Completed: ShivKara TS ft. Ofamily - Facing the Demons (Note pg10) )

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Hello all, this is my first attempt to write something on this forum. PInky has been getting on my nerves and given that her latest target is Gauri, I could not stop myself from writing. I am also trying to address Shivaay's stupidity and inability to connect the dots in this story. I hope you enjoy it.

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Gauri's eyes watered as she turned around to leave, unable to take anymore of Pinky's taunts. But before she could escape, she was halted by a tug on her hands. The grip around her wrist only tightened as she tried to wriggle free making her escape impossible. How she wished she did not have to face him at this time.

"Kya keh rahi thi aap Choti ma? Zara phirse kahiye, maine shayad thik se suna nahi." Omkara's menacing voice echoed through the empty living room, jerking Gauri to look up at him. She had seen him angry a number of times, but what she saw in his face today, was beyond anything she had ever faced.

Pinky visibly trembled at the tone Omkara took with her, unsure if Omkara had heard the entirety of her rant. She fumbled for words, but before she could string together a coherent sentence, Omkara repeated his questions, marching towards her and dragging Gauri behind him.

"Aap khud bataengi, ya phir mein Gauri se kahu repeat karne?" he asked again, unware that his outburst had slowly started attracting an audience.

"Yeh...yeh kya batayegi tumhe...jab kuch hai hi nahi batane ke liye." Pinky mumbled, trying to avoid an eye contact with Omkara. Omkara only glared back at her in response, further unnerving her.

As she looked around, Pinky noticed that Jhanvi and dadi were now in the vicinity and gaining some strength from their presence, Pinky defiantly looked up at him "Kuch nahi...kuch bhi toh nahi kahan maine. Main to sirf Gauri se talks kar rahi thi."

"Jhooth. Jhooth bol rahi hain aap. I heard what you said to her, and I do not mind repeating the words for the benefit of the audience present here. Look at her face, it is obvious she is upset and you were the last one she spoke to, so definitely you said something to reduce her to tears." His voice fairly crackled as he accusingly pointed at his choti ma.

"Oh My Matas, Jethaniji! Yeh dekh rahi hai na aap, kaise aapka honhar beta badtameezi se baat kar raha hai mujhse." Pinky started her drama, confident that with everyone present, Omkara would not be able to tell her off.

"Do not. Involve. My mother. In to this. This is between you, my wife and me so leave it at that. Warna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga." Omkara spat out the words. A shiver ran through everyone present. No one had ever seen Omkara display his anger and were fairly surprised by his current behaviour.

"Omkara!!! Yeh kya tarika hai tumhara mom se baat karne ka?" Another voice boomed into the room. Shivaay had just entered the mansion, and noticed that practically the entire family was assembled in the living room, surrounding his mom, a visibly shaken Gauri and Omkara. He had heard Omkara threatening his mom, and could not control his temper from rising.

As Omkara turned around to look at his brother, Anika stepped forward, loosening his grasp on Gauri's wrist, she took Gauri away to the sofa. Offering her a glass of water, she tried to console her. Next, she brought along dadi and helped her next to Gauri, hoping that it would divert her mind from the arguments that her beloved grandsons were now involved in.

In the meantime, Shivaay had taken hurried steps towards his mom and stood in front of her and facing Omkara, effectively shielding her from Omkara's wrath.

"Shivaay, you... you stay out of it. You have no clue what has happened so please do not interfere." Omkara tried to keep his flaring temper in check as he reasoned with his brother.

He had no wish to unleash his anger on the wrong person, especially his brother that he loved. It had been a few days since he had noticed changes in Gauri's behaviour. She was constantly questioning their relation, her presence in the house, her place in his life. Her self-confidence was gone and self-doubt was becoming evident and now he had finally figured out the cause of her changed behaviour. Choti Ma had done enough damage to Shivaay and Anika's relationship and he would not stand by while she tried the same with his and Gauri's already fragile relation.

"How can I not interfere when you are addressing my mother with such impertinence? I gather that something must have happened, but that does not give you the license to disrespect mom. Is this how we were raised?" Shivaay approached his brother with as much calm as he could muster. He never liked fighting with his brother and on this occasion did not want to prolong this argument either, but at the same time, he could not stand by as his mother got insulted.

