(PraNushka FF) Luv U Zindagi {COMPLETED} imp. news pg 62 - Page 3

Originally posted by: poetic

Nice premise. Do continue pl

thank you😳

Originally posted by: shreyj7

This is such an awesome piece of writing.

I don't have the patience for the next update!

The POV's are interesting as they show both the side's feelings.

You keep going. 

Wow I just could picture every line

Keep writing

thank you😳

Originally posted by: fictitious

Welcome to this thread Sammy!

Loved the theme. Anything related to travel excites me to the core!

Even if this an adaptation of a movie, I'm sure you've added your own flavour to it.
I could feel that!

So I see it's a story of a highly focused girl and a carefree guy. And it's happening in a single day? How eventful is that gonna be! 😳 Keep writing! So many things to unfold :)

Its true that people would mostly prefer English, but if you feel that certain things sound better in Hindi, feel free to write those parts in Hindi . We too want to cherish the native flavour wherever possible! :)

Loved the symbolism in the phrase.

" Clean bowled! "

Waiting for the next :)

thank you😃

Like their conversation , but name kya h ? ?  Do update soon 

Ohh!!! Too exited to read the next part!!

Ohhh damn Sammy you are something! You made me laugh constantly throughout the update. Like seriously? Throwing shoes away got me like oh my god. And their conversations too. Awesome. 

Oh god I just burst out laughing!

Thanks for this Story,Dear.😊

Originally posted by: sonalisharma1

Like their conversation , but name kya h ? ?  Do update soon 

thanks

Originally posted by: Radhika2001

Ohh!!! Too exited to read the next part!!

thank you😊