Sameer-Naina OS:Kyunki (A take on Confession Scene) - Page 5

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Posted: 6 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Azraa01

A beautiful, emotional yet heart breaking OS.

Thank you dear 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey a beautiful piece of writing...u connect with emotions so well!!

Wonderful dear!!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niakhush

Hey a beautiful piece of writing...u connect with emotions so well!!

Wonderful dear!!!

Thank you Nia for the appreciation 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Okay since my limited quota of posts is most probably going to end with this post, I have to stop myself from reading any other OS of yours😆

This is by far your best OS. I was literally in tears while reading it. I could feel Sameer and Naina's pain. I was exactly like Naina and I have too have gone through this. I can not even tell you that how amazingly you have penned down their emotions. Ek ek shabd Mera dil chu gaya 👏. And I m not exaggerating at all. 

I am a kind of person who cries very easily but still I feel making your readers feel the pain of your story's characters is a very difficult job and you just nailed it. 👏

P.S ab jab bhi free houngi, aapke baaki OS zarur pdhungi. BA's mjhe stalker mt smjh lena 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Ohhh...
That was a wonderful take on confession scene..

I can totally relate to nainas heart ache and sameers feelings

Some of the sentence such as "muje gal pe kiss kar dete" could need be heard in ahe serial and you made it more relatable

Great yaar..👏