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Nice update dear
Liked it
Is Swati in love with Ratan r someone else!?
Thanks for the pm!
:))
Originally posted by: dazzlingnikki
Hope she listens to ratan
Lets see and swathi is in love with the king..who is he now .!?.Good one botha re safe
Originally posted by: jasminerahul
finally dira got saved.eaten saving diya from the river was nice.you got perfect river pics of dira. ratan apologizing and diya understanding his guilt was nice.I could see passion and obsession when ratan said she has to be with him.loved ratan's concern when he said that he can't allow her to go in this week condition.diya is right.it's kidnap.any girl will get angry with the guy who does this to her.swati regretting was nice. but her monologue is confusing.is she talking about loving ratan?sad for dira's parents.good that you showed the parebts' emotions as well.you are one of the few writers who shows parebts' emotions
Ratan saved Diya from getting drowned. Loved ratan's concern for diya's health.
Nice update dear
Liked itIs Swati in love with Ratan r someone else!?Thanks for the pm!:))
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