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Posted: 5 years ago
This is amazing  they do not get to rishab and tanya i hope all get free from rocky and usaman.
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Interesting update👏
The gang landed in another trouble
Hoping they escape soon
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Originally posted by: Muskanika

Part 93

What an update ! 
I also have happy tears in my life !😭😊
Tanya is just infinitely awesome ! I am a very big Tanya fan , and probably the first Taniyan ! She is lovely . She is an inspiration ! ❤️❤️ Full marks to her , no ... More than full marks to her 112% no.. 500% no.. infinitely many %⭐️

Hey bhagwan ! Karan-Rishabh milan with luthras.  Honestly speaking they are so filmy.  😆
PreeRan are also too filmy . 😆
RishNya were more lovely than filmy !😊


RuHil separation! What ! 😲
I know Ashi di and the dramebaaz (filmy) MaHi . They will pakka give Roo a surprise of her marriage with Sahil . 😆

Tanya's baby girl ! Wow ! Yay!!😃
Khushi 🥳🤗
Itni si hassi , itni si khushi 
Itna sa tukdaa chaand ka
Khaabon ke tinkon se, chal banaye aashiyan 
Dabe-dabe paaon se , chale haule-haule zindagi 
Thoda-sa tera sa hoga , thoda mera bhi hoga,
Apna ye aashiyan!

You're really a rockstar Ashi di !I am delighted!
Keep smiling👏


Yeh lo aapka reply 
First of all thank you million times 😆 for taking time to read chapter side by side commenting. I never imagined I would write such a character that will dwell in people's heart 😳. All my readers know one thing in initial plot I decided to kill Tanya in the very end of story 😭 still can do the same. 

Haha Preeran were born to be filmy but filmy does not suit our lovely Rishya they are fictional couple 😳

Bechare Mahi are not dramebaaz like their children, nobody can compete them (you probably know wh they are 😆). You will have to wait to know Ruhill and who surprises who 
Tanya madam ki beti unke jaisi hi hogi na, carbon copy. Hayee I wish I included that song in update but never mind. Itna kaafi hai na? 😉
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Thanks for the reply and for fulfilling my demands . It means a lot to me that you always bear my nakhre . Love you Ashi di . 🤗
Tanya is great ! And MaHi are dramebaaz but their children are double dramebaaz !😆
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Posted: 5 years ago
Wow loved this bit 
Preeran moment at the start was amazing 
All of them fell in trouble again 
Felt bad for preeran 
Waiting to see how they escape this problem 
Update soon 
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Part 100

The goons catch Tanya from road and bring in front of Usmaan mercilessly. 

Rocky ; one thing you have to accept boss this girl is truly a bomb, what she did with Rajveer Singh is applaudable 

Usmaan (grabs her hair) : you are the one who have shaken my whole life's business, what two countries government could not do you did in one day 

Tanya : thats why I say, you should never underestimate others specially enemies, and one more thing this deed only scoundrel like you can do 

"Rocky give her such death even the soul shakes up orders him to burn her alive 

Karan : no don't (says softly with pain) 

Rocky drags her to the deserted store room filled. 

"Any last wish, even if it was who would fulfill it Rocky makes fun of her while igniting fire 

Rishab comes at the right time and have lengthy fight with him. 

"Even fate thought twice before taking her away from me what is your worth Rishab clutches his neck but stops seeing her plea 

"Tanya you are okay goes to her immediately who is holding her stomach 

Tanya : don't worry about me please go save your brother and Preeta 

Rishab : I cannot leave you alone, come on get up you are not weak 

"I won't be able to, please go before you lose your brother, he is your life na or else whole world will lose trust on this pure brother relation go please Tanya begs him crying with pain 

Rishab : I will come back okay (kisses her forehead and leaves tearfully) but you promise me you won't lose your spirit 


Kya Kabhi Savera.. Ha Ha

Laata Hai Andhera.. Ha Ha

Sookhi Siyahi

Deti Hai Gawaahi

Sadiyon Puraani

Aisi Ik Kahaani

Reh Gayi, Reh Gayi

Ankahee..

Ankahee..


