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Thanks for the links Lakshmi 😊
Originally posted by: Silvermist32223
Thanks for the forewarning Lakshmi 😊
Have read mostly light -hearted tales on GF until now 😉
Gearing up for an emotional ride of Maaneet's journey...😳Thanks Dearie...😊WELCOME TO ORP 🤗Well..its definetly not a fun one..very emotional ...but not dark...so, enjoy reading it 😃
Originally posted by: Silvermist32223
Chapter 2PastMaan-Geet had a rushed wedding against their wishes.😲Maan's prejudice against Geet's family.Poor Geet lost her Grandma on her wedding and can neither grieve 😭Within a day and her life is upside down but still is hopefulInfatuated by her husband at first sight lol...😆Do I get to say it again...I know you aren't liking the fact that I hate Maan...can't help it lol😆HE'S WAY TOO RUDE...😡😡(okay apart from being a little considerate for just a teeny weeny bit -post wedding😛 )PresentGeet has bonded with other members of the Khuranas over the year 😊So Geet's going to her home town for a month to complete her studies and to attend a wedding 😳Dadima's feeling guilty for her actions..An entire year passed and Maan is yet to know that Geet is Pari... 😲funny that Maan hasn't seen Geet's face even once ...after all a year has 365 days lol..😆Wonder what will Maan do when he finds out Geet is Pari lol 😛 😉Thank you so much for your detailed lovely dovely comments for ORP 1 & 2... 🤗I am really humbled...😊Well, yes, for Maan, its love at first sight when he got to see the girl at his farmhouse. He went into such a madness that he ignored the fact that he has got married to the same girl and he has been ignoring her and not even glancing at her.. That's the twist of the story.Yes, their marriage happened amidst all tensions...so, do read further and comment when you are back...I will be eagerly waiting. 😛
Chapter 3
Maan needs to learn to keep his anger in check... 
Finally he has realized that he hasn't seen Geet's face lol 
Maan beware more shocking realizations are on you way...
He is one confused soul .... experiencing all sorts of emotions at once....
At last Maan realized that he had been unfair to Geet 
Dadima is hurting coz of Maan's behaviour towards Geet
Wonder how is Geet coping up?
Like the way you describe the characters' emotions Lakshmi... it's quite intense 
Chapter 4
Beautifully written Lakshmi...👏
It's human tendency to take things for granted .... You start to realize its importance after you lose it...
That's the case with Maan ... one side he is confused with his feelings for Pari other side Geet's words haunt him to no end...
Maan finally has accepted consciously that Geet is HIS WIFE after a year in denial
The absence of Geet has made Maan realize his past mistakes
Shantima has shown the reality of the situation to Maan
Realizations are too painful .... Maan is hurting now ...
Can imagine the hurt Geet might have been through😭
The conversation between Geet and Shantima is sweet but could feel the reluctance in returning back from Geet...
What's on Geet's mind ?
Dadima is happy seeing that Maan wants to work on his relationship 😊
Maan going to Hoshiyarpur... is it too late?
Originally posted by: Silvermist32223
Chapter 3
Maan needs to learn to keep his anger in check...
Finally he has realized that he hasn't seen Geet's face lol
He is one confused soul .... experiencing all sorts of emotions at once....
At last Maan realized that he had been unfair to Geet
Dadima is hurting coz of Maan's behaviour towards Geet
Wonder how is Geet coping up?
Like the way you describe the characters' emotions Lakshmi... it's quite intense
Hey ....welcome back dear...just read your comment. Hmm..its just the very beginning of a journey full of realizations and regrets for Maan. 😳. So..follow the chapters. 😉
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