Saina OS-Special Long Promo-Pg 6 Rakesh V/S Maya

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Posted: 6 years ago
Ok guys those who don't know me Hi I am Nikhita!
I have been frequently putting some posts on this forum and have been a active writer till last year but ands after a long time I have finally found a show which could make me curious and could inspire me to write something on..
I actually wait for 10:30 to watch it rather than catching it up next day 
so here I am presenting an OS on this Mount Abu track
hope I have the same touch with writing which I had till last year
And ya One more thing I am not aware much about 1980's songs which are played in show but yes I am aware of some mid and late 1990's and some very old songs so bear me on that noteπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Story starts from here...
Tayyab Ali pyar ka dushman haay haay
Mere yaar ka dushman haay-haay haay-haay (x2)

Pandit-Aree yeh paap kaha se aaya
Munna-arre yaar Sameer abhi to tere baal gaye kaam se..
Sameer-Nahi yaaro Yeh Sameer Maheshwari ka wada hai (ruffling his own hair)
Naina-Papa aap yaha pe?aap mujhe bye bolne aaye ho?
Rak-Arre kuchi bhi mai to tum sabke saath aane wala hu,awara ladko se tumhari raksha karne (looking at Sameer)
Naina-Kya?papa mai thik rahungi aap ye..
Rak-tum chup raho aur chalo abhi aur Swati ke saath hi rehna
Sam-tu sahi tha Munna yeh aadmi 250% pagal hai
Pand-250 nahi pure 500% pagal hai.
Mun-Chalo yaar abhi to iss librarian se peecha chudaye
Rak-waise Naina tere liye ek surprise hai
Nain-kya?
Rak-kya nahi kaun..wo dekh..
Preeti enters
Naina-PREETI!!!
Pandit-Padosan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! haaye kaise
Preeti-Aaj tauji pata nahi kaise mood mei hai mai trip pe aau iss liye papa ko mana liya
Naina-chalo accha hua
Pand-Bahut bahut accha hua

In Bus:
Ji le le song...
(Ok listen guys I am really not aware of 1980's songs so either it will be late 1990's songs or 1960-70's whichever I feel like)
Teacher-Chalo baccho hum sab gaane gaati hai...
All- ok
Munna-Koi haseena jab ruth jaati hai to (looking at Swati)
Swa-Khudko kya samajhta hai majnu yeh ladka hai,college mei naya naya aaya ek ladka hai..
Pan-Tum aa gaye ho noor aa gaya hai...(looking at preeti)
Sameer- Mere rang mei rangne waali...
Naina-Meri wafa meri dua mera naseeb hai
Rak-Babuji dheere chalna zara sambhalna ha bade dhoke hai bade dhoke hai iss raah mei..(looking at naina sameer)
Sam-Tayyab Ali pyar ka dushman haay haay
Mere yaar ka dushman haay-haay haay-haay
Rak-Sheesha ho ya dil ho akhir toot jaata hai(looking at naina sameer)

