Ashni poem: Jis tarah jaana tumhe

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello friends😃

I'm back again with my new AshNi poem😊
In this poem I have tried to express what I have understood and perceive the character of Nidhi...loving, cheerful, full of energy😃 

I hope you like the poem

One more thing specially I need to mention...I would like to dedicate this poem to my best friend...My dearest Babita...my Shona...whose love and friendship is my priced possession...I'm so grateful to her for giving me her company...her love...her friendship so true at heart😃🤗...I don't think I can ever express what I feel for you...love you and God bless you Shona🤗
Please do accept this from me😃🤗

Here it is...

Ek nanhi pari ko jab se humne jaana

Dil ki khubsoorti ka matlab tab se hai jaana

Uski pyaari bholi bhaali si baatein

Jinki yaadon mein kat jaya karti hain raatein

Pal bhar mein dil mein bas jaati hai jo

Dhuyen ki tarah gussa jiska udh jaata ho

Titli ki chanchalta usme hai samayi

Aisi ek gudiya humne hai paayi

Jiske hone ke ehsaas se door ho jaate saare gham

Udaasi ke baadalon ka andhera ho jaata hai kam

Apne pyar se rang de jo saara jahan

Aisa koi aur hume milega kahan

Jiski muskaan se roshan hota humara har din

Kate na sukoon se uske bina koi bhi din

Dil ki hai dua mile use khushiyan saari

Uske naam ho agar ho koi khushi humari 


Shona I hope you like it🤗


P.S... I hope I'm not boring you all with my poems...at any point if you all feel that I should put a full stop to my poems, please do let me know...😛
I would stop posting them. I know I'm very poor at writing poems..but I do give them a try every time...Love you all for the support that I've got from you all always...God bless you all my lovely friends❤️🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Shona I hope you like it🤗


P.S... I hope I'm not boring you all with my poems...at any point if you all feel that I should put a full stop to my poems, please do let me know...😛
I would stop posting them. I know I'm very poor at writing poems..but I do give them a try every time...Love you all for the support that I've got from you all always...God bless you all my lovely friends❤️🤗
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Please continue to post more...very nice...👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjani9




Shona I hope you like it🤗


P.S... I hope I'm not boring you all with my poems...at any point if you all feel that I should put a full stop to my poems, please do let me know...😛
I would stop posting them. I know I'm very poor at writing poems..but I do give them a try every time...Love you all for the support that I've got from you all always...God bless you all my lovely friends❤️🤗


Please continue to post more...very nice...👏
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Thank you so much Mam😃🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very, very, very Beautiful poem you have penned down Manisha 👏
Truly coming form your heart and showing your devoted love for Shona, our Babita ❤️ 🤗
Loved reading and sensing your emotions, so well expressed!
Nice way to dedicate your friendship to her! ⭐️
Awesome wordings, so true and precious!!!

Thanks for sharing out your feelings Sweetie, it's exquisite!!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Hello friends😃


I'm back again with my new AshNi poem😊 


P.S... I hope I'm not boring you all with my poems...at any point if you all feel that I should put a full stop to my poems, please do let me know...😛
I would stop posting them. I know I'm very poor at writing poems..but I do give them a try every time...Love you all for the support that I've got from you all always...God bless you all my lovely friends❤️🤗


Pls Manisha, pls never stop posting your beautiful verses dear.
We luv them and cherish them. You are putting so much efforts with your love to this forum making it so active. Pls don't think that there are few to reply, it's just only few are here and those few love your writes. And i mean it, with all assurance ❤️🤗
And your luv for all of us is very special, and it's shown here, every where, so pls keep on posting! 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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No words can ever be enough to say what this means to me 🤗
I'm at Cloud 9 Manisha di, my Shoni di 
All loves for U ❤️

I will come back here once Bro, and Nishi di and if possible, Vyoman comes and comment. 😃

Wish Florida also come and see this one, very soon !

Di, i won't say thanks as i know i will never be able to
What i can do is ::




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Posted: 6 years ago
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So cute... so chweet ,, so adorable a poem.. ⭐️👏
Manisha... loved it dear... 👏

its such a lovely gift for Shona,,, O yeah our sis Babita... to get n that from you... 🥳🥳🥳

Sweetest n beautiful version of a friendship getting a name.. a name of emotions n love.. company n togetherness... very well portrayed.. 
You have put in Nidhi's character,,, well posed with Shona's character... well told n expressed.. 
Loved it so so much,,, 😃

Carry on with your attempts,, they are Awesome n fantabulous... !!!!
A Writer's gift ,, to the Inspiration... ⭐️👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc



P.S... I hope I'm not boring you all with my poems...at any point if you all feel that I should put a full stop to my poems, please do let me know...😛
I would stop posting them. I know I'm very poor at writing poems..but I do give them a try every time...Love you all for the support that I've got from you all always...God bless you all my lovely friends❤️🤗


No ways dear... plzz dont put any stop full or half here.. 
We need more from you... more poems n some stories in the name of Ashni... 
Keep doing the good job... we all are proud of you... !!!

⭐️ 👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
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It is my personal opinion...as long as Ashu and Nidhi were two different individuals, episodes were good...some how together they were not projected well...may be the story should have discontinued at that point of time...