"Behlava" // OS: AU // Asfiya *Updated: 12/4/17*

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A/N: Okay, so. This is an AU (Alternate Universe) fic.  Sort of.  I cut into the timeline after Daniyal's death but before Asfandyar's going abroad for specialization.  With a few changes: 1) Zubiya's mother is not dead.  Mah talaat's confrontation with her husband never occurred. 2) Fariyal was never engaged to Asfi.


Feedback appreciated. Enjoy!


Disclaimer: "Yakeen Ka Safar and its characters belong to the ever so talented Ms. Farhat Ishtiaq and the keen eyed Momina Duraid Productions.  I have no claims to them.  Just borrowing them for my musings with much love and admiration for their craft.

 


"Behlava

 

Prologue

The auditorium was buzzing with people.  There were heads as far as your vision can take you.  Geeti and Lubna quickly strode down to their seats in the third aisle.  Lubna made a mental note to thank her friend, who was the principal of the college, for accommodating them on such short notice.  She as well as Usman really wanted Geeti to start living again.  It had been almost two years after Daniyal's untimely death and it had hit all of them hard but Geeti had absorbed the shock most.  She had stopped going out, stopped making phone calls to everyone but her parents, isolating herself from friends.  Encapsulating herself in her room with only her son Siam as her company.  They had moved a year ago from their home in Islamabad to their old family abode in Karachi at Usman's behest.  He just couldn't take the disgrace and humiliation in his close circles in Islamabad anymore.  The rape scandal that had snatched away his son's life had also taken their social circle and his family's will to live.  He wanted to change their environment in the hopes of change in circumstances but that hadn't helped much either.  Most of the time they all stayed in their rooms, only meeting at the dinner table to share meals together.  It seemed like time was standing still for them.  It wasn't just Geeti but Usman was keeping to himself too.  Staying in his home office most times reminiscing the perfect son he was so proud of.  He had stopped criticizing Asfi for his irresponsible behavior. Not that there was much to be criticized anymore.  Asfi had recoiled into himself after his beloved brother's death.  He was now a distant image of the fun loving, never serious, always cracking jokes on someone's expense- type guy.  And Lubna feared he was growing more and more distant with each passing day.  Something had to be done to get them all out of the shadows of dismay.  As much as she hated the thought of living a life without Daniyal she had decided to make some sort of change in their mundane existence.  They needed a splash of happiness to wash away the sorrow.  Since Geeti had strictly defied the prospect of remarrying, saying she can't even comprehend being with anyone other than Daniyal. Lubna had come to the conclusion that the only way to evade this sadness is to get Asfi married to a nice girl who can pick up the spirits of her forlorn son and hopefully adding a fresh face to the family will help break the monotony in their lives.  They needed a "khushi and it was high time they get it.  As she didn't know many people in Karachi, she had started visiting events like exhibitions and talent shows such as this one that she had dragged Geeti to on her scouting mission.

"Waise mama aap dhond tu rahi hain Asfi ke liye larki lekin woh tayyar bhi hai?" Geeti asked, slightly turning her head as another performance ended.

"Haan maine uss se poocha tha." Lubna acknowledged, "Pehle tu woh waqai tayyar nahi tha.  Lekin phir maine usse samjhaya ke tumhe kabhi tu karni hi hai shadi, tu abhi kyon nahi?"

"Mama aisa tu nahi hai ke woh kissi ko pasand karta ho?" Geeti inquired.

"Nahi. Aur agar karta tu zaroor batata maine uss se sab se pehle yehi poochha tha ke agar tumhe koi pasand hai, apni colleague ya class fellow wagaira tu mujhe bata do.  Lekin uss ne kaha ke, 'mama aisa koi scene nahi hai.  Mai medical school parhne gaya tha larki dhondne nahi!'," She said laughingly, "Ab dekho na, waise bhi aab uss ka MBBS ho chukka hai.  Uss ki house job bhi complete ho jayegi phir uss ke baba usse states bhaijna chahte hain specialization ke liye.  Tu acha haina agar uss ki baat ho jaye kaheen.  Ya tu shadi specialization ke baad ho jayegi ya phir woh biwi ko saath hi le jaye." She nodded looking Geeti. "Acha haina iss tarah hum bhi relax ho jayenge ka wahan uss ka khayal rakhne wala koi hai, woh akela nahi hai."

