Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Read both the parts in one go... it was amazing how you introduced the new character๐
The tinda competition was so cute... Shefali's advice to Naina made all the events take a turn and all 3 guys were shocked to see this changed Naina right in front of them...loved to read the entire 2 parts๐๐Full of wow hilarious moments๐๐Thanks for the pm๐
Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
Loved your creativity take.The characterization is a novel idea.๐ The scenes are hilarious and and so are dialogues.Looking forward to further updates.
Thanks for the PM And update soon.๐
Originally posted by: aishwarya12joys
Please update soon. I love this story I thought you will not continue. Thanks for continuing it. Please update soon
Originally posted by: Samaina_1990
Loved the story till now- the first part was really funny- akhrot ice-cream kaise ban gaya...250 nahi 500% pagal...Sam singing tayyab ali in front of Rakesh...too good...n Sam gettting possessive about Naina...nice to see a different turn of events here...waiting for more updates!
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