SaIna Short story: Your pain is mine - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!! I wanted this to happen in serial!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
It's beautiful Doc
How I wished he scolded her for burning her fingers in d episode too
It was luvly to see him care for her😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13
Yaar penned down to perfection πŸ‘...this is how it could have been shown the best...impulsive on Naina's part...n then Sameer should have rebuked her for it...n take a promise...it couldn't have been executed better...thanks for writing this dear!!! N my apologies, couldn't reply earlier...my post limit had got exceeded πŸ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

That was so relatable and realistic.πŸ˜ƒ The way you portrayed the scene was way too good.I kinda liked the scene in the episode but loved how you handled it in a better way.πŸ˜ƒ Loved the twist you gave to the actual one.

Thanks for the PM.
Keep Writing and Keep Smiling.πŸ˜ƒ


Thanks dear... I really didn't like her burning her hand with candle... so tried to make it a bit realistic... I'm glad you liked it πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Radhika03

Well written... I was expecting Sameer to react this way only when he got to know ..😳


Thanks Radhika πŸ˜ƒ
I wished she got a nice scolding from him for doing all this.. this isn't acceptable at all
I'm glad you liked it as this is how I imagined that partπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Very nice way of handling this situation and also making sure that by promising Sameer she will not behave in similar manner ever again.


Thanks a lot πŸ˜ƒ
This act shouldn't be repeated by anyone... they should refrain from showing such a thing πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Feeling other's pain cant be physical.. but from the heart.. 

Naina wanted to make Sameer feel how she felt... but then only Sameer got hurt.. 
so.. 

nice one Manisha.. liked the OS... β­οΈπŸ‘


Thanks Bhaiya for your appreciation πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘
Means a lot πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: mehraan

Wow ...i wished thy had shown like tis...The hot tawa was the best option...Neither she had to resort that nonsense n being overdramatic...Anyways i loved Sams reaction n this is wat is intended...More than himself he was concerned for her n that was a beautiful touch...!Lovely n cute Os


Thanks Meher for reading and commenting πŸ˜ƒ
I too found that candle scene overdramatic... I don't agree to such acts from anyone so I tried my bit to present my thoughts... glad to see you all liking itπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow Manisha it's fabbb😳Loved each n every scene from the bottom of my heart❀️Keep it upπŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 6 years ago
#20
Em not watching da show
But if aisa kuch ho tau
Tau mai zaroor dekhna chahogi..
Update soon

Gr8 work