Kya Kabhi Savera.. Ha Ha

Laata Hai Andhera.. Ha Ha

Sookhi Siyahi

Deti Hai Gawaahi

Sadiyon Puraani

Aisi Ik Kahaani

Reh Gayi, Reh Gayi

Ankahee..

Ankahee..


"I will wait for you come back soon she embraces him tightly with some bleeding on head 

While separating their hands both recalls their marriage vows of not leaving each other. Tanya stabs Rocky in defense with the knife but in process hurts herself too. Rishab goes to save his other siblings sneaking into the mansion. 

Kritika : so much time passed why they have kept us here don't know how bhai and Preeta must be 

Rishab comes to the place all of them are captive except Preeta and Karan. 

"Bhai thank god you are here, please save us this people are monsters Roo requests him

Rishab : don't worry I am here to save you all, Sahil you take girls with you and call cops, Dhruv come with me to find Karan and Preetaji 

Dhruv : yes bhai 

Sahil : lets go come on 

"Take care Krtika tells him 

Dhruv : I wil bring your brother back stay assured, go 

The trio leaves out of mansion safely. Rishab and Dhruv fights with the guys reaching Karan Preeta. They are dumbfounded with couple's condition. 

"Bhai you finally came Karan smiles seeing his brother in front of him 

Rishab : yaar you have become so weak, where did that passion go of fighting (hits him) 

"Oouch it hurts bhai Karan gets in funny mode 

Rishab : you think its funny, idiot seeing you in this condition if my heart is wrenching imagine what mom dad and dadi will go through 

Dhruv helps Preeta get up properly 

Rishab : now come on we have to go from here 

"No bhai you take Preeta, I cannot even walk they hit so badly Karan request him 

Rishab : shut up or else I will hit very badly get up (makes him stand up) 

The four of them fights with all goons but is stopped by Usmaan who is waiting for them at doorstep. 

Rishab : he is the one?

Karan : yes bhai he hit us badly 

"You want to go from here, then you are free but before leaving I have a surprise for you shows captured Tanya in godown 

Karan : bhai she is still with them and you came to save us here 

Usmaan : now you have two choices take your brother freely from here and leave your beloved or here I will bury all your corpse 

Rishab : leave my brother if your enmity with us 

Preeta : what are you saying? how can you leave her with this monster 

Karan : bhai have you lost it? 

"Hey mouth shut only he will speak Usmaan makes the duo quiet 

Rishab : let them go, you won't get anything keeping my brother with you 

Usmaan : I knew only you are sensible, Mona let them go 

Mona ; but Sir 

"Bhai have you gone crazy, you are willing to leave the girl for who you fought till today Karan blasts his brother first time 

"That same girl have told me to save you both, you know what she said one always have to pay for being right Rishab breakdown 

Dhruv : no bhai this is wrong, we all decided to face everything together 

Mona : all of you do this melodramatic scene outside move 


The siblings go out of mansion 

Karan : I won't go anywhere neither you, we will go back with Tanya only 

Rishab : you are not going anywhere  do you get it, you all will go to hospital directly (warns him) 

Karan : and leave you both here in hell no way 

Rishab : you can't even stand properly, Preetaji at least you make him understand 

Preeta : sorry Rishabji but this time I am with Karan, the girl for who you went against whole world now you want to leave her when she need you most 

Rishab : so easily you all thought I would leave Tanya alone here to die, she is my everything 

Dhruv ; now I see you were planning to send us and fight alone for her 

Karan ; you didn't do this right bhai 


They hear stopper landing outside the mansion

Dhruv : I think they are making arrangement to take Tanya somewhere 

Shrishti informs them about calling cops who are hidden around the mansion to catch culprits. The men bring Tanya to take her in stopper. 

Mona : but bhai where are you taking here? 

