Samaina FF : HUM TUM Note on pg.64 feb 20,19

dreamyp thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 6 years ago
๐Ÿ˜†Hi all.. m on holidays now so just thought to write something .It's my first try so be bare with me.. give suggestions.. THANKYOU..๐Ÿ˜Š

You can follow my quote wrtings here 
https://www.yourquote.in/minakshi_kalra22

{
Part 1 ๐Ÿ˜Š

AHEMDABAD 1990

It was the pre eve of diwali..There was so much hustle bustle In market. Everyone was shopping, enjoying and celebrating the eve. ๐Ÿ˜›

In market, 2 teenage girls were eating golgappe like releshing them to core mano sari duniya ki khushi mil gyi ho.. kitni choti choti chijon me khushi mil jati thi unn dino..๐Ÿ˜ณ

A lady from back called them
Naina..Preeti.. jaldi karo..Late ho rha h...

The girl with 2 ponies turned n replied .. haan chachi ji bss aae.. that's naina.. full of innocence.. cuteness.. her family is her world.  Bss school se ghar or ghar se school thi duniya thi uski..

Naina to preeti - chl chl preeti.. chachi ji bula rh h..
Preeti - offoo ruk na..Abhi or golgappe khane h..Mummy to aise hi bolti rehti h
It's preeti..Most supporting n cute sister anyone can have..

Chachi ji comes from back..Preeti ke kaan khichti hai..
Chachi ji - accha ? Mummy yuhi chillati hai? Ghar chal btati hu tuje..
Preeti - aah mummy..Me to waise hi bol rh thi..Aap to world best ho..
Chachi ji - bs bs chlo ab ghar.. Warna tai ji se bhot dant padegi aaj..

Naina standing besides enjoying their nok jhok..Although it was her chachi but love her like mother n she is happy with in her small world.. murmuring seeing around they went home for dhanteras pooja..

On the other side of ahmedabad..
Maheshwari bungalow..

An elegant lady is preparing for dhanteras pooja..So much love n care in her eyes. Yeah she is the bahu of maheshwari family but very down to earth.

Mrs. M(loudly) - papa sameer..Jldi aao pooja ka maharat nikal rha h..

A man in 60s comes down  in hall wearing silk kurta and specs. He is owner of Maheshwari mills. Biggest mill in ahmedabad. Very friendly nature person.

Dada ji - lo bahu..Hum to aa gye tyar hoke par hmare rajkumar kahan h?
Mrs.M - dekho na papa kb se bula rh hu pr ye ladka hai ki sunta hi nahi..
Dada ji - ruko me dekhta hu..
Mrs. M - ji..Aap hi samajhiye ab usko kuch..

Room attached to hall.. a teenager cute n handsome boy is talking on telephone...

Boy - kya papa..Diwali hai or aapko buisness meetings ki padi h..Jao me aapse bat nahi krta
Mr. M - beta buisness bh to imp h.. try to understand..Ok I ll come back till tomorrow eve. Ok ? Smile now
Boy - hmm theek h.. I ll wait.. and haan get latest film CDs for me..

Dada ji was listening their convo standing on door n smiling.

Dada ji - sameer..Bat ho gyi ho to chle? Warna aaj dono ko dant pdne wali h..
Sameer Hangs up the phone
N say - chlo chlo maine kb mna kiya..Aap hi itni baten krte ho
Dada ji - accha bacchu ? Meri billi mujhi se myau ๐Ÿ˜†
Sam - haha you are the best dada ji in world..๐Ÿ˜›
Dada ji - I know I know

Coming in the hall..Both sshhhing๐Ÿฅฑ each other just sit down infort of mandir

Mrs. M - to mil gya janab ko time aane ka ?
Sam - are mom me to kbka aa jata but papa h ki itna bolte h ki bss.. unki wajah se late ho gya..
Mrs M - accha ji???? Wo bolte h ya tum? 
Khair kb aa rhe h wo ?
Sam - aapke wo kal sham tk aa rhe h hehe๐Ÿ˜†
Mrs. M - chup..Badmash.. 
Dada ji - chlo chlo bhot ho gya masti majak pooja shuru kro ab..

N they did the pooja.. a complete family oops๐Ÿ˜ฒ not complete.. Mr. M & rohan are missing.. chalo dekhte hai unke aane se kya badlaw aata h ๐Ÿ˜‰

}

Part 1 n 2 - pg 1
Part 3 - pg 2
Part 4 n 5 - pg 3
Part 6 - pg 5
Part 7 - pg 6
Part 8 - pg 8
Part 9 - pg 9
Part 10 - pg 10
Part 11 - pg 12
Part 12 - pg 14
Part 13 - pg 16
Part 14 - pg 19
Pt 15 - pg 21
Pt 16 - pg 25
Pt 17 - pg 29
Pt 18 - pg 33
Pt 19 -pg 37
Pt 20 - pg 40
Pt 21 - pg 44
Pt 22 - pg 47
Edited by dreamyp - 5 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

480

Views

109182

Users

50

Likes

1241

Frequent Posters

prachi_vrushan thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
nice start
update soon
braveheartdoc thumbnail
Anniversary 8 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 6 years ago
Cute start...I wish you kept it a bit longer...waiting for more from you๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘ Edited by braveheartdoc - 6 years ago
Samaina_1990 thumbnail
Anniversary 6 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 6 years ago
Very nice! But was waiting for Sameer...๐Ÿ˜›...blame it on the chewing gum episode...hehe...waiting for more!
dreamyp thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Cute start...I wish you kept it a bit longer...waiting for more from you๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘



i have edited the part dear.. check now๐Ÿ˜Š
Anjali33 thumbnail
Anniversary 7 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 6 years ago
Dats a luvly start
Update next part asap
dreamyp thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 6 years ago
PART 2
Next day early morning..