"Wah mama! Aap ne tu poori planning ki howi hai." Geeti admired her elder's foresight, amused.

"Aur tum younhi muskurati raha karo," Lubna said adoringly at her daughter-in-law, "bahar niklogi logon se milogi tu tumhara bhi dil behla rahega aur mujhe bhi bohat acha lage ga."

"Acha mama," Geeti smiled dismissively, "Woh dekhain ek aur act shoru ho gaya."

A young girl stood center stage, dressed in a traditional white anarkali frock with cobalt churidar, her head adorned with cobalt colored topi and a multi-colored dupatta that was pinned to her topi, flowing at her back.  She recited the emotional dialogues with such veracity and conviction.  Her lithe figure would've been easily drowned out if it wasn't for her captivating personality.  She had an angelic face, delicate features, and long hair tied in a neat plait.  Her striking feature being her big emotive eyes that shinned ever so brightly, full of expression and unshed tears.

"Yeh larki kitni pyari haina?" Geeti said pointedly.

Lubna straightened up in her chair, paying attention, "Haan.  Bohat pyari hai."

The next part of the act started and the mystery girl was now dancing on traditional anarkali themed music.  Her liquid hand movements had a quintessential quality.  There was a certain luminescence about her smile.  She looked like a pretty butterfly fluttering by on majestic wings.  Her path erratic; one step back, one step forward.  Her poly-chromatic dupatta bending light like tiny prisms as she spun in circles, floating on the rhythmic current of air.  Synchronizing her effortless grace she danced away in tune with the symphony.  Magical, Beautiful, Free.

Lubna had seen many girls up till now in her prospect search for Asfi, but this girl seemed special.  She thought how Asfi loved music and enjoyed dancing at Daniyal and Geeti's wedding with his friends and cousins.  How he had not touched his guitar ever since Daniyal's death.  Asfi was despondent and she was like a ray of light.  This girl's obvious young age will make her adapt to whatever environment she is introduced to much faster, much easier.

"Bohat hi pyari hai." This time Lubna said it decidedly, more to herself than to Geeti.

The act finished and the host came to the podium, "a round of applause for Ms. Zubiya Khalil.  Judges please allot your points now. " She said clapping.

Now that her persona was shed, panting from her efforts, the girl bowed shyly and laughed nervously as she turned to step off the stage.

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One thing I am a little confused about. Is Zubia still in college? Did the Rameez incident happen and she had a brush with Asfi or not?
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Originally posted by: AnayaZ

Excited to read more. Please continue soon. 

One thing I am a little confused about. Is Zubia still in college? Did the Rameez incident happen and she had a brush with Asfi or not?



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Chapter 1

Backstage, in the dressing room Zubiya sat in front of the mirror all alone with her mother fretting about, pacing the small area.  The rest of her fellow students were either waiting for their performance in the lounge or were enjoying the show with their families.

"Zubi jaldi karo! 6 bajne wale hain tumhare abbi ek ghante mai ghar pohanch jayenge aur humain un se pehle ghar pohanchna hai.  Tumhe pata hai na ke woh kitna khafa hote hain humare iss tarah se be-waja ghar se bahar nikalne pe." Mah-Talaat warned her daughter with worry etched on her face.

"Ammiii!" Zubiya elongated the syllable with annoyance, "Abbi ko tu har waqt, humari har cheez pe naraaz hone ki adaat hai.  Ghar se bahar mutt niklo.  Tumhari dost har waqt phone kyon karti rehti hai?  Sar pe dupatta kyon nahi liya howa.  TV kyon dekha.  Wagaira, wagaira. She mocked, staring in the mirror, concentrating on taking the pins off her hair accessory. "Magar hum be-waja tu nahi nikle.  Kaam se hi nikle hain."

"Yeh kaam hai?" Mah-Talaat stated furiously, "Ek tu tumhari zid ke agay mai har gayi iss dafa lekin ayanda mai tumhari ek nahi suno gi.  Aur tum ne promise kiya hai ke ayanda se mujh se iss qisam ki farmaishain nahi karogi!" Mah-Talaat reminded, raising her index finger in her daughter's face.  Getting a meek nod in return from Zubiya.  "Aur tum ne tu mujh se kaha tha ke sirf ek play hai? Hain?" She demanded staring accusingly at her daughter, "Ghazab khuda ka! Woh tu tumhare TV pe nach ganna dekhne pe itna khafa hote hain.  Agar unhe pata chal gaya ke unki beti itne sare logon ke samne naach rahi thi tu woh tu meri halaat kharab kardainge."

