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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey there all the lovely people!!
Me is back with my weird nonsense post. Please bear.
Direct to discussion.


"koi ummeed bar naheen aatee
koee soorat nazar naheen aatee
maut ka ek din mu'ayyan hai
neehd kyon raat bhar naheeh aatee?...

Death is the inevitable finality, it's the enemy which cannot be defeated. Everyone dies but very few live - a line that says it all... death leaves gloom, tears, memories and an un fathomable pit of loss, people who survive move on, but that hole can never be filled.
Uma stood clenching his jaw, his lips trembling with the agony unsaid, the tears unshed, he wants to break down and cry his heart, but he walks away to Saras room, he looks at her picture, his eyes depict his pain, his sense of uselessness, his helplessness... a brother shaken to his core, he knows the horrific truth that would take place, yet his inability to express is making him cringe. .. he looks at Saras' name, her clothes, her jewelry, her bangles - the importance he places on the things rather than the human being is thought provoking. He adoringly looks at the things, each of them with a memory attached - it felt like Saras had died, and now all he could do was lament her demise and suffer in the pain untold.
Kanak comes in with Suman and a box, she taunts that she is here to help saras in the transition of being a corpse. She takes the bangles from Uma and throw them in the box, the bindis follow next along with clothes and finally the doll, a doll which Kanak drapes in a white dress - Kanak's take on the whole issue is like a widow, a woman left without ornaments, her life colorless, her choices limited, her life sealed with restrictions... it happens a lot that when the husband dies a woman is sentenced to live like that, that's what Kanak sees in Saras' punishment - Kanak shoves the doll in Uma's face asking him if he would be able to see saras like an unwed widow, just like the doll... for a moment he breaks his mouth utters a NO, he won't be able to see it ... before we could sigh in relief he says that dharm cannot be moulded as per convenience, it's a rule that one must true to the path be it of flowers or of thorns, one must walk on and so would he. - Kanak is seen like a mad woman banging her head on a wall, she has to express her concerns, and it's seen as an act of scorn, it's going to break her but the wall would give in someday by the force of her effort..
Two people Kanak and Uma, together facing the situation with two different aspects and perspective, one being pessimistic and other trying to bring optimism..

Saras goes to mandir for tyag pooja, Palomi escorts her - her reason yet not clear was it to get brownie points from Uma, that when Kanak refused to go with Saras, Palomi took it on herself, an idea of ideal partner for Uma. Or was it for Massi that she wanted to keep and eye on the proceedings of SarVansh angle, or was it that she really felt bad for Saras.
Saras meets Vansh outside the mandir, he says that in the next five days their pre marriage rituals will take place, he applies haldi on her hand and she instead of wiping it off, scratches her hands with a twig - was she trying to erase the fate written in the lines of her hand. She gives up her bangles, bindi, ornaments and chunri to the fire... she is as stubborn as her brother, for her hearts want a life, a normal loved life, yet her duty to the order of her brother binds her hands and her self.
Saras returns home and Massi sees her injured hand, she asks for haldi and Saras refuses it.. she applies salt to her wound saying that with her life her marham has also changed..Massi sits down crying in disbelief on the fate that has befallen in saras. Kanak takes her inside and wipes the salt and rubs haldi again. Saras again puts salt - this repetition was how people would intervene in the process of being a sevika, these people would be put off by the roadblocks Uma and Saras herself...
Kanak promises that she wouldn't let saras be a sevika ever.




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Posted: 7 years ago
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Great write up! I feel so bad for Saras, desperately want Maasisa to be positive, but no. Uma is actually very weird. He wants to help but doesn't want to either.
Why can't he just bend the rules a but for someone he loves? It's okay, Saras didn't intentionally do it. And does Shivji say to follow blindly? This Uma isn't attractive at all.

Honestly, I'm not very happy with how things are in the TSMSP world these days. 😕
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ziah

Great write up! I feel so bad for Saras, desperately want Maasisa to be positive, but no. Uma is actually very weird. He wants to help but doesn't want to either.

Why can't he just bend the rules a but for someone he loves? It's okay, Saras didn't intentionally do it. And does Shivji say to follow blindly? This Uma isn't attractive at all.

Honestly, I'm not very happy with how things are in the TSMSP world these days.😕



Hey there ziah
Thank you for reading and commenting. Much appreciated 😊
Whenever I see saras, my heart just goes out to her and all the girls who suffer from such circumstances, how hard it must be, dreams, colors, life all drained from them and yet they have to put up a have face, because their family has pushed them to do it. I want all such girls to stand on their feet to raise a voice, to say that it's my damned life and I will decide for it.

