Uh-oh Geet finds out that Maan loves Pari which is Geet herself lol... another confusion
Wonder now what will be Geet's reaction when she'll know who's PARI lol🤔
Chapter 6
So Geet has decided to move to another place ....
Loved the way you have incorporated humour in this tensed situation 👏
Geet engrossed in her work lol😛Titoo having a tough time gaining her attention lol😆
The most awaited moment- Maan finally has seen Geet's face 😛
Oh God!I am so sad for GEET. It’s really tragic when you love someone so deeply and the person cares least .
An interesting start.
It is so sad . But one thing I liked the most is her self respect.
Excellent update.
Can’t stop reading.
Now that MAAN has come to HOSHIYARPUR to meet Geet,he has found Pari.But what was his , is now too far from him .
Great update .
It was so sweet to see Maan to plead to his brother for a photo of his own wife .aAnd his restlessness!!
Can’t wait to know what happens in the function.
WOW!
can realise Geet ‘s condition. But what about Mr Khurana?
Please Babaji, do something special for them.
I can’t bear our MAANEET to be in pain like this.Off course, Geet will take her time as she has borne all by herself for about a year.
Phir bhi.....
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