Watching her mother be so scared of her father's misbehavior always used to make her tiny heart ache with sympathy for her.  Guilt clutched at her, for begging her mother to let her partake in the talent show in the first place.  She was very aware that her home life was nowhere as normal as her friends.  Still, she couldn't help but long for small things in life.  Like wishing she knew about the current Bollywood heartthrob her fellow class mates were fawning over or wanting to buy clothes of her own choosing instead of Abbi or Sheema bhabi getting them for her.  She knew Ammi felt her growing exasperation from the suffocating atmosphere in the house and would try to make up for it by cooking her favourite food or indulging her by other means, such as letting her attend school functions.  She felt bad for taking advantage of her loving mother and not thinking ahead.

She left the task at hand, got up from her chair, and grabbed her uneasy mother's arms holding her in place, "Ammi aap itna pareshan mutt hon.  Abbi ko pata nahi chalega.  Hum konsa show khatam hone ka intezar karainge.  Mujhe apni friend ke ye kapre wapis karne the usse lekin agar aap itna pareshan ho rahi hain tu mai usse baad mai de dongi." She consoled.

Mah-Talaat considered it for a moment, than shook her head and went, "Nahi acha nahi lagta.  Ek tu uss ne ahsaan kiya tumhe apne kapre de kar... tum jaldi kar lo bus."

"Assalam Alaikum," Lubna and Geeti greeted the mother daughter duo.  Right after Zubiya's performance, Lubna and Geeti had approached the guard at the backstage entrance, had asked him nicely and were let in after some persuasion from a blue colored Quaid-e-Azam.

"Walaikum Salam." Mah-Talaat and Zubiya both responded in kind.

"Mera naam Lubna hai aur yeh meri bahu... balke beti hi samjhain, Geeti." They exchanged introductions, and a few customary pleasantries after Lubna came to the point. "Asal mai hum log abhi Karachi mai naye naye aye hain aur zyada logon ko nahi jante.  Aap log mujhe bohat ache lag rahe hain aur aap ki beti tu bohat hi pyari hai," She grasped Zubiya's chin adoringly.  Zubiya smiled timidly, lowering her gaze. "Itna acha laga mujhe tumhara act ke buss kiya bataon.  Tum yahan pe student ho?"

"Ji aunty mai pre-medical ki student hon. FSC part two mai." Zubiya informed.

"Mera beta bhi doctor hai aur Agha Khan mai apni house job kar raha hai.  Bohat tough parhai hoti hai medical ki.  Kitabon ke alawah kuch soojhta nahi hai usse." Lubna laughed good naturedly.

Geeti gave the petite beauty a comforting, friendly smile, "Kiya age hai tumhari?"

"18." Zubiya replied.

Seeing the obvious attention these women were giving her daughter made Mah-Talaat proud but she was also very anxious to get home soon, "Asal mai humain thori jaldi hai, iss liye bohat ma'azrat chahongi aap se Lubna.  Lekin aap logon se mil kar bohat khushi howi."

"Sorry aap logon ko disturb kiya humne." Lubna said apologetically.

"Nahi nahi aap ne humain bilkul bhi disturb nahi kiya.  Mujhe waqai aap log bohat ache lage hain."

Geeti and Lubna exchanged a look, "Agar aap mind na karain tu mujhe apna mobile number de dain.  Kuch baat karni hai aap se.  Yeh jagah kuch munasib nahi hai."

Mah-Talaat was taken aback at this request.  Not that she didn't see it coming but she didn't want her husband to find out about their excursion, if this goes in the direction she thought it might.  They seemed like really nice people from a well off family and carried themselves with dignity.  She pondered for a moment than decided there is no harm is hearing them out, "Ji beta aap likhain." Mah-Talaat addressed Geeti and as the younger girl was punching in the given number a thought occurred to Geeti, "Aunty agar aap aur Zubiya mind na karain tu mai Zubiya ke saath ek do selfies le lon?"

