RishTi+Sameer OS: Ehsaas - Updated Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago

For some days, this idea was in my head and so I decided pen it down. Btw, the characters in the OS are Rishabh, Shrishti and Sameer if no one understood from the title ๐Ÿ˜†.

Prologue:

He lay in a pool of blood, the water drenching down on him. He tried to get up but he couldn't. As he opened his eyes, he saw her. Even in those last moments of breathes, he saw her and only her.  There were so many hidden emotions he wanted to say to her but he felt his eyes closing. A tear fell down his eyes and then his whole body shut down.

She waited and waited for his call. It never came. She was upset that even today he had forgotten her birthday. She was not gonna speak to him ever again.

Just then her phone rang. Excited , she picked up the call.

"Hello?"

*thud*

The news shattered her. She didn't have words to describe the feeling she felt when she heard those words. She felt the room go out of place and before she could react, she had fallen down ..


Let me know what you guys think and then maybe I'll take it further๐Ÿ˜†


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Abhi1393 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
Interesting plot! Please continue!
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Posted: 6 years ago
It seems interesting! Please do write more ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 6 years ago
Rishti+Sameer? Means rishab and shrishti are paired up together?
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Posted: 6 years ago
Seems interesting. Plz continue...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Yes please.

I am here for RishTi lol.

Would love to read something on them.

The premise seems interesting. I have a guess as to where this is going. Eager to read what happens next.

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Posted: 6 years ago
sounds interesting. finally a Rishabh and Shristi OS ive been rooting for these two from the start๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 6 years ago
Not  a Rishabh, Shrishti or Sameer Shipper๐Ÿ˜† But great plots do attract me. So do continue. Would like to read further.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Cheers 
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Posted: 6 years ago
I am a Rishti Shipper.. would love to read more as the plot seems solid n exciting.
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Posted: 6 years ago
I'm a Rishti shipper ...I don't want Rishab to turn negetive ...if Rishti happens then it will be more interesting. ..plzzz update the ff soon...