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melovesja

@melovesja

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#571

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
Lavanya, Kuki and Selvi, well done my ladies...👏 👏 👏

👏👏👏 dearies and thnx lana.

Edited by melovesja - 7 years ago

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#572

Originally posted by: selvi1275
What is the answer for 3
Itz not bhai jaan

Selvi my phone did autocorrection, actually I wrote,

Nib aba haj

I am sure you will do it in a flash. 😃

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Kuki715

@Kuki715

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#573

Originally posted by: melovesja
How life change faces and
Spread different colors every minute
Just now, I am enlightened she
Love to recognize our relation.
Spending her time like spy's wife
Just now! Her hair strand told me
She miss my presence and I invite
Her to spend some time together.
May be she relishing my gift and
Words of my heart in her own time
May she to remember our jovial time
Few moments before...
May weaving the thoughts
Of our next meeting
Aah! How cruel I feel my fate Is
Bring me again at juncture.
But how I not to wish bring
Justice to my sagird, I can imagine her
Fallen face, but she will understand
The need Of time and sigh of heavy heart.
Is that not enough?
We have to face reality of life in form
Of her rebellion men to be silenced
Just now! she came close, changed ...
Always falls hard on us but
we will face all together
For betterment of future
Not only of us but for the people too.

Khan Sahib's tussel ...beautifully penned ⭐️👏

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#574

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Teaser for Chapter 42 from Vathsy's perspective as imagined by KK...

Wonderful patti 👏

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#575

Originally posted by: melovesja
How life change faces and
Spread different colors every minute
Just now, I am enlightened she
Love to recognize our relation.
Spending her time like spy's wife
Just now! Her hair strand told me
She miss my presence and I invite
Her to spend some time together.
May be she relishing my gift and
Words of my heart in her own time
May she to remember our jovial time
Few moments before...
May weaving the thoughts
Of our next meeting
Aah! How cruel I feel my fate Is
Bring me again at juncture.
But how I not to wish bring
Justice to my sagird, I can imagine her
Fallen face, but she will understand
The need Of time and sigh of heavy heart.
Is that not enough?
We have to face reality of life in form
Of her rebellion men to be silenced
Just now! she came close, changed ...
Always things falls hard on us but
we will face all together
For betterment of future
Not only us, but for the people too.

Khan sahib words

Beautiful mitu di ❤️

So perfectly you penned down 👏

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Vmanoh

@Vmanoh

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#576

Originally posted by: lashy

Vathsy this is simply superb...👏 I think it's the first time someone's dissected one of my teasers in this detail... thank you so much for it... I definitely did not plan it this way... nor did it strike me the way it did you... but glad you noticed a similarity and highlighted it with such depth.. my heartfelt thanksfor the compliments... 🤗

And even as I read it, I knew it was right up Periyamma's alley! As analogies go, three are her favourite kinds - music's Ragam Thanam Pallavi, dance bhavas and the brocade embroidery of silk artisans... 😳 isn't it, Periyamma?

@ Rasam for last line? 😆 Chellam!!!

Lashy - Thanks for your feedback & also for the tip on multiple posts - all this while you have your hands full on the home front. Your rendezvous with your mister is a very cute gesture on your part. Best of luck for all the juggling that awaits you.

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#577

Originally posted by: melovesja
How life change faces and
Spread different colors every minute
Just now, I am enlightened she
Love to recognize our relation.
Spending her time like spy's wife
Just now! Her hair strand told me
She miss my presence and I invite
Her to spend some time together.
May be she relishing my gift and
Words of my heart in her own time
May she to remember our jovial time
Few moments before...
May weaving the thoughts
Of our next meeting
Aah! How cruel I feel my fate Is
Bring me again at juncture.
But how I not to wish bring
Justice to my sagird, I can imagine her
Fallen face, but she will understand
The need Of time and sigh of heavy heart.
Is that not enough?
We have to face reality of life in form
Of her rebellion men to be silenced
Just now! she came close, changed ...
Always things falls hard on us but
we will face all together
For betterment of future
Not only us, but for the people too.

Wonderful! ⭐️

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Vmanoh

@Vmanoh

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#578

Originally posted by: melovesja
How life change faces and
Spread different colors every minute
Just now, I am enlightened she
Love to recognize our relation.
Spending her time like spy's wife
Just now! Her hair strand told me
She miss my presence and I invite
Her to spend some time together.
May be she relishing my gift and
Words of my heart in her own time
May she to remember our jovial time
Few moments before...
May weaving the thoughts
Of our next meeting
Aah! How cruel I feel my fate Is
Bring me again at juncture.
But how I not to wish bring
Justice to my sagird, I can imagine her
Fallen face, but she will understand
The need Of time and sigh of heavy heart.
Is that not enough?
We have to face reality of life in form
Of her rebellion men to be silenced
Just now! she came close, changed ...
Always things falls hard on us but
we will face all together
For betterment of future
Not only us, but for the people too.