Tanshi ff-Milenge milenge updated part22 pg38 - Page 8

Originally posted by: HayaZehra313

Wow maza agaya yr...superb...👍🏼

waiting for urs 😆

where r u aru sabke sab aa gaye tu kahan h

mujhe ku nhi bataya ki update kar diya hai.U know na i was waiting for it😭 koi nhi uske liye baad mai jhar logi.Phale teri tareef kar do.

Originally posted by: pari454

where r u aru sabke sab aa gaye tu kahan h

Part-6
R: Agar meri beti theek ho gayi na toh tum jo bologi Voh m tumhe dunga
N: Promise uncle jo m mangungi Voh doge
R:Yeh ek beti k pita ka vadda h tumse
Natz notices Tanu's birthmark and asked about it from her father
N:Uncle yeh inke hath par kya h
R:Yeh birthmark h pandit ji ne bola tha yeh iske pichle janam se related h
Natz again smiles and in her mind yeh pakka meri mom hi h mere dad ke name ka first letter jo h inke hath par agar mom aayi h toh dad bhi aaye honge.She has tears in her eyes.Raghuvir notices it and asked the reason
N:Mujhe mere mom-dad ki yaad aa gayi thi
R:Yaad aa gayi thi mtlb Voh tumhare sath nhi rehte
Natz looks at tanu and said Voh hamesha mere pass h meri yaadon mein
R:Mtlb beta
N:Voh is duniya mein nahi h m 7 saal ki thi jab Voh...
R:I m so sorry beta
N:Par aaj inko dekha toh mujhe meri mom yaad aa gayi okkk uncle leave this abhi inhe kuch der m hosh aa jaega phir aap inhe ghar lekar ja sakte h
R:Koi medicine
N:Aap bas inhe Daily mere clinic le aana medicine ki koi zaroorat nhi yeh meri liye bhut special h m khud unka bhut dhyan rakhungi
R: Thnx beta u r very sweet
In Rishi's house
(I forget to tell Rishi's parents died when he was six.His maternal uncle brings him to his house.His aunt does not like him.She treats him badly.She doesn't give him enough money to buy his books clothes etc.Its UV who supports Rishi very much.He always gives his pocket money to Rishi.He is just like mp.So to fulfill his daily needs Rishi is searching job but his fate ditches him)
Rishi is sitting in his room and thinking something.Just them UV comes there and asked what u r thinking
R:Yaar kitne dino se try kar rha hun job mil jaye but koi job dene ko hi tyar nhi h pta nhi kismat kab badlegi
Uv:Bhai ek kaam karte h
R:Kya
Uv: Kal aap apne din ki start mandir se karna phir dekhna sab acha hi hoga
Ri:Yeh bhi karke dekh lete h
Next day
Rishi and Uv visit temple.Tanu is already present there.She comes with her mother.
She is praying.Rishi comes and stands ri8 behind her.Both feel strange but unable to understand.By a wing stroke Tanu's duppata comes on Rishi's face.Tanu has no idea whats going on she is busy in prayer
Rishi losts and smiles.Uv shakes him and he comes in his senses and removes her dupatta.
Uv:Bhai hum logo ko jana h ab chalo
Rishi turns to leave.In between tanu completes her prayer and turns.They again not able to meet.
Tanu sees some children playing around temple.She also start playing with them.She laughs loudly.Rishi gets attracted towards the voice he just hears and he start moving in that direction.He reached the place but tanu's face is in opposite direction.
R:Kaun h yeh ladki aur iski hasne ki awaaz mujhe kyu iski taraf lekar jaa rahi h.Aisa kya h iss ladki mein jo yeh mujhe apni taraf attract kar rahi h.Tanu turns but due to wind her dupatta comes on her face but her eyes r uncovered.Rishi looks her eyes and lost in them
Uv taps his shoulder but Rishi doesn't pay attention on this
Uv turns him and asked what happens
R:Voh aankhein jo maine tujhe bataya tha na Voh dekhi maine aaj
Uv:kahan dekhi
Ri:vahan (he points in that direction but tanu jaa chuki thi)
Uv:wahan koi nhi h bahi bad bacche khel rhe h
R'Abhi yahi thi vah yaar
Someone pulls his tshirt
Rishi looks down and its a small kid
R:Kya hua
Kid gives him parsad and said yeh uss didi ne diya h ji abhi humare sath khel rahi thi
Rishi happily have it
Uv:Ab chale bhai aapko job k liye bhi toh jana h
Rishi tries very hard but don't get job bcz of his study
Rishi upsets and feels irritated so he runs from there but bumps into Tanu's father
Raghuvir had some files Rishi sees reads the paper which falls due to collision.Rishi noticed some paper and said to him
R:Aap yeh deal karke bhut bada nuksan kar rahe ho. Rishi finds some strange
He consults raghuvir who listens him peaceful.Raghuvit is much influenced by his business skills and offers him job.
Prcap:Tanu natz moments

Originally posted by: arya1210

mai karsha mai hi gum ho gayi thi.Aur tune bhi to nhi bataya ki update kar diya hai😭but koi nhi.Dare aaye durast aaye.

😆

Originally posted by: arya1210

mujhe ku nhi bataya ki update kar diya hai.U know na i was waiting for it😭koi nhi uske liye baad mai jhar logi.Phale teri tareef kar do.

Love it love it * 10000000000...n .(maths ki student hai samjh ja) Moon part was superhit ,rishi near bedi office was nice and last my fav par tanu natz meeting.Love it and love u.

Love u too aru
Ha smjh gayi m 😆
Iss bar kisi ko nhi bataya update k bare mein sabne khud hi padhi h

Aaj to din bana diya.2 in one not bad.Asisa karte raho.Mere tanshi and natz.Kitni inteligente hai mom aayi hai to dad bhi aayege.Jaldi update karna.Asise hi surprise dete raho

Originally posted by: pari454

waiting for urs 😆

inshallah i will update in 2 to 3 days...😳

Arey wah pari aj kl to tu dil khol k updates or vms de rhi he...😳keep it up dude...by the way update was awesome...👏specially soul connection scene in which her voice was attracting him...❤️