This Uma is definitely weirdly heartbreaking, all the "kyun end on him, the track is dragging. They should start unraveling the web instead of spinning more knots into an already entangled web.
Has BBG left the house, Kanak was roaming open hair today.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Blue
Great write up. I personally do not have any sympathy for Uma now , this situation is off his own making. He is hiding behind his dharma to justify his actions , and everything he does is therefore correct.
His moral & ethical compass seems to have deserted him,
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Parmeen

Hi Blue

Great write up. I personally do not have any sympathy for Uma now , this situation is off his own making. He is hiding behind his dharma to justify his actions , and everything he does is therefore correct.
His moral & ethical compass seems to have deserted him,



Hey there
Thank you for reading and a critical comment. Much appreciated 😊

Oh yes!! He is trapped/binded by his own rules... his own extremity is strangling him and others around him. Yet it's his choice to pick the path strewn with thorns. What he doesn't understand that hardest path is not the only path every time. It's okay to choose easy way once in a while.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: blueflames



Hey there
Thank you for reading and a critical comment. Much appreciated 😊

Oh yes!! He is trapped/binded by his own rules... his own extremity is strangling him and others around him. Yet it's his choice to pick the path strewn with thorns. What he doesn't understand that hardest path is not the only path every time. It's okay to choose easy way once in a while.


So true
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: blueflames



Hey there ziah
Thank you for reading and commenting. Much appreciated 😊
Whenever I see saras, my heart just goes out to her and all the girls who suffer from such circumstances, how hard it must be, dreams, colors, life all drained from them and yet they have to put up a have face, because their family has pushed them to do it. I want all such girls to stand on their feet to raise a voice, to say that it's my damned life and I will decide for it.

This Uma is definitely weirdly heartbreaking, all the "kyun end on him, the track is dragging. They should start unraveling the web instead of spinning more knots into an already entangled web.
Has BBG left the house, Kanak was roaming open hair today.



Yeah, I think he left for akhand tap and is in the temple? But yeah for a house full of ladies he did spend a lot of time there. To me BBG was arrogant, and nonsensical.
They should try to solve Uma mystery, Kanak should talk about herself with him and there's so much more. But they keep introducing nonsensical tracks, they killed the Sarvansh story for me, made Payal and Maasisa negative, Ved is non-existent (I like his character).

And I'm not a TRP aunty. I don't want to see bloopers, I want intelligent and meaningful content. I wonder if daily soap's will ever stop being illogical.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ziah



Yeah, I think he left for akhand tap and is in the temple? But yeah for a house full of ladies he did spend a lot of time there. To me BBG was arrogant, and nonsensical.
They should try to solve Uma mystery, Kanak should talk about herself with him and there's so much more. But they keep introducing nonsensical tracks, they killed the Sarvansh story for me, made Payal and Maasisa negative, Ved is non-existent (I like his character).

And I'm not a TRP aunty. I don't want to see bloopers, I want intelligent and meaningful content. I wonder if daily soap's will ever stop being illogical.



Arrogant and unforgiving was definitely BBG. The way he made Uma rub his nose on his feet was a detailed introduction to his character which his mother sealed later that he is intoxicated to such a lifestyle, where Lakhs of followers follow him blindly. In short he is a stone who is only there to hurt others, or those who come across him.

Even this track had sooo much potential which could have been done right. Kanak and Uma meet only in the hallways, their personal life is non existent and on top of that vipers have eyes set on separating them. A couple who is bound by some magical properties, because they are a perfect mismatch, they thoughts, approach all different, yet they both are together for some reason. And people are jealous of them - and KanUm don't even realize it.
Unless Massi is shown to have a strong backstory, her character has been assassinated beyond redemption. SarVansh despite the revenge angle could have been more consistent and interesting but its more mushed together to just shove another boiling drama on the audiences. Poor ved has been missing for quite a while. I used to love this guy but don't ever get to see him. Even Bhabho is doing silly stuff.

I am sorry to say but I am not a trp viewer. I watch for content - the debate, the clash of trp and content has been for a long long time. But unless the people accept change the entertainment industry is going to serve BS. Old wine in new bottles.
It has happened before and it will happen in future too, the forums people (not specifically TSMSP) will ask tor change and when we don't get the change we wish to see, we just move on to the next show. Till it fits the bill.
That's how I have been seeing forums and tv for the last ten years.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks everyone and blueflames for such literary contributions! You guys make the serial episodes these days look meaningful when an actual we know it seems to be way off track.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iceblue

Thanks everyone and blueflames for such literary contributions! You guys make the serial episodes these days look meaningful when an actual we know it seems to be way off track.



Hey there Ice
Don't be disheartened, it will be fine. Last couple of days have been dragged. But soon it would be good again... cvs just got lost in the way, they will find light soon.
Thank you for reading.

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