"Respect for elders comes into question only when the elders behave in a manner befitting them. If Choti Ma thinks she can belittle Gauri and taunt her as she pleases without any consequences then she has it all wrong. I will not mutely stand by and watch it happen."Omkara explained.

"Mom?" Shivaay directed a questioning gaze towards his mom, noticing her squirm uncomfortably. Everyone knew Omkara never lied, and this was too big of an accusation that was being levied on Pinky to be completely ignored.

"Okay, so maybe Mom did say something, but I am sure she did not mean it Om. You know how mom is, she speaks what comes to her mind without considering her words. Am sure we are all making a mountain out of a mole hill." Shivaay patted Omkara on his arm, trying to dissipate the tension in the room but was shocked when Omkara jerked out of his reach.

"Kab tak Shivaay? Kab tak hum unki baton ko, harkaton ko undekha karte rahenge? As her son, it might be easy for you to turn a blind eye to the stunts she pulls, but I on the other hand have had enough of her manipulations. All this time, I kept quiet while she was being rude or manipulating situation as per her whims but today she has dared to attack me and mine and I will not hold my tongue now." Omkara spat out.

Being a first-hand recipient of Pinky's ridicules, it did not take Anika long to guess what must have happened but seeing the two brother facing each other, she was extremely afraid of what was to come. She tried to establish eye contact with Rudra, hoping he would intervene and stop the storm that was brewing but something about the determined setting of his jaw, told her that any appeal to him would be futile.

"Om My Mata Shivaay!! Dekho kaise kaise ilzaam laga raha hai Omkara mujh par." Pinky whimpered beside Shivaay who was still digesting Omkara's words. Pinky saw this as the perfect opportunity to drive a wedge between the brothers, something she had failed to achieve in all these years. Grabbing the situation with two hands and milking it to its full potential, she started to sob silently, hoping to stoke his temper.

"What are you talking about Om? What manipulations? What rudeness? I am not sure I understand what you are referring to? Please elaborate." Shivaay questioned his brother, pulling up to his full height.

"Really Shivaay? You really want me to spell it all out to you. Alright. She never leaves an opportunity to pick fights with Mom and Mr. Oberoi or put them down. She is always looking down at people who do not match up to her standards of Naam, Khoon and Khandaan. She is always poking her nose in matters that do not relate to her. She is constantly trying to control you and your life. You want me to keep going? Give you specific situations? Tia and your marriage; how she kept manipulating you to go ahead with it when it was obvious to all of us that your heart was not in it. The torture Anika was put through, the names she was called when Daksh created a misunderstanding about her. When Tia announced her pregnancy and the way she forced you to marry her despite the fact that you were already married to Bhabhi? Aur batau? Why can't you see what she has done to you?" Omkara looked unstoppable, rather it appeared like he was not willing to stop.

Rudra had also moved near him, lending him his support physically. They shared a look, and unspoken words were shared. They realized that if there was ever an opportunity to fix Shivaay and Anika's marriage without breaking their promise to their Bhabhi then this was it.

As the conversation veered in her direction, Anika's grip on dadi's hand had tightened and she felt a few eyes on her but she did not dare to look up. She was aware of Shivaay's guilt with regards to the Daksh situation, and it hurt her to see her devars raking it up again. She wanted to stop it all but was clueless on how to go about it.

"No Omkara, you have it all wrong. This is just how mom is, she just worries too much about me and is protective. She wants what's best for me, that's it." Shivaay responded barely audible.

"Yehi toh problem hai teri Shivaay. Kab tak apni aakhon pe patiyan bandh ke ghoomega tu? Don't you see how she has messed you up? Your notions of NKK, where did they come from? Does she even allow you let go of them? Think back, how many times have you been proven wrong due to your belifs in NKK with Tia, Daksh, Nayantara, Anika Bhabhi. You are so blinded by your beliefs that she has instilled in you that you cannot differentiate the right from the wrong, the good from the bad." Omkara nudged Shivaay with every point he made, coaxing him to put things together, pushing him towards the truth that Shivaay had been ignoring.

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Hello all,

I am back with the second and the last pat. Thanks for the tremendous response, it was definitely more than what I had expected. I hope you enjoy this part too. I choose to end this TS the way I do, because I really am not capable of writing the next parts.

I now I have not yet responded to all the previous comments, I promise I will do that soon.

Enjoy!!!

