Originally posted by: Shinynew
Okay so this is called a Bang On! Update. I loved it from head to toe. It was just perfect. So dreamy, so beautiful! Your #masoomnirdishpyaar is giving me feels ๐ณ. Sameer is so desperate๐. Ek min bhi naina ko nahin chodna h Akela. He is always ready fir romance ๐. Study sessions are back with lot of aankho me aankhein . Tap seen โค๏ธ Yayy!!. Letter ki bhi vapsi hui ๐. Swamun were superb. So pandit finally got some senses.๐. Chalo show me na sahi yahan toh mil raha hai unka TINDA Romance ๐. But the last seen stole the show. Naina ki virtual kiss and then โค๏ธ.
I am gonna read it again for sure !! Update soon coz I m eagerly waiting. ๐Thanks for the pm.LoveShiny
Originally posted by: worldequalsyou
You have saved the weekend with your update :)
Khulam khulla romance :)Sameer toh naina ke pyaar mein pagal ho chuka hain :)Just so happy to read abt them being happy together, couple goals school mein har jagah par romance suru.Samaina are just cute adorable.Thanks for the PM, like always you rocked.Loved your update juat loved it :) amazing :)Keep writing and update soon :)
Originally posted by: MissRight
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Hayeee... itna amazing kyu likhti ho? Ab ruko for the comment.. while I recover from this day dream you've put me intounres:Okay first of all, let me commend you on your fantastic writing skills! The way you write, your words, just gel together so well and are so gripping for the reader. Its just perfect- neither is it less nor over the top. You have a way with words that is a very rare quality.And the plot line is just so fantastic and well thought.. there is appropriate amount of dialogue, description, romance and Drama... the last one is very difficult to achieve, trust me I know! And I've read some stories where the plot lines are fantastic but the writer goes a little with the flow and it becomes a little overdone. But not your writing.. there are very few writers who have that ability. So Kudos! This one is definitely among my top reads!And now to the update!Hayeee the romance!!! Makes me want to go back to school, find a sameer and have him push me against the door! So HOT!Papa ki naak ke neeche romantic Sam.. miyan bhai ki daring?๐Library is truly one of the most romantic places...if one knows how to use it properly๐Awww Naina ka pyaara sa love...shes too adorable man!!Ek to vaise bhi bestfriend dating sibling is a huge nightmare for most people... upar se dushman-turned-Friend... ouch Arjun ๐All in all, as usual.. fantabulous update!!! Waiting to read more... whether a continuation of this ya new story...PS: I'm still hoping for a jealous sameer from you ๐
Originally posted by: Samaina_1990
Hello there Mrs. Rai ๐ I hope that when Randeep sees you, the look on his face is the same he had when he seemed smitten by Naina on his birthday...lost totally in you...unable to take his eyes off you๐BOLD: Mrs. Rai..I thank you from the bottom of my heart for such beautiful comments on my writing skills. I'm honoured really. I read these comments over and over again. You cannot imagine the satisfaction n happiness I feel when my readers appreciate my story and my way of writing. This was frankly my maiden attwmpt at writing a story...I never knew I would get so much of love, support and encouragement that I'm getting from our forumwasis here...I feel we've become a family here...all connected n standing together๐ณ so thank you very much dear for the flattering comments. I hope I'm able to stand upto your expectations in the future as well.About the update, yeah I too feel the library can be turned into one of the most romantic places to be found...classic!! Except that if you just remove the Rakshas librarian n Sameer's sasurji, it becomes heaven!!๐ While I was trying to write down these love moments, I realized I've written so much...it's just that even I can't get enough of their romance. Everytime I remembered, I missed out on this scene, that scene, that dialogue, that moment...I actually penned down the letter the last...felt it was important for Sameer to know what he had meant to her since the beginning...so many links n scenes have still been left out...wpuld try to incorporate them in this story or the next that I write...Yeah, I remember your request for a jealous Sameer...tbh I want to see Sameer jealous in the show too...maybe some guy eyeing his girl n then we see the Sameer Maheshwari gussa n he beats him black n blue...though he did beat the bet boys like that for trying to insult Naina...I will keep you posted on the next part...๐ณ๐
Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Hey Sam...so intense and romantic update...so finally sameer got to read her first love letter and he was surprised to know that she loved him from the very beginning๐
Their romantic moments have been very beautifully and graciously penned down and i loved all of them...especially the water tap one๐โบ๏ธPandit and Preeti confession scene was hilarious๐๐คฃA very beautiful narrative and if we get something like this in the show...the whole fandom would go crazy๐๐Thanks for the pm dear๐
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