"I know those people won't remain quiet and it is very necessary to shift her from this place, what are you seeing take her in stopper at our farm house in Thailand Usmaan orders Mona to go with Tanya 


"Stop hands up A young indian cop Rehaan comes there with gun 

Usmaan ; don't even think about it, or else this girl will lose her life (points gun at Tanya) 

Rehaan : send the girl to us and surrender yourself 

Mona ; officer tell all the cops to put down the gun or else we will blast this place 

Rehaan : oh please, I am not that fool, if you blast then you all will also die 

Usmaan : we won't you because god also does not want to deal with people like us 

Rishab : please leave her you won't get anything

"Of course I will, she has shaken up my beliefs of whole life and challenged me, she might something in her Usmaan starts walking towards stopper 

Another helicopter comes but of police who fires bullet on his chest. The siblings holds Tanya who is half unconscious. Usmaan holds knife towards her but shockingly Rishab gets injured stabbed. 

"Bhai Karan shouts 

Another big fight ensues between cops and gangster. Shrishti who comes there slaps Mona and beats brutally but is stopped by her sister. Rehaan finally arrests Usmaan and Mona cleaning corruption from whole city. 

"Rishab wake up, you told me you will come back Tanya pats his face

"Bhai you cannot do this to us, Preeta tell him, he will listen to you Karan urges her to say something 

Preeta : Rishabji, you are again breaking promise, get up we have to go back to our motherland, our family, home (wipes her tears) 

"Hey wrestler stop crying now, I fulfilled my promise to come back Rishab smiles at her with tears 

Tanya (weeps) : why you did this? now what will I do without you 

Rishab : who said you are alone? now you have got reason to live right, Khushi 

"No you said we will both raise her together, I cannot do this alone do you understand she roars 

Karan : bhai you have become very mean now, you don't love me anymore 

Rishab : crazy boy, you are still on same track, now you have so many people 

"NO I only want you his eyes turn red 


Kya Kabhi, Bahaar Bhi, Peshgi Laati Hai

Aane Wale Patjhar Ki..

O.. Baarishein Naaraazagi Bhi Jataa Jaati Hain

Kabhi Kabhi Ambar Ki..

Patte Jo Shaakhon Se Toote

Bewajah Toh Nahin Roothe, Hain Sabhi..

Khwabon Ka Jharokha.. Ha Ha

Sach Tha Ya Dhokha.. Ha Ha

Maatha Sehla Ke

Nindiya Churaai

Sadiyon Puraani

Aisi Ik Kahaani

Reh Gayi, Reh Gayi

Ankahee..

O Ankahee..


Rishab closes his eyes slowly holding Karan and Tanya's hands leaving both devastated. Both meant everything to him more than his parents. Karan Tanya cries leaning head on Rishab. 


Screen turns dark with their emotional scene. 


After few months 


Luthra house 


The siblings arrange for Rishab and Tanya's nuptial night. 

Rishab : Karan can you tell me now what is this?

"This is for my brother who has right to live for his life now, time has come bro for you to leave the burden of responsibility go enjoy Karan tells him to breath peacefully 

The girls help Tanya get ready for the night. She wear simple red saree with no heavy jewelry. 

"Preeta I am very nervous, my heart is getting restless Tanya talks to her alone 

Preeta : don't be tonight is your day, bridge all the gap between you and Rishabji, you both have suffered a lot till today, make this night memorable for you both 

Tanya nods positively and goes to the room. Rishab lights up small candles in the dark room and decorates very simple unlike their life. Tanya comes there fixing her saree. Both feels embarrassed avoiding eye contact. 

Rishab : sorry everybody insisted 

The couple lean near the window for a while after storm passed their life clearing all misunderstandings. 

Rishab ; what are you thinking 

"Nothing seeing death close that day my heart was stopped, do you even realize how I felt Tanya asks him furiously 

Rishab : you should know by now our soul is one, how would I let you die 

"Then bind me in your love today so I can become yours for every birth holds his fcae 

Rishab : Tanya? (says in confusion) 

"This distance always made me guilty inside that I could not give you that happiness you deserve put her head on his chest sobbing 

"Remember what I told you, our love will always be unique and I can wait for lifelong grabs her hair gently without hurting her

"But I can't, I feel my heart is still far away from you " clutches his collar tightly 

Rishab wipes her tears with his finger on one side and kissing on her forehead. 


The moment heat up with their soft kiss turning into sensual like never before. Tanya puts her hands wrapping around his neck through whole moment pouring her love and passion they were craving. Both lets their all pain out hiding in their heart from all torture and separation. None of them feel uncomfortable of the gesture and stays on same position for long time. 