After reaching Mount Abu
Pand-yeh librarian ko kya ho gaya hai?
Muna- ha yaar pata nahi kahi isko shart ke baare mei pata to nahi chal gaya,kaise behke behke sad,gusse wale gaane ga raha tha..
Sam-nahi yaar kaun bataega usko,na hum teen aur senior students aaye nahi hai
Naina comes
Nai-Sameer tumse kuch baat karni thi
Sam-haa bolo na...
Nai-wo tumhe thand lag rahi hogi na to tumhare liye yeh lo mai kuch layi hu..
and she gives him the completed sweater
Munna,Pan-bhai yeh to matlab gazab ho gaya..
Sameer is shocked-Naina yeh tumne kaha se laaya
Naina-maine banaya hai
Sameer for the first time felt like an honour wow a girl he always considered behenji,made fun of her,made a bet on her just to seek revenge from her she prepared
a sweater for him ,he rembered the swea.. sentence on phone call when she asked him his favorite color,when he was talking with his friends about sweater..
suddenly he was snapped out of thoughts by Naina..
Naina-Sameer! batao na kaisa hai?
Sameer-wo yeh bahut pyaar hai thanks Naina isse behtar gift mujhe aaj tak nahi mila
Pand,Munna were busy with their Pandit and Padosi,where they didn't pay a heed to them lol
Sameer-Tum bahut cute ho Naina
Naina-getting blushy but also scared as she is very shy about these things
Sam-kya hua ?Tumhe accha nahi laga?
Nai-nahi aadat nahi hai yeh word sunne ki.. bachpan mei jab choti thi tab log bolte the par ab?
Sam-arre baba uss sense mei nahi cute matlab pyaari aur ha bacho wali pyaari nahi dusri waali pyaari
Nai-to..
Sam-to..?
Nai-to..?
Munna-arre bhai Sameer ab to mujhe to pe gaana banane ka man kar raha hai
Voice-To ab sab so jao 
Naina-Papa!
Sam-are yaar
Rak-aur naina yeh sweater tunne banaya hai?
Naina-ji papa ..
Rak-to isse kya dikha rahi hai,ladko ko in cheezo ki samajh nahi hoti hai,Chalo le chalo isse saath mei..
Naina-ji
Rak-Mujhe tujhe kissi se milwana hai
Naina-Kaun?
Rak-beta yaad hai tujhe Amar hum jab pichli baar Dehradun aaye the teri mausi ki shaadi mei tab tumse mila tha ,are tere bachpan ka dost..
Naina-Amar?arre ha woh Golu Molu! 
Rak-ha wohi chal tera bahar intezaar kar raha hai ,mausi ko tujhe teri mummy ki kuch tasveeren deni thi aur wo aajkal Mount Abu mei hostel mei hai to bas aa gaya hai
Naina-ha papa chalo jaldi chalte hai,she wanted to say bye to Sameer then but pyaar ka dushman ke saamne pyaar ke bukhar ki kaha baat chalti hai.. so she went without saying anything
Sameer,Munna,Pandit-AMAR!
Sam-Yeh kaun hai yaar,dekha nahi tum logo ne Naina kitni excited thi bina bye bole chali gayi,aisa lag raha tha alag hi Naina ho
Pan-chal chalke dekhte hai uss Amar ko
Preeti overhears..
Preeti-AMAR!kaha hai wo?
Pan-padosi tum bhi!
Pree-Aree Naina aur wo kitni masti karte the,gaane sunte the,dance karte the
Sam-in shock!Naina Amar ke saath dance karti thi par wo to itni shy hai na?
Pree-Arre Sameer Wo Naina ki life ka sabse pehla friend hai
Munna-Aree pandit ke bhi pehle?
Pree-ha munna Sawti ke bhi pehle ,wo to kya hai hum mausi ki shaadi mei gaye the to mausaji ke friend ka beta hai aur milte barabar in dono mei itni acchi dosti ho gayi ki kya batau
tab Naina aur mai sirf 5 saal ke the,hum sab khelte the aur Amar tab itni golu molu tha na Naina baar baar uski tond par maarti thi
Sameer- ab to usse milna hi padega
they all go there and see them
Now we see a very handsome chocolate boy type face (You imagine whichever actor you would like to play this)-I am imagining an actor whose name also I don't knowπŸ˜† but yes I have seen him in Bindaas show Sun yaar try maar football episode he looks good seedha sadha yet cute guyπŸ˜›,also he played a character of lucky in secret diaries Hidden chapters-though I have not seen the programπŸ˜†πŸ˜†)check link for image
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Naina- Golu Molu tum!
Amar-Hi Sharmili!
Sam-Sharmili! yeh kya hai
Preeti-Naina shy hai na lekin sirf iske saamne Naina bekhauf khulke baatein karti hai uske papa ke saamne bhi
humare ghar mei Amar ki bahut izzat hai,taiji tak waise kissi ladke par bharosa nahi karti par agar Amar humare saath ghumne jaana chahe to allow kar deti hai mai jaa rahi hu bye
Preet-humse bhi mil lo warna sara din bus golu molu aur sharmili karte rahoge,waise kaafi wajan kam kar liya hai tumne bilkul amir khan ki tarah lag rahe ho
