read all the parts in one go...earlier it looked funny but now i am liking it...continue soon
read all the parts in one go...earlier it looked funny but now i am liking it...continue soon
Amazing updates dear, they all suffered in their last life, becauseof chirag's parents didn't want geet as their bahu, because she lives at kottha, hopefully joyti's soul will understand and let them live happily
Thanks for the update. Maan is remembering his past life. Maan’s parents thinking is in line with the thinking of the upper class people where marriages are being equal status. But love does not have status.
21
very sad
chirag's parents force him to marry jyoti giving him kasam
but chirag left everything n his room
Part 22
Late night,he reached to geet house and seen him sitting outside …
chirag: are u mad geet
Itni raat ko bahar baithi ho
Geet look him painfully and spoke
Raat der tk teri dehleez par
Baithi rahi aankhen
Khud na aana tha toh koi
Khawab hi bej diya hota
.
chirag : Geet wo mein
.
She stands then pull him closer holding his kurta
Geet : Unse milne ko tarasti hai aankhen
Taras taras kr barasti hai aankhen
Baras-baras kr jb thk jaati hai aankhen
Toh fir se milne ko tarasti hai aankhen
chirag hugged her tightly but her hand hanging in air,like no energy left in her….
chirag : maaf krdo hume
Geet : kis baat ki maafi maang rhe hai aap
.
chirag break the hug and cupped her face and try to say but how he said about marriage
Geet : aapko mubharakh ho shaadi
.
Aapko yaha nhi hona chaiye
Jaaiye aapki
chirag : chup
Wo meri kuch bhi nhi
.
Tumhe kaise pata laga
Geet removed his hand and said
Kash aapne hi hume kh diya hota
Chali jayao
Meri zindagi se
Yu jhoothe sapne na dikhaye hote hume
.
Chirag : geet meri marzi nhi thi is shaadi me
.
Geet : aap hume akela chod dijiye
Kissi ne aapko fir yaha dekha
Toh hume firse wo sb taane sunane honge
Jo ab humse bardaast nhi hote
.
Chirag :kiss ne kaha tumse kuch
Geet : aapki maa aayi thi
.
Toh tum ho geeta bhai
.
Ji aap kaun
Aur yaha
Ye toh
.
Jis jagah pe tum khadi ho ladki
Wo humari hai
Humare bete chirag Khurana ne tumhe rehne ko kya di
Tumhari nazar toh ussi pe chli gyi
.
Geet : aap hai kaun
.
Hum chirag Khurana ki maa hai
Geet bend to touch her feet but she stepped back and said ye sb natak tum chirag ke saamne hi krna
Aaj humare bete ki shaadi hai
Jyoti se
Aur tumhari parchayi bhi hum dobara humare chirag ki zindagi me hum dekhna nhi chahte
.
Geet : wo asa nhi kr sakte
Ma a: chirag bhut khush hai is shaadi se
Geet ; wo humse pyaar krte hai
Maa : nachne waliyo se pyaar nhi hota
Wo toh bs raato ko ragin banana ka ek jariya hoti hai
Aur itne din aapne humare bete ka dil behlaya hai
Uski kimmat ye rhi
She through some bandles of cash and spoke
Ydi km pde
Toh kh dijiye
Ya aapko mardo ki jaroorat ho apni hawas mitane ke liye
Toh hum uska intzzam bhi kr dete hai
She calls two men inside and point towards him….
Geet tears not stopping she painfully said bs kriye aap
Aap jaaiye yaha se
Maa : abhi toh hum jaa rhe hai
Par kala ap hume yaha dikhni nhi chaiye
Ye paise uthayo
Aur niklo yaha se
.
Chirag : geet mujhe maaf krdo
Jo bhi maa ne kaha tumse
Geet : kis cheez ke liye maaf kre hum aapko
Aapki shaadi ke liye
Ya fir jo aapki maane humse kaha uske liye
.
Geet held his hand and put money upon him…
Ab aap jaaiye chirag Khurana yaha se
.
She enter inside the house and close the door on his face….
Kal hum ye gha rchodkar chale jaayenge
Kh dena aapni maa se
Hum bs aapko ye paise lautana chahte the
.
Chirag : geet asa mt kro
Mein baat karunga maa se
Geet : jb shaadi ki
Tb ki
Chirag : geet mein sirf tumse pyaar krta hu
Geet : pyaar
She laughs and said ye kya hota hai sahib
Chirag : asi baat mt kro tum
Geet : aapne hume dhoka diya
Humare pass ek cheez thi
Humari izzat
Aapne humse wo bhi chin li
Chirag : geettt
Geet : aapki maa ne aaj hume
.
Suddenly silence occur all around….
Chirag : geett
Geet
Darwaza kholo geet
.
When he not gets any respond, he breaks the door….
She laying on floor lifeless… he picked her in arms and lay her on bed….
He picks water glass and fall some droplets on her face….
.
Tumne toh meri jaan nikal di thi
.
Geet : aur aap humari jaan le chuke hai
.
Chirag : meri aankho me dekho geet
Mein sirf tumhara hu
.
Maa ne mujhe apni kasam deke majbur kiya hai
Is shaadi ke liye
.
Meri baat pe yakeen kro geet
Geet : aap jaaiye yaha se
chirag : nhi
Mein khi nhi jaa rha
Aur na tum khi jaayungi
.
Geet try to stand,but he pushed her on bed and forcefully kissed her…
Chirag : tum itni naraaz mt ho na
Mein nhi ji paayunga tumhare bina
Geet :
Chirag : thik hai
Mt kro baat
Geet :
Chirag : geet
Mein tumse aur maa se dono se bhut pyaar krta hu
Meri majburi smjho
.
Wo ladki
Kbhi meri zindagi me mayne nhi rakhengi
.
Wo bs us ghar ki bahu hai
Meri patni nhi
.
Tumhe yakeen nhi ho rha
.
He breaks the water glass and pressed finger on sharp edge, blood ooze out from his finger, he filled her maang with his blood…
**********
Originally posted by: aparna3011
21
very sad
chirag's parents force him to marry jyoti giving him kasam
but chirag left everything n his room
Part 22 updated
Nice update..
Feeling sad for geet..
Continue soon..
Thank you for pm..
Hi Priya... hope you and your family are well.
thanks for the pm
Part 22
Dynamic and emotional update... superbly written
Chirag is helpless.
well he is stunned that Geet knows about his marriage
sad what his mom did.......
Geet's anger is justified.
she tells him to leave as she will be taunted
Chirag worried about her
at least she is fine
he explains his helplessness and says that Jyoti means nothing to him
Gosh he fills Geet's maang
update soon
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