Jai Vennela FanFiction - Are We Meant to Be- Part 10, Pg 16, 12th Feb - Page 10

Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 6 years ago

#91

Awesome one

Loved it

So both have feelings for each other but think the other does not

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shreya

@shreyj7

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Posted: 6 years ago

#92

Oh so cute these both are truely cute..

So they do feel for each other. I think slowly slowly they will realise and then confess.

Aye when she screamed for Jai my heart stopped for a bit and then I was like woah what happened. After he saw her like that I was like hope she is okay.

Ayye she scold anna instead of Syam oh god. True Syam it is kinda y'alls responsibility to keep them together.

Anba. (Hoping I used the correct name and spelling)

Their relationship ai feel like is going to blossom into such a beautiful one liek very very beautiful!!

Loving it dear.

Keep Writing.

And now update very very soon!!

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fictitious

@fictitious

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Posted: 6 years ago

#93

Such a heartwarming update Anbu!
All it takes is an act of care to fall in love! Very well written. Lovely poster too!
Tamil na enakku romba pudikkum. Thanks for writing the dialogues in Tamil.

Please update sooner! 😭 Ye ivlo delay? :(

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 6 years ago

#94

Awesome update Anby. 🤗 This was so worth the wait.

Jai and Vennu are struggling with their marriage because neither of them wanted to be married for their own reasons. So of course for them to adjust to the situation would be nerve wracking.

But they have two angels in their lives in the forms of Syam and Anand. And of course Latha's blessings.

I like how you have portrayed Jai's caring nature, and how Vennela has already noticed the same.

Am so looking forward to read more and more about how these two adjust and react

Waiting for the next update.

And that poster is mind blowing.

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 6 years ago

#95

Thanks for Update,Dear.😊

It was So Happy to see your Update.😊

The Poster was so Awesome,The Coloring and Back Ground was so Nice..😊

This Part was Amazing.😊

Jai and Vennela felt embarrassed on seeing the Decoration,it was so Interesting.😊

Vennela became unconscious due to Current Shock,Jai Saved her,it was so Nice.😊

The way Jai worried for Vennela was so Nice.😊

Jai caring towards Vennela was so Interesting.😊

Jai feds food to Vennela and the way he makes her accept it,it was so Cute..😊

Vennela scolds Anand thinking it is Shyam,it was so Nice..😆

Jai said to Vennela that she wants freedom from this marriage,it was so sad.😔

Vennela feelings on Jai was so Interesting.😊

The Story is getting so Interesting.😊

Please Continue soon.😊

PriyaSweety-Anu

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 6 years ago

#96

nice story..

please continue soon... loved to read more

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bahubalifan

@bahubalifan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#97

Beautiful poster Anbu!

Loved Jai's caring nature now V doesn't see him as a stranger and accepts his friendship. She has developed feelings for him. Dei paiyaa seekiram V ah irukki anaichu oru ummah kodudaa ellam sariyagidum 😆 Syam and Anand playing cupid in their lives is cute. 😳 Looking forward for the next part.

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