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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: IMA9167

uss koh dhek ke baadh hum comment karenge


Jaisi aapki marzi

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Finally itna peeche padne k baad update mili... And vo bhi back to back 3... Kya baat h... Accha asar hua tujh ar pd... Vaise tune meri fav story update ki isliye kitni khush hu y m already bata chuki hu tujhe...


Arey waah kya baat hai... Finally Maan gets to know the past... And I am hoping ki ab vo sab kuch sahi kar dega.... Vaise how they all died still seems a mystery to me....

Though I do feel bad for Jyoti as well coz she honestly has suffered enough.... Wants to know what makes Maan marry Jyoti when he was already in love with Geet... Was it due to Geet's status in the society? If it is so then Maan has wronged Jyoti.... I can understand her pain and the reason of her being wanting to seperate Maaneet.... But then again she should understand that both times are different.....

Waiting the story to unfold and the next update....

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: _CrystalFlames_

Finally itna peeche padne k baad update mili... And vo bhi back to back 3... Kya baat h... Accha asar hua tujh ar pd... Vaise tune meri fav story update ki isliye kitni khush hu y m already bata chuki hu tujhe...


Arey waah kya baat hai... Finally Maan gets to know the past... And I am hoping ki ab vo sab kuch sahi kar dega.... Vaise how they all died still seems a mystery to me....

Though I do feel bad for Jyoti as well coz she honestly has suffered enough.... Wants to know what makes Maan marry Jyoti when he was already in love with Geet... Was it due to Geet's status in the society? If it is so then Maan has wronged Jyoti.... I can understand her pain and the reason of her being wanting to seperate Maaneet.... But then again she should understand that both times are different.....

Waiting the story to unfold and the next update....


Ha kitna piche pdi huyi thi tu

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Posted: 4 years ago

fabulous part:)

so chirag just had love at first sight!!

glad he helps geet and take her with him

The last scene the way chirag show his emotions

waiting for more

thanks for pm!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 20 (12.04.2021)


One week passed, he not come back just call her to ask she is fine or not… she need anything… he feeling sorry for kiss, he can’t take advantage of her like that… he saves her from goons now what he did actually…

He unable to meet eyes with her….

Ye galat tha jo huya

Mujhe khud pe kabu rakhna chaiye tha

Uski zindagi wo khi pe jaa sakti hai

Mere lagati kya hai

.

Par ussi ek pal mein , mein kitna darr gya

Jaise usse kho diya maine

.

Kyun mein usse nhi bhul paata hu

Kyun wo har pal yaado me rhti hai mere

.

Uski Aankhen

Uski wo halki -halki Muskaan

.

Kyun har roz jaata hu

Waha

Par andher jaane ki himaat nhi kr paata hu

.

Today too he come just see her from far, behind from tree, but suddenly she vanished…

He stands here few minutes, but she not seen anywhere… someone tap on his shoulder… he jerked the hand and try to find her…

Kya dekh rhe hai aap

Chirag: aapse matlab

.

Mujhse hi matlab hai

Ek toh mujhe chori chori dekhte hai aap

Aur khte hai aapse matlab

.

He turns and sees her

Tum

.

Geet: ji

Aap yaha aate hai

Toh humse milte kyun nhi

Chirag: mein toh bs aaj hi aaya tha

Geet: jhooth

Maine aapki jeep ko kyi baar dekha hai

.

Koi khata huyi hai humse

Chirag: nhi geet

Galati toh meri thi

Mujhe ase tumhare sath

.

Mein khud se nazar nhi mila paa rha hu

Maine kaise tumhe chuya

Tumhari bina marzi jaane

.

Fir mujhme aur baki sb me farq hi kya rh gya

.

Her hand moves little on his shirt towards his neck, her neck bend little on him and she placed soft kiss on his neck…

Geet: ab hisab barabar

.

He shocked with her act…

Geet: ase kya dekh rhe hai aap

.

Us din aap toh chale gye

Par jo humne mehsoos kiya

Wo toh aapne jaana hi nhi

.

Aap toh bs sorry khke chale gye

.

Fir mood ke nhi dekha hume

.

