RishBala SS : Zarir (Completed - 02/02 - P: 60 + Epilogue - P: 63) - Page 48

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Posted: 6 years ago
Thank you so so much
Happy you like the whole story
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujitharajan

Part-5

Madhu was started to tell her past to rk. She was very happy and she talked with his parents like a friend in phone. I think something happened to her parents. Now roma also missing and her uncle said she went to meet her son. Madhu was broken after seeing her parents like this. I am really sorry for the late comment maithu dear. Will read and comment ur remaining parts lately...

Thank you for reading and liking it
Well yes dear!
A lot of things has happened in her life
And no need to say sorry dear, it's understandable
Take your time :-)
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Hend_Refai

I loved it

you ended the story perfectly

thank you so much for this journey you gave to us

I really loved it soo much

Thank you so much buddy
Happy you loved it
And thanks for the compliment
Pleasure is all mine dear
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujitharajan

Part-6

Emotional update dear. So rk is the one madhu's parents chooses for her. I think her uncle and sultan planned to killed both rk amd madhu's family. Ayan was rk's brother's child. I felt so sad for their conditionšŸ˜­

Aww dear!
No emotional!
It's life, everything can happen
Thank you so much for the support
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujitharajan

I read all the parts but i couldn't give separate comment for each part dear. I am really sorry for being so late...It was an awesome love story dear. From madhu's past rk findout that their parents chooses madhu for him so he wanted to marry madhu and also to punish the criminals. Rishbala's love scenes are awesome dear and i liked ayan very much. He is so cute and the little family was so loving. At last the end roma was died but she killed that criminal. Sultan also died in a car accident. Finally rishbala and their cute baby ayan lived happily. The ending was superb dear...

Heee
Thank you for all the likes and taking your time to complete this story
And no pbm if you couldn't comment each part seperately
So happy that you enjoyed the story
and liked their cute moment alongside Ayan
Thank you so much once again dearšŸ¤—
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hello!

Well!
I didn't think about doing an epilogue for this one but as I started to write the epilogue of Orenda last week, my evil mind said : Why to write two stories when you mingle everything in one!
Then I asked myself how come a student-teacher story mingled with a business profile story?
And there I got the answer that even in Zarir, our hero was teaching and guiding his love, his wife and she in her turn will guide and teach others. So there I got the idea of making it one!

Hope you all like it!
Here is the link : Epilogue - Jackpot
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