Sapna jahan dastak na de

Chaukhat thi woh aankhein meri

Baaton se thi tadaad mein

Khamoshiyan zyaada meri

Jabse pade tere kadam

Chalne lagi duniya meri


Mere dil mein jagah Khuda ki khaali thi

Dekha wahan pe aaj tera chehra hai

Main bhatakta huaa sa ek baadal hoon

Jo tere aasmaan pe aake thehra hai



Rishab make her lay on the rose petal spread at floorand continued to kiss her down her neck covering each and every bit of her skin with his lips while Tanya felt like burning in the fire of intensity. Their hands entwined whole time 

Tu rooh hai toh main kaaya banu

Taa-umr main tera saaya banu

Keh de toh ban jaaun bairaag main

Kehde toh main teri maaya banu

Tu saaz hai, main ragini

Tu raat hai, main chandni


Mere dil mein jagah Khuda ki khali thi

Dekha wahan pe aaj tera chehra hai

Main bhatakta huaa sa ek baadal hoon

Jo tere aasmaan pe aake thehra hai




Both of them have their most beautiful night together and consummating their long lasting marriage. 


Next day the bright sun rays wakes up Risbab only to find his loving wife sleeping in his arms peacefully after long time. She adjusts herself in sleep laying head on his hands. Rishab removes hair disturbing her in the sleep putting small peck on cheek. 


New year Party 


All the siblings gather for new year celebrating big party in hotel. 

"Cheers everybody all of them holds glass of wine together 


Sameer : what a party, amazing brother 

Shrishti : hello have some shame, don't even think about flirting 

Sameer : somebody explain this dumbo, no girl will even look at me you know why she knows that my wife is too dangerous 

Preeta : god stop it both of you 

Sherlyn and Sanjana comes there too joining the celebration. 

Tanya ; happy new year masi, and my sister

Sherlyn : happy new year by the way with this new year I have got big surprise 

Karan : wait wait don't tell me you are becoming scapegoat of marriage 

Preeta : whats your problem with marriage? at least don't stop that poor girl

Sherlyn : you both are very mean, spoiled my whole surprise 

"Wait what? you are? Tanya asks confusingly 

Sherlyn : you heard it right, I found my dream man finally (hugs her happily) 

Tanya ; oh my god, congratulation but where is my jiju you didn't bring him 


Lights turn off 

Sahil plays guitar entering the stage with another dashing guy who turns out to be Rehaan. 

Tanya ; he is the one? 

Sherlyn : I know he saved you all last time, i met him in India only but trust me he is very nice just how I wanted 

Tanya : does he know about your past?

"I have learned from mistakes, he accepted wholeheartedly Sherlyn says 


Dhruv and Kritika calls everybody on dance floor 


Me Gusto Mucho Bailar Bailar, Quiero Samba Quiero Salsa

Me Gusto Mucho Bailar Bailar, Quiero Samba Quiero Rumba 


Fiesta, Latina, It's Driving Wild, Come Salsa With Me, It's Party Time... (2)


( Dekho Diwaanon, Kya Mast Mast Hai Sama

Jo Hai, Abhi Hai, Ye Waqt Waqt Phir Kahaan ) ...(2)

Nayi Raat Hogi, Nayi Baat Hogi


Naye Kal Ko Aao Kare Ham Kare Ham Kare 

Salaame, Salaame, Salaame Kar Le Salaame... (2) 


( Dekho Diwaanon... Kare Ham Kare Ham Kare ) 

Salaame, Salaame, Salaame Kar Le Salaame... (2)


Me Gusto Mucho Bailar Bailar, Quiero Samba Quiero Salsa

Me Gusto Mucho Bailar Bailar, Quiero Samba Quiero Rumba 

La La Laai, La La Laai... 