Phli baar koi humare itne karib aaya tha

Kissi ne humare liye itna kiya

Jb aap aas pass hote hai

Sath hote hai

Toh sb acha lagta hai

Par jb aap nhi hote

Toh kuch acha nhi lagta

.

Is ek hafte mein hum ye jaan gye hai chirag

Hum aapko pasand krne lage hai

Par humye bhi jaante hai

Hum aapke kabil nhi

.

Chirag cupped her face and said tum mein koi kmi nhi

Mujhe toh tum phli nazar mein hi pasand aa gyi thi….

**********

Time passing out, both come closer day by day, last veil of any relation also removed in between both, at one day, that line also crossed…

She busy in making food for him, he come silently and hugged her from back and kissed on her neck, his kisses going down on her back…

Geet: hume khana banane dijiye

Chirag: tum apna kaam kro

Mein apna kaam kr rha hu

He turnoff the gas and scooped her in his arms, next moment both are on bed , clothes are down and both are kissing passionately…

**********

Chirag: suno mein kal nhi aayunga

Geet: kyun

Chirag: maa aur baba ke sath mujhe kal gaav se bahar jaana hai

Geet: koi khas kaam hai

Chirag: pata nhi

Bs aaj hi maa ne kaha

Geet pulled him close and said

Kitni jaldi mulaqat guzar jaati hai, Pyaasbujhti nahin barsat guzar jaati hai, Apni yaadon se keh do is tarah naa aayakare, Neend aati nahi aur raat guzar jaati hai.

Chirag :itna yaad krti ho mujhe

Geet : hmm

Aapka jaana ab humse saha nhi jaata

Chirag: mujhe thoda waqt do

Mein apne ghar me baat karunga humare rishte ke liye

Geet: hume aap pe pura barosa hai

*********

Next day chirag try to avoid come with mom, dad, but no one ready to listen him, attend he also goes…

Now he sitting in front of some unknown people and one girl come with tea tray…

She serves tea to all and silently seat at one corner and continuously looking down, he thinking in mind why she blushing so much, why she is so nervous too…

Baba: hume toh aapki beti pasand hai

Aaj toh bs ye opcharikta thi

His baba placed hand on his shoulder and said jyoti aur chirag ka vivaah issi mahine ke aakhri me honga

Humari taraf se HA hai

Chirag filled someone snatched earth from his feet…

Yesterday he promised to geet , he going to tell about geet to his parents… and today …he feel suffocated suddenly, he stand from here and left out….

Jamaisaa ko kya huya

Maa :ji mein dekhti hu

*********

Maa :chirag ye kya tarika hai

Hum aapka waha Rishta pakka kr rhe hai

Jyoti ke sath

Aur aapis tarah aa gye

Humne kya aapko yhi sikhaya hai

Badoko anadhar krna

Chirag: maa mein ye shaadi nhi kr sakta

Wo mein

Baba: aapse humne pucha hai

Kya

Sukr maaniye

Humne aapko ladki dikhayi

Jb aapki maa is ghar me aayi thi na

Humne toh inhe dekha tk nhi tha

Chup chap andher chaliye

Aur tilak ki rashm puri hone dijiye

Chirag: baba

Baba glared him, he unable to speak, his baba held his hand and make him sit… he have no idea when rashm get fulfilled… he is blank, he just thinking about her…how he tell her about all those….

Wo mujhe kbhi maaf nhi karengi

**********

Edited by priya_21 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

previous parts

teri meri kahani (bhoot aaya series 3)

part 17 on page 53

part 18 on page 54

part 19 on page 57

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: tammana.m

fabulous part:)

so chirag just had love at first sight!!

glad he helps geet and take her with him

The last scene the way chirag show his emotions

waiting for more

thanks for pm!!


next part updated

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Posted: 4 years ago

gosh!!! Geet shayrii !!👏

Love it

So it was both sides

geet knew maan come to see her and one day she go to her to ask him

and i love the way GEEt propose not chirag!!

In few days they come so close

but maan cant tell this to his parents and

he get fixed with jyoti

he can atleast speak to jyoti !!

waiting for nxt :)

t

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