'You Are My Life' Shivika TS(Shot 3 pg4) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank u so much guys..your comments mean a lot..
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Third Shot(last)
"You cannot come in" Annika commanded fiercely.
Pinky didnt pay attention to her words,entered the room and started to go towards shivaay. Annika held pinkys hand violently and dragged her out of the room.
A:"I said you cant come in !"
P:" How dare you!! With what right are you stopping a mother from meeting her son?"
A:"With what right are you calling yourself Shivaays mother?does he consider you as his mother??? You know i always respected you and did whatever you said because you are Shivaays mother and i can do anything for his happiness. But today my shivaay is in this condition because of you. I always felt that why dont i have a mother,but if mothers are like you i am very happy i dont have one"
P:" how dare you say that!! I will meet Shivaay,you cant stop me"
A:" Just go away from here before i lose control over myself!"
Pinky started to go towards shivaays room.
Annika lost her temper. Her anger,pain,love everything came out.she held pinky and dragged her out of the hospital.
A:" I told you to go away,but you didnt listen. If anything happens to my Shivaay i dont even know what i would do to you."
Saying this Annika went inside the hospital.
Pinky thought" You pushed me,insulted me and told i cant be a mother right Annika.Now i will prove you right. I will give you a punishment which would be worst than death for you."
Annika went inside shivaays room.She cupped his face and said" Shivaay please wake up now. This is the last time i am asking you,if you dont wake up i will never talk to you" Annikas tear fell on shivaays cheek. Annika ssawthat shivaay moved his hand,She saw that shivaay was slowly opening his beautiful kanji aankhen. She became overwhelmed with emotions as her life came back and rushed to the doctors.
As she went out,pinky entered shivaays room.
P:" I love you a lot Shivaay and thats why i am doing this. Death is better for you rather than living with that Girl"
She removed shivaays oxygen mask. A tear escaped from shivaays eye. Pinky took a pillow and tried to smother shivaay.
At that very moment Annika opened the door. Her heart stopped at the sight she saw. A mother was trying to kill her own son.
Shivaay was about to fall from the bed, Annika ran towards him and held him
She put him on the bed and made him wear the oxygen mask. Pinky ran out from the room.
The Doctor came and told Annika to wait out as they had to check shivaay
As Annika came out of the room,she saw that OmRu had caught Pinky. When Shakti came to know about Pinkys doings,he slapped her and broke every tie with her. Annika was very disgusted with Pinky cause of what she saw.
A:" I would have handed over you to the police and let you suffer for what you did with my Shivaay.But i Know that Shivaay wouldnt want that.He would not want his mother to suffer as he has a heart of gold. So just go away,your biggest punishment would be your loneliness."
Om:"I feel pity on You chhoti Ma cause you could not understand the value of a son like Shivaay! You lost the biggest treasure anyone could have because of you insecurity. I know Shivaay can still forgive you and he wont keep any grudges but no one here would be able to forgive you"
Rudra:" Yes Chhoti Maa. We can never forgive you. You tried to kill my superman. I love my Shivaay bhaiyya the most and I can do anything for him. Please go away before i do something which i shouldnt do."
Pinky went away and she would suffer from the biggest punishment of human kind, being alone.
The doctor informed the family that Shivaay was out of danger,had gained consciousness and they could meet him.
Annika,om,rudra,gauri and bhavya rushed in. Annika,rudra and Om ran and hugged shivaay.
"Guys, i am a patient,dont hug me so tight,it hurts" Shivaay said to lighten the mood. But no one even moved.
A:"please dont ever do this again. Please dont put your life at stake for my life.You are my life Shivaay"
R:"If something would have happened to you Bhaiyya,i would have died to."
O:"yes shivaay.All three of us have the same heartbeat,how could our heart beat without you?"
Shivaay kissed all three of them to convey that he will always be there for them. He saw Gauri and Bhavya standing at a distance.
S:" Why are you both standing so far? You both are
my sisters,a part of this family. Arent you happy seeing me??"
Gauri and bhavya hugged shivaay too.
S:" I didnt Die of the bullet but i think i will surely die of suffocation."
"Shut Up"All five of them shouted together and held him tighter.
Shivaay started to crack jokes to hide his pain and make everyone happy. He was the great wall,how could he see his family suffer for his pain!! He managed to make everyone laugh.
But the pain in his eyes was not unnoticed by them. The pain of seeing your own mother trying to kill you cannot be described in words and all 5 of them knew it. They made an unsaid promise to each other that they would keep shivaay so happy that he would forget every pain. Till now shivaay had been living for everyone,now they would live for him.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update yar
Totally loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar

Totally loved it

Thank,u😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I loved last line a lot of them giving happiness to shvay that he will forget all his pain. I want to see all them pampering billu specially anika n he taking advantage of that.can you please think of this idea?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omm
Pinky at her worst
Good she is left alone now
Nice update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So beautiful nd heart touching
He low pinky fall due to her insecurities
Tq fr pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lourel24

I loved last line a lot of them giving happiness to shvay that he will forget all his pain. I want to see all them pampering billu specially anika n he taking advantage of that.can you please think of this idea?

Thank u so much.
Will surely try
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing update
Anika ne pinky ko bahar pheka
But she is no. 1 kamini
Apne bete ko marne chali thi
Good punishment for her
Poor Shivay he was getting killed by his own mother
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow so glad shivaay survived
i dont know what to say about pinky anymore
juts continue dear
bye sumi

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