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Posted: 3 years ago

read all the parts in one go...earlier it looked funny but now i am liking it...continue soon

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Amazing updates dear, they all suffered in their last life, becauseof chirag's parents didn't want geet as their bahu, because she lives at kottha, hopefully joyti's soul will understand and let them live happily 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thanks for the update. Maan is remembering his past life. Maan’s parents thinking is in line with the thinking of the upper class people where marriages are being equal status. But love does not have status. 

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Originally posted by: Psharma21

Awesome waiting for further revelation


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Posted: 3 years ago

21

very sad 

chirag's parents force him to marry jyoti giving him kasam 

but chirag left everything n his room 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 22

Late night,he reached to geet house and seen him sitting outside …

chirag: are u mad geet

Itni raat ko bahar baithi ho

Geet look him painfully and spoke

Raat der tk teri dehleez par

Baithi rahi aankhen

Khud na aana tha toh koi

Khawab hi bej diya hota

.


chirag : Geet wo mein

.

She stands then pull him closer holding his kurta

Geet : Unse milne ko tarasti hai aankhen

Taras taras kr barasti hai aankhen

Baras-baras kr jb thk jaati hai aankhen

Toh fir se milne ko tarasti hai aankhen

chirag hugged her tightly but her hand hanging in air,like no energy left in her….

chirag : maaf krdo hume

Geet : kis baat ki maafi maang rhe hai aap

.

chirag break the hug and cupped her face and try to say but how he said about marriage

Geet : aapko mubharakh ho shaadi

.

Aapko yaha nhi hona chaiye

Jaaiye aapki

chirag : chup

Wo meri kuch bhi nhi

.

Tumhe kaise pata laga

Geet removed his hand and said

Kash aapne hi hume kh diya hota

Chali jayao

Meri zindagi se

Yu jhoothe sapne na dikhaye hote hume

.

Chirag : geet meri marzi nhi thi is shaadi me

.

Geet : aap hume akela chod dijiye

Kissi ne aapko fir yaha dekha

Toh hume firse wo sb taane sunane honge

Jo ab humse bardaast nhi hote

.

Chirag :kiss ne kaha tumse kuch

Geet : aapki maa aayi thi

.

Toh tum ho geeta bhai

.

Ji aap kaun

Aur yaha

Ye toh

.

Jis jagah pe tum khadi ho ladki

Wo humari hai

Humare bete chirag Khurana ne tumhe rehne ko kya di

Tumhari nazar toh ussi pe chli gyi

.

Geet : aap hai kaun

.

Hum chirag Khurana ki maa hai

Geet bend to touch her feet but she stepped back and said ye sb natak tum chirag ke saamne hi krna

Aaj humare bete ki shaadi hai

Jyoti se

Aur tumhari parchayi bhi hum dobara humare chirag ki zindagi me hum dekhna nhi chahte

.

Geet : wo asa nhi kr sakte

Ma a: chirag bhut khush hai is shaadi se

Geet ; wo humse pyaar krte hai

Maa : nachne waliyo se pyaar nhi hota

Wo toh bs raato ko ragin banana ka ek jariya hoti hai

Aur itne din aapne humare bete ka dil behlaya hai

Uski kimmat ye rhi

She through some bandles of cash and spoke

Ydi km pde

Toh kh dijiye

Ya aapko mardo ki jaroorat ho apni hawas mitane ke liye

Toh hum uska intzzam bhi kr dete hai

She calls two men inside and point towards him….

Geet tears not stopping she painfully said bs kriye aap

Aap jaaiye yaha se

Maa : abhi toh hum jaa rhe hai

Par kala ap hume yaha dikhni nhi chaiye

Ye paise uthayo

Aur niklo yaha se

.

 

Chirag : geet mujhe maaf krdo

Jo bhi maa ne kaha tumse

Geet : kis cheez ke liye maaf kre hum aapko

Aapki shaadi ke liye

Ya fir jo aapki maane humse kaha uske liye

.

Geet held his hand and put money upon him…

Ab aap jaaiye chirag Khurana yaha se

.

She enter inside the house and close the door on his face….

Kal hum ye gha rchodkar chale jaayenge

Kh dena aapni maa se

Hum bs aapko ye paise lautana chahte the

.

Chirag : geet asa mt kro

Mein baat karunga maa se

Geet : jb shaadi ki

Tb ki

Chirag  : geet mein sirf tumse pyaar krta hu

Geet : pyaar

She laughs and said ye kya hota hai sahib

Chirag : asi baat mt kro tum

Geet : aapne hume dhoka diya

Humare pass ek cheez thi

Humari izzat

Aapne humse wo bhi chin li

Chirag : geettt

Geet : aapki maa ne aaj hume

.

Suddenly silence occur all around….

Chirag : geett

Geet

Darwaza kholo geet

.

When he not gets any respond, he breaks the door….

She laying on floor lifeless… he picked her in arms and lay her on bed….

He picks water glass and fall some droplets on her face….

.

Tumne toh meri jaan nikal di thi

.

Geet : aur aap humari jaan le chuke hai

.

Chirag : meri aankho me dekho geet

Mein sirf tumhara hu

.

Maa ne mujhe apni kasam deke majbur kiya hai

Is shaadi ke liye

.

Meri baat pe yakeen kro geet

Geet : aap jaaiye yaha se

chirag : nhi

Mein khi nhi jaa rha

Aur na tum khi jaayungi

.

Geet try to stand,but he pushed her on bed and forcefully kissed her…

Chirag : tum itni naraaz mt ho na

Mein nhi ji paayunga tumhare bina

Geet :

Chirag : thik hai

Mt kro baat

Geet :

Chirag : geet

Mein tumse aur maa se dono se bhut pyaar krta hu

Meri majburi smjho

.

Wo ladki

Kbhi meri zindagi me mayne nhi rakhengi

.

Wo bs us ghar ki bahu hai

Meri patni nhi

.

Tumhe yakeen nhi ho rha

.

He breaks the water glass and pressed finger on sharp edge, blood ooze out from his finger, he filled her maang with his blood…

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Edited by priya_21 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

previous parts

part 19 on page 57

part 20 on page 60

part 21 on page 63

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

21

very sad 

chirag's parents force him to marry jyoti giving him kasam 

but chirag left everything n his room 


Part 22 updated

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update..

Feeling sad for geet..

Continue soon..

Thank you for pm..

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hi Priya... hope you and your family are well.

thanks for the pm


Part 22

Dynamic and emotional update... superbly written

Chirag is helpless.

well he is stunned that Geet knows about his marriage

sad what his mom did.......

Geet's anger is justified.

she tells him to leave as she will be taunted

Chirag worried about her

at least she is fine

he explains his helplessness and says that Jyoti means nothing to him

Gosh he fills Geet's maang

update soon