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"Om...no!!! Anika proclaimed in a hushed tone, unsure if Om had even heard her. However, both Rudy and he turned towards her to give her a reassuring smile. We know what we are doing, it told her. Trust us Bhabhi.

"Maybe this is for the best Anika. Hone do jo ho raha hai." Dadi patted her hands. Shocked at her words, Anika looked up to meet Dadi's eyes, questioning her, and got an understanding nod in response. Next, she looked around the room and found that except for the brothers, who were once again staring each other down, all eyes were on her. Most of them knew her truth, everything she faced, no wonder they were not stopping Om. Finally, her eyes locked with those of Pinky Aunty and she was shocked to see the accusation in her eyes. She still believes she is in the right. She has no realization of how her interference is ruining everybody's lives, especially her own son's. Or maybe, he is not her son just like she had claimed.

Maybe Dadi is right, maybe it was time to let go of all pretences and stop shielding Shivaay from the truth. It's not like it worked the last time she tried to protect him from his mother's wrath. She squared her shoulders and stared back at Pinky challenging her to try her nautanki again. She was determined to not back down this time, and when the time comes she will be besides Shivaay to support him. Yes, it was time to let go of the hold Pinky had on her and Shivaay's life and embrace what their destiny had to offer.

"What...what are you getting at Omkara? What has my beliefs got to do with whatever it was that you were shouting at Mom for?" Shivaay was visibly shaken, soothing the pulse on his forehead as he stared at Omkara. He felt the beginning of a headache from the memories of all the mistakes he had made in the past.

"So you want to know what happened today or rather has been happening for the past few days." Omkara asked with a sigh. "Fine! Choti Ma has been putting Gauri down for her lack of NKK and education." Omkara continued when Shivaay nodded.

"She has been trying to widen the gap that already exists between us. I agree, our relation did not start on the best of terms. We had a lot of misunderstandings, trust issues, communication issues, but eventually we are trying to overcome them. I have started to understand and trust her. I am trying to make this relationship of ours work because if there is one thing I have learned from all your marriages is that no relation will survive if there is no trust and understanding between the people involved. But I am sure Choti ma could not accept that, how can Omkara move on when her precious Shivaay is still not married. What if Omkara starts producing the heirs to the Oberoi Empire before Shivaay? Kyon, sahi kahan na Choti ma, it is always about NKK and inheritance for you, isn't it? She took to sowing seeds of self-doubt in Gauri's mind. Things that Choti ma said, made her question her own worth, her position in my life, the probability of this marriage ever working. She did this all despite knowing very well that none of these things had ever mattered to me. Gauri has been behaving very odd of late and it was only when I saw with own eyes and heard with own ears what Choti Ma was saying that it all clicked together. Gauri aur mera rishta kya hai, kaisa hai, yeh sirf hum dono ki problem hai. Yeh rishta aage badhe ya toote, yeh hum dono ka faisla hoga jo sirf aur sirf hum lenge. Aur main yeh bilkul nahi bardasht karunga agar koi isse todne ki koshish kare. Aaj Gauri iss ghar mein meri patni ki haisiyat se reh rahi hai aur aage bhi rahegi. Unless of course we mutually decide to end it. But until then she will be given the love and respect that a daughter-in-law in this family deserves and I as her husband will see to it." Shivaay could only look on in wonder as Omkara spoke his heart out.

"Nahi Shivaay. Yeh lies hai. I was only explaining Gauri about the facts." Pinky rushed in, afraid that Shivaay may actually believe Omakara.

"So you do agree that you spoke to Gauri about the lack of her NKK and education? And what else did I hear? Yes, you had said that I will throw her out of this house for those exact reasons, just how Shivaay threw out Anika Bhabhi. Yes? Gauri, did she not say that too?"Omkara replied, cynicism dripping from his voice.

"Nahi Shivaay. Yeh tumhe mere khilaaf karne ki koshish hai beta. Mera believes karo, maine aisa kuch nahi kaha. I promises." Pinky knew she was in a hard place. Shivaay trusted Omkara just as much as he trusted her. She could hear the wheels turning in Shivaay's head and she could not afford to lose his trust. She made a last ditch effort to get him to side with her, pleading to him to trust her.