 

Little did they know someone else had noticed Zubiya Khalil that fateful day.

 

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"Asfi beta ek minute meri baat suno." Lubna called her son, who was strolling past her as she sat in the lounge.

"Ji mama?"

"Yahan baitho mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hai." She motioned for him to sit beside her on the couch.

"Tum itne khamosh tabiyat kab se ho gaye ho?  Pehle tu tumhari oat patang harkaton se hum har waqt aajiz rehte the, tumhari hansi se ghar har waqt gonjta rehta tha, aur aab, tumhari awaz tak sunne ko taras jati hon mai," she shared, solemnly.

"Sorry mama.  Busy rehta hon bus aur koi baat nahi hai," he guiltily replied, offering a smile that didn't reach his eyes, "aab se aap ko time dene ki, khush rakhne ki kooshish karonga."

"Mai bhi yehi chahti hon ke iss ghar mai phir se khushiyan hon.  Hum sab phir se pehle ki tarah hasain bolain aur apne dukh dard share karain." She swiped the hair away from his forehead lovingly, "Har maa ki khuwahish hoti hai ke apne bete ko dulha bana dekhe lekin mai aur tumhare baba tumhare saath koi zyadti ya zabardasti nahi karna chahte..."

"I know mama.  No one is forcing me." Asfi replied seriously.

"Maine tumhare liye ek larki dekhi hai.  Hum ne usse meri dost Farhana ke college ke talent show mai dekha tha.  Medical ki student hai bohat hi sweet aur innocent.  Mujhe aur Geeti ko tu bohat pasand ayi hai," She passed Geeti's mobile phone that held Zubiya's snap to him, "tum dekh ke batao ke tumhe kaisi lagi.  Agar tumhe achi lagti hai tu phir mai baat agay barhaon."

Asfi held the screen in the palm of his hand to look at the picture.  His face was blank and uninterested.  He opened his mouth as if to say something then closed it again.  The anticipation was killing Lubna.  After a few minutes had passed and no response came from him, Lubna started, "dekho beta agar tumhe pasand nahi hai tu koi baat nahi.  Iss se pehle bhi maine tumhe larkiyon ki pictures dikhayi theen aur tumhe pasand nahi ayeen theen," she was really hoping for an affirmative response this time as she liked this girl a lot but it was the biggest decision of her son's life and she didn't want to influence it.  She patted his head in an understanding manner, "It's okay," she sighed dejectedly, "we'll just keep looking." She tried to take the phone from his hand but he moved it away from her reach, a crease appearing on his forehead, "mama ek baat tu batain?"

Lubna scooted closer, hopefully, "haan poocho?"

"Yeh talent show kiya kissi kinder-garten ka tha?" He asked.

She slapped his arm, "Asfi!" Laughing at the first joke he had cracked in ages, "Itni bhi chhoti nahi hai.  Legal age hai.  Aur waise bhi larkiyan, larkon se zyada jaldi mature hoti hain."

"Mai samjh nahi pa raha hon ke aap inn se meri shadi karna chah rahi hain ya yeh chah rahi hain ke mai inhain goad le lon?" The amusement in his eyes betrayed the seriousness in his tone.

"Tu tum konse budhe ho gaye ho! Koi itna bara age difference nahi hai tum dono mai, sirf 6 saal ka hi tu faraq hai.  Tumhare baba mai aur mere mai 8 saal ka difference hai, tu phir?"

"Tu phir?" He asked rhetorically.

"Kaisi lagi tumhe?" She asked with bated breath.

"Mama mujhe thora waqt dain." Asfand replied, non-committedly.

"Theek hai yeh faislay sari zindagi ke hote hain.  Tum soch lo achi tarah se lekin thora jaldi.  Tumhara acceptance letter bhi aa gaya hai aur student visa bhi.  Sirf teen maheene hain humare paas.  Insha Allah agar baat bann jati hai tu phir mai chahti hon ke tum usse saath hi le jao.  Zahir hai uss ka visa lagne mai bhi time lage ga." She detailed her concern.

He stared straight ahead for a few minutes then got up and kissed the top of her head, "Okay mama, I will let you know by tomorrow."

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The next part is already written.  So be good with feedback and I will post an update soon. *grins*

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