"Behlava" // OS: AU // Asfiya *Updated: 12/4/17* - Page 3

Haha OMG why do I have a feeling that Asfi's drink was different than the rest.
Yes naughty Zubi!!!!! Best kind of Zubi there is actually

Ah! Zubi mixed something in Asfand's drink, didn't she? Naughty Zubiya is fun to read. More, please. 

Awee, so sweet, Our naughty Zubi surely mixed something in his drink😆  I have a feeling some mirchi? love your story, I am so looking forward to these two falling in love. Waiting for the next part...

This sounds so refreshing and beautiful! A typical desi take on their story, loving it!

Originally posted by: --HiNa--

best writer of yks

do i need to say i love all your os

I appreciate the love but please...I am not even being humble when I say, I can't write Asfiya's emotional depth like Aims nor have superb grasp on their inner workings like SanFran nor can I write their intimate moments to perfection like nittygritty.  There are many others who write much better than me.  I just cheat and give you guys overly descriptive scenes. 😆

 

Originally posted by: DarkPhoenix93

Loved, loved the update! An arranged marriage...I like the premise! Zubiya mixed something in Asfand's glass didnt she?😆

I am going to enjoy these 2 falling for each other in this story! What about Shehroze,Asifa and Haroon? Will Asfand's family go to Neelum Valley?

Can't wait for the next update!

I know what was I thinking going for something so non-romantic as an arranged marriage! "Lekin mujhe challenging environment mai kaam karna pasand hai..."

I don't know if they will make an appearance in the story yet, maybe small cameos but since there is no working environment on display here, no promises.

No Neelum Valley, they came to Karachi instead na.

Originally posted by: nittygritty1

Haha OMG why do I have a feeling that Asfi's drink was different than the rest.
Yes naughty Zubi!!!!! Best kind of Zubi there is actually

Because it was. 😆 I hope I am not going too OTT with their characters.  But you have to remember Zubiya is much younger here and haven't experienced pain or loss of her mother...yet.

 

Originally posted by: SS88

Ah! Zubi mixed something in Asfand's drink, didn't she? Naughty Zubiya is fun to read. More, please. 

Yes ma'am she sure did.  Zubiya was so quiet and reserved, its fun to write her like this.

Originally posted by: fanraya

Awee, so sweet, Our naughty Zubi surely mixed something in his drink😆  I have a feeling some mirchi? love your story, I am so looking forward to these two falling in love. Waiting for the next part...

Ha! Well it has to be something that was in her reach.  Molly was like, what was it? Mirchi? HCL? H2SO4? hahaahha  You'll find out soon enough.

Originally posted by: Cheesybites

This sounds so refreshing and beautiful! A typical desi take on their story, loving it!

Aww thank you Cheesy.  Your feedback is always so well thought out.  I look forward to it. <3

Aap aage bhi kuch likhengi ?

OMG!! This was soo good! I'm really looking forward to this! But if you can accept my request, please join Instagram for the FF because I mostly read FF there, and there are loads of more people who can read it!😉

This is absolutely amazing! Loved the story so far. ❤️