Gauri had sat still, watching and listening to the events that were unfolding in front of her. Even though she was hurt by Pinky maaji's constant scoffs, she had come to accept some of the truth in her words. Except for her love and devotion, she did not have anything to offer Omkaraji. She was not his equal in any way that mattered in this world. It was due to this realization and her promise to Omkaraji to give him some time to sort out his thoughts that she had kept shut and took Pinky maaji's insults quietly as she did not want to be the reason behind any family discord.

But today when he had stood up for her, taken her side and told off Pinky maaji, she had experienced a flutter in her heart. He stood right before her own eyes defending her and calling her his wife, in front of his entire family. Something he still hesitated to do even in the privacy of their shared room. He had never labelled this relation that they shared, but today he did not hesitate even for a single second before fighting for her. Yes he also did this for Anika Bhaujai, this was a good chance to open bade bhaiya's eyes to his mother's truth. But surely, it cannot all be for just Anika Bhaujai's sake. Bade bhaiya was not even around when it had all started.

This incident had given rise to hope, something that even their close encounters over the last few weeks failed to do. Maybe, they still had a chance, Gauri sighed. Didn't he just tell bade bhaiya that even though it took him some time, he has finally started to understand and trust me?

"Yes Shivaay, trust her. Please do trust her. Because that is what you have always done. Whenever you started doubting your ingrained beliefs, she made sure to create situations to make you trust her again. Remember Nayantara? Do you know who brought her here? Choti Ma did, because she could sense that you were getting over your NKK views with regards to Bhabhi and how could she accept a daughter-in-law that was not khandaani or amir. Don't look so shocked Choti Ma, Anika Bhabhi and Gauri had both seen you with Nayantara and I choose to believe them, while Shivaay could not connect the dots despite your behaviour being so obvious at that time. Omkara turned back towards Shivaay, continuing to address him again. "But I tried to stay out of it, because it was a matter between a husband and a wife. It was not my place to speak up. But what did you do Shivaay? It was her word against your mother's word. No matter what Bhabhi had done for you in the past, no matter how many times she had proven herself correct, she always fell short and the only reason that happened was because the Great Shivaay Singh Oberoi would not trust the words of a person who lacked NKK. No matter how many times she put herself on the line for your sake, you continued to misunderstand her every time your beliefs were challenged. Heck even when you almost declared your love for Bhabhi, it only took a few harsh words for you to throw her out of your life because she behaved like a money hungry nobody. Your love was not enough to overcome your trust issues and your beliefs. Had you valued the right things, had Choti ma taught you to value the right things, maybe you would be happier today."

"Apni aakhein kholo Shivaay. Use that smart brain of yours, the one that you use when you deal with the business aspects of your life. Sort through everything you know, you have seen and heard, and then, hopefully, you will be able to realize your folly and fix the mess in your life. And if you still cannot figure out the truth, then you surely do not deserve her."Omkara's eyes pointed towards Anika as he said those last few words.

"Chalo Gauri, we have things to discuss." he called out to her. Holding her hand, he confidently led her towards their bedroom.

Dadi and Anika squeezed each other's hands, delighted that at last Om and Gauri's story was headed in the right direction. Maybe this was the opening they both needed to sort out their differences.

Hesitatingly she peeked at Shivaay, mentally preparing herself to face the consequences of today's encounter, supporting Shivaay and helping him out with whatever inner turmoil he was facing. But no amount of preparation could have readied her for the devastation she saw on his face. The lost look on his face was heart wrenching. Shivaay took a few staggered steps backward, before he almost ran out of the house on unsure feet. Her heart stopped beating for a fraction of a second before she stood up and followed the love of her life in all haste, followed by Rudra. This was when he needed her the most, and nothing in the world was going to stop her from being by his side.

The End.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was an interesting one
Couldn't believe Omkara would be the one who will stand against pinky and maybe show a mirror to Shivay too
But please don't misunderstanding between them
Update next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome 👏👍🏼
thanks for witting it and i so wanted this
continue soon please
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Wow this was some intense stuff
Amazing
Beautifully penned, great job
Can't wait for the second part!
Much love!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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outstanding
loved it
i hope such a scene come in serial wanna see this
as i know both nakul kunal will nail it
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Super interesting version..I am living this angle to expose pinky... would love to read more and more.. please write more and soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update yar
i really wish that om will say the truth in front of everyone like this...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awsome. Ant wait for next update

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