Amar-Hi Preeti !kaisi hai tu?
Pan-chalo shukar hai padosi ko isne koi nickname nahi diya
Sam-lekin Naina ko kyu de raha hai
Rak-preeti yeh kaisi bhasha hai?
Preeti-sorry chachaji
rak-thik hai thik hai
Pan whispering to Sameer-tu tension mat le shart tu hi jeetega
Sameer-in mind bhaad mei jaaye shart yeh hai kaun yaar?
Naina-papa mai Amar ke saath ghumne jau?
Rak-ha jao na baccha lekin sambhalkar aur jaldi aa jaana thik hai
Munna-abe librarian ko kya ho gaya?yeh akhrot ice cream kaise ban gaya
Swati-itte handsome ladke ko leke to koi bhi baap apni beti ke liye ispe bharosa kar sakt hai(looking dreamily)
Munn-arre oo pandit tumko hum chodkar sabhi handsome lagte hai kya?
Amar starts shivering due to cold 
Rak-Aree beta kya hua?thand lag rahi hai?Arre Naina ek kaam karo beta wo jo neele rangka sweater tumne banaya hai na wo isse de do
Sameer- NAHI!!!!!!munna pandit cover his mouthπŸ˜†
Rak-koi chilaya kya?😑
Naina-papa wo sweater to iski size ka bhi nahi hoga aur wo maine aise hi banaya hai to wo..
rak-beta insaniyat rakhne mei koi buri baat nahi hai,dekho na usse thand lag rahi hai
Sam-yeh yahi rehta hai na to isse thand ka andaaz hona chahiye ,faltu mei apni body kam ki hui show off karne aaya to sweater nahi pehna wo sweater naina ne mere liye banaya hai
Swati-haaye sameer tumhara yeh possessive side to bilkul Darr ke Shahrukh ki tarah hai(assume its released at that time)
Munna-pandit tujhe yeh harkat achhi lagti hai kya?
Swati-sirf kuch ladko pe gadho pe nahi!
Rak-Naina sweater do
Amar-its ok uncle usse nahi dena to koi baat nahi
Rak-arre nahi beta le lo ek tarah se samjho bhagwaan ne yeh sweater iss waqt tumhare liye hai bheja ho,mujhe to pata bhi nahi chalta ki naina ne sweater banaya hai chalo sameer kissi to kaam aaya
agar tum usse sweater nahi dikhati to yeh aaj Amar tak na pauchta
Sam-maine yeh pehen hi lena chahiye tha
Rak-chalo mai chalta hu
he goes
Sma and gang enters-Wo mere liye hai
Amar-tum kaun?
Sam-Sameer Maheshwari naam hai mera!
Amar- hi Mai Amar Raizada
Sam-hi!wo sweater mera hai
Amar-tumhara naam likha hai ispe?Naina kya yeh tumne uske liye banaya hai?
Sam-usse kya poochte ho maine kaha na mera hai,mai uska dost hu
Naina-ha amar hum dono dost hai nirdosh aur pavitra dost
Amar-fine ek kaam karte hai sweater naina ne ek banaya hai aur umeedwaar do!
to hum aaj Naina ki hi ek favorite cheez ka competition rakhte hai
Sam-kya?
Amar- arre tum naina ke dost ho aur tumhe uski favorite cheez nahi pata?Preeti jaanti ho na?
Preeti-arre nahi!MUBARAK HO AAJ PHIR TINDE BANNE HAI!πŸ˜†
Sam-kya!πŸ˜•
I know its a very long part to read and in fact pretty time consuming to write to kya karu short story decide kiya flow mei likhte likhte long ho gayiπŸ˜†
Please let me know how you people found this story...😊




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Posted: 6 years ago
Okay so in our Principal Sir's voice
"Nikitha!
Kya  gazab ka likhi ho kahaani
Has has ke aaye ankhon mein paani." πŸ˜‰

Really I had a great time reading this.Do continue and keep bringing more.Enjoyed.πŸ˜ƒ
And PM me once you give any update.😊
Keep writing and Keep Smiling.
With love-
Minu πŸ˜³
Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Loved it !! Loved it !! Loved it !!...hilarious πŸ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago
Omg So hilarious...I was reading keeping each character in mind. Please continue :)
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Posted: 6 years ago
🀣🀣 This was so funny!! I think I am gonna read it 2 more times. Please Please continue..πŸ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hahah awesome OS 😳
Loved reading every bit of it
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Loved it !! Loved it !! Loved it !!...hilarious πŸ˜†

Thank you so much dear 
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Loved it !! Loved it !! Loved it !!...hilarious πŸ˜†

Thank you so much 
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Originally posted by: chandu80

Omg So hilarious...I was reading keeping each character in mind. Please continue :)

Thank you 
Glad to know that πŸ˜Š
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🀣tinde
Tum b na.. bhot badiya...
Waiting for next..