Dada ji comes in sameer room to wake him up..Our sameer is looking sooo pyara sota hua hayeee..

Dada ji - o rajkumar..Happy diwali..Chl uth jaldi.. mandir jana h

Sameer in sleep - kya dada ji...Itni subah subah kon mandir jata h..Abhi bhagwan ji so the honge..Thodi der me chalege

Dada ji (laughing) - bhagwan tumhari tarah late tak nahi sote.. chlo accompany me it's your dada ji order

Sameer finally getting up half heartedly..Hugs dada ji

Sam - happy Diwali dadu.
Dadu - u too my son.. waise aaj mujhe feeling aa rhi ki kuch special hone wala h..

Sam - special? Mtlb?
Dadu - mtlb aaj mere rajkumar ko uski rajkumari milne wali hai
Sam - rajkumari ? Ohhh plz nanu.. wo bh ahmedabad me...? Never

Dadu - chlo dekhte h..Meri gut feeling sahi hoti h ya tumhara confidence..
N sam goes for bath n get ready

Here in aggarwal house.. it is well built big house.. all the family members are living happily.. 

Taiji n chachi ji are cooking in kitchen sweet dishes..Chole puri n wat not as it is occasion of diwali.. chacha ji tau ji n naina's father sitting in hall reading newspaper n discussing about events. 

Naina comes out from room ready to go to temple as it is Monday also..
Naina - tai ji... Ye kya aap tak tyar nahi hue? Mandir nh jana?
Tai ji - o baiii... me to bhool hi gyi.. aisa kr aaj apni chachi ko leja

Chachi ji - me kaise? Bhagwan jhooth na bulae pr bhabhi aj diwali hai itne kaam pde hai..Kbi bh koi bh aa skta h..Me kaise jau bhala?

Naina (irritate) - to fir kon chlega mere sath?
Tai ji - o gudiya.. ek din nh jayegi to bhagwan ruth nh jaege..Kal chl peete
Naina - nahi.. me har somwar jati hu .Muje jana hai.. theek hai me akele hi chli jati hu aaj..

N she went. 
Chachi ji - dekho iss ldki ko kitna bechain  hai mandir jane ke liye jaise ki aaj hi bhgwan ise iska manchaha war dene wale hai ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

( Wo khte h na kbi kbi muh se nikli bat sach ho jati hai..Kya pta aaj chachi ji ki bat bh sach ho jae )




I know again it's short update..But m trying..Sowwieee.. hope you like the part.  Suggestions are always appreciated..
Anjali33 thumbnail
Anniversary 7 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update
Coincidences or destiny๐Ÿ˜ณ
Update soon and bit longer plzz
dreamyp thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 6 years ago
PART -3

At mandir,
It's a beautiful morning of diwali. Bhajan has started in temple. Bell sound is so musical to ears. Sameer n dadu comes to temple. Dadu Mets his old young group there n he start introducing sameer to them. Sam being the good boy take blessing from each of them.  Dadu friends are very much impressed from sam bcoz of his values n behavior. 
Sam take the permission from dadu n just roam around to see the beauty.
He is feeling a peace coming here mano kuch accha hone wala ho. 

On other side naina comes to temple on her bicycle murmuring uff late ho gyi aaj toh..Bhagwan ji aarti khatam na ho gyi ho..

Inside temple, sam very affectionately seeing the ram sita idols mano kuch baten chal rh ho unme.

Aarti starts n here comes naina inside.. a wind just passed away through sam indicating Wo aa gyi... 
Naina also feeling aaj kuch to alag hai. 
Both are standing 2 feet away from each other folding hands n eyes closed.

Pandit ji come with aarti thal firstly to sameer.. he takes the aarti n thanks god for having a lovely family.
Then pandit ji comes to naina..She takes the aarti but this time she felt a connection with that diya. She just ignored it takes aarti n go to idol ..

Naina - bhagwan ji.. aapko to pta hai next month se exam hai.. n hmesha ki tarah muje darr lag rha h..aisa nahi ki me padhi nahi hu par aapko to pta h na wo sanjay kitna competition deta h muje. Iss bar b me hi 1st aau okkk.. 

Sameer was just standing near her he was quietly listening to her conversation with bhagwan ji n smiling. So cute. He was about to tap her but suddenly dadu called him. 

Sam - aaya.. .. Anjane me hi he prayed to god ( make her every wish complete.. such a innocent soul she is) 
seeing her last time he went .. feeling a sudden emptiness naina turned n found no one. 

Naina (in mind) - muje aisa kyu lga ki koi tha.. 
Again ignoring her stupid thoughts she said bie to bhgwan ji n took prasad n left.
Here sam comes back to see that innocent angel but found no one. 

Dadu comes from back - kya hua sameer?  Kisko dhoond rhe ho?
Sam (seeing here n there) -  kisi ko b to nahi..
Dadu (teasing) - kahin sach me hmare rajkumar ko uski rajkumari to nh mil gyi?
Sam (lil blush n smiling) - kya aap b na dadu.. jb milegi tb sbse phle aap hi ko milwauga..
Dadu - chlo will wait for that moment..
Taking prasad both left from mandir.

Kehte hai jodi ishwar bnate hai pr kya sameer naina ki jodi b ishwar bna chuke hai ya unke liye kuch or socha h unhone?
Lets see... ๐Ÿ˜‰

braveheartdoc thumbnail
Anniversary 8 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 6 years ago
Part 2
Sorry dear I missed the update earlier๐Ÿ˜ณ
Coming to that i liked how cutely naina decides to go alone to the temple and their dadaji taking him to the temple๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I'm sure they both will meet each other...their respective life partners๐Ÿ˜›