Behka Nasheela Nasheela Sama

Ab Hosh Mein Ham Kahaan 

Thhokar Mein Apni Hai Saara Jahaan

Ham Toh Abhi Hai Jawaan 

Jab Tak Jawaani Hai, Tab Tak Kahaani Hai

Kehna Mera Maan Le 

Do Din Ki Masti Hai, Do Din Ki Hasti Hai

Sach Kya Hai Pehchaan Le 

Nayi Raat Hogi, Nayi Baat Hogi

Naye Kal Ko Aao Kare Ham Kare Ham Kare 

Salaame, Salaame, Salaame Kar Le Salaame...(2) 

Fiesta Latina, It's Driving Wild, Come Salsa With Me, It's Party Time... (2 ) 


Saare Zamaane Se Ham Bekhabar

Ham Pe Na Koyi Asar 

Jaane Rukega Kahaan Aur Kidhar

Awaargi Ka Safar 

Ham Toh Diwaane Hain, Kab Se Begaane Hain

Jo Chaahein Ham Woh Kare 

Koyi Sune Kuchh Bhi, Koyi Kahe Kuchh Bhi

Ham Na Kissi Se Darre 

Nayi Raat Hogi, Nayi Baat Hogi

Naye Kal Ko Aao Kare Ham Kare Ham Kare 

Salaame, Salaame, Salaame Kar Le Salaame... (4)


"Attention everybody countdown has begun for new year Karan holds mike 


"5, 4, 3, 2,1 All of them shouts loud 


"Happy new year Whole crowd says together for entering into another year. 


Lights turn off again but this time projector starts running showcasing all the past events of all the couple's lives. 


The story started with Preeta and Shrishti coming to Mumbai in search of their mother. Amidst they found their soulmate and friends for lifetime in form of Luthra family boys Karan, Rishab and Sameer including elders. In between the season of love and heartbreak enters another cool breeze  Tanya who coming brought change in both families. She became life of Luthra brothers be it love or friendship. With the course of time Rishab and Tanya learned real meaning of love as well Karan Preeta whose hate turned into passionate love binding them into commitment. On parallel side are their siblings whose lives also get intertwined in web of love, romance, friendship and heartbreaks. 


"Hey guys one last announcement for tonight, this is dedicated to most important person of my life, Rishab my brother, if you were not with me then I would have lost myself long time ago thank you for everything, my only wish to god will be to give a brother like you to everybody Karan gets emotional 


Mahesh and Rakhi are overwhelmed with the love within their children that nobody could break. Luthra family share group hug followed by all siblings and couple. 



The end scene is credited with dance of all five couple happily. 


Aiyo, Aiyo, Aiyo, Aiyo 

Mr. Lova Lova, Teri Aankhon Ka Jaadu 

Mr. Lova Lova, Teri Baaton Ka Jaadu 


Oh, Ankhiyan Tu Mila Le Raja 

Aaye Hai Din Bahaar Ke 


Ankhiyan Tu Chura Na Raja 

Jaaye Na Din Yeh Pyaar Ke 


Ankhiyan Tu Mila Le Raja 

Aaye Hai Din Bahaar Ke 


Ankhiyan Tu Chura Na Raja 

Jaaye Na Din Yeh Pyaar Ke 


Neend Udti Hai Udne Bhi De 


Chain Khota Hai Khone Bhi De 


Jaan Jaati Hai Jaane Bhi De 


Ishq Hota Hai Hone Bhi De 


Ankhiyan Tu Mila Le Raja 

Aaye Hai Din Bahaar Ke 


Ankhiyan Tu Chura Na Raja 

Jaaye Na Din Yeh Pyaar Ke 



Mr. Lova Lova Teri Aankhon Ka Jaadu 

Mr. Lova Lova Teri Baaton Ka Jaadu 

Mr. Lova Lova Mera Dil Dhadkaaye 

Mr. Lova Lova Meri Jaan Yeh Jaaye 


O O O O Oh, O O O Oh... (4) 

O Oh, O O O O O O Oh, O O O O O O Oh... (2) 


Oye Oye Oye Oye Oye Oye Oye Oye 


Pyaar Tera Jeena Ka Ek Bahaana Hai 


Jab Tak Jeena Hai Yeh Pyaar Nibhaana Hai 


Arre Soch Le Phir Jaldi Hai Kya 


Soch Liya Ji Soch Liya 


Kya Bole Tum Phir Se Bolo Na 


Ankhiyan Tu Mila Le Raja 

Aaye Hai Din Bahaar Ke 


Ankhiyan Tu Chura Na Raja 

Jaaye Na Din Yeh Pyaar Ke 


Neend Udti Hai Udne Bhi De 


Chain Khota Hai Khone Bhi De 


Jaan Jaati Hai Jaane Bhi De 


Ishq Hota Hai Hone Bhi De 


Ankhiyan Tu Mila Le Raja 

Aaye Hai Din Bahaar Ke 


Oh, Ankhiyan Tu Chura Na Raja 

Jaaye Na Din Yeh Pyaar Ke 


Mr. Lova Lova Teri Aankhon Ka Jaadu 

Mr. Lova Lova Teri Baaton Ka Jaadu 

Mr. Lova Lova Mera Dil Dhadkaaye 

Mr. Lova Lova Meri Jaan Yeh Jaaye 


Ankhiyan Tu, Aaye Hai Din 

Ankhiyan Tu, Jaaye Na Din Yeh Pyaar Ke 


Mr. Lova Lova, Teri Aankhon Ka Jaadu 


Ankhiyan Tu, Aaye Hai Din 


Hey Ho, Hey Ho, Hey Ho, Haan



The screen freezes with Karan lifting Preeta up happily. 


"Where are you going, movie is not over yet a voiceover of male laughs 



Luthra house is filled with happiness and peace due to noise of small children. 



Khushi : Daughter of Tanya and Prithvi (given name by Rishab). Another version of her mother and eldest one, very protective of all siblings. She is fearless and often create chaos everywhere but at the same time is shrewd from others. 


2nd  Dev: Son of Karan Preeta six and half years old. Very quiet and reserved like his mother but ambitious like his father. He is often studios 

Son of Karan Preeta 


3rd : Pari; daughter of Rishab Tanya; She has taken mixture of both her parents. Mature from all children's in the clan and often tries to stop the fighting between all the siblings. 


4th : Rajiv : another mischievous of Luthra family clan. Son of Sameer Shrishti. Carbon copy of Shrishti who is always on verge of making pranks. He is shortest in height like Sameer. 


5th : Krissh/Sona : Twins of Kritika and Dhruv. Sona is another prankster like her dad while Krisshh becomes the scapegoat of pranks done by Khushi and Rajiv. 


PS : I will include more of this in epilogue later. One thing I want to say to all readers who left feedback or silent ones. "THANK YOU VERY MUCH for supporting me and crossing century to this longest running story. This is my first story that will be remembered my most readers. I hope to keep you all entertained with new ones. One thing I am sure is you all might have enjoyed this journey filled with roller coaster ride at every track. Can I expect a long ending feedback from all readers? 


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Posted: 5 years ago
Beautiful ending, no words for it👏
Loved how Rishab saved all siblings 👏
Rishya momemt was emotional as well as beautiful😳
Loved the New Year Party celebration😊
The video describing their journey was beautiful 😊
The description of the children of Luthra's children was nice, they are similar to their parents😊
Waiting for epilogue 

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Okay since u gave me this beautiful story to read I will fulfil ur wish by writing a long message hehe😛
So I have been reading this story from it' 1stpart and tday is the 100th part and it' so amazinggg😃
Ur story was so good that it forced a silent reader like to me to comment on how brilliant ur writing skills are 😆
Coming to the story it' just fabbb👏
It had everything drama passion romance suspense action it was just sooo perfecttt😳
Specially my preeran❤️
Loved the way all the couples were written 😳
It' quite emotional that this story ended but I am looking forward to read your other stories and I am sure they are going to be as amazing as this one and may all ur stories cross centuries 😆
Throughout the story I loved every bit of it nd enjoyed it thoroughly 😃
Keep up your really amazinggg writing skills and do write lots of many more fan fictions because I love it writing a lottt😆
Cheers!
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Posted: 5 years ago
Ucomment updated on page 107 i think
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*Warning- This is gonna be long comment* 
And YOU SCARED ME SOO MUCH IN THE LAST UPDATE!!.
I SWEAR MY HEART STOPPED BEATING!!

*Comment under construction because my eyes cant stay open 😆, its nearly 3am* i will complete it wheni wake up in the morning