Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam Raina FS last part pg7 - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
#31
HHawww
That was such a cute romantic part but it ended on sad note...
Both r in pain..
Confused with feelings...
Hope both realised soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Veer hurt Naina at the mandap whereas Sanjana insulted Raghav. Sanjana despised Raghav for Veer & now wants Raghav as Veer told her that he does not love her. Loved the way Sanam apologized to Raina. Raghav & Naina are sad that they are asked to give a chance to Sanjana & Veer. Hope Sanjana & Veer accept each other.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#33
wow great
 
awesome I just read only part 1
u have written it beautifully and this jealously angle from veer side will be quite interesting to watch
but will u continue it a show has end
pls do continue and complete it
 
hope some one like u writers of this forum would have written the script  then this show's  fate would have been different
 
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Posted: 6 years ago
#34
Awesome update, loved it.
Beautiful pics.
What a twist in the story, will RaIna sacrifice their love.
Sanjana and Veer understand what they have lost.
Continue soon, waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#35
aweseme and superb
u r developing the story in an interesting way
eager to know more
update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#36
lovely update
interesting twist
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37

Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam ( I Have Given My Heart Away Darling) Part3


Thanks a lot 4 the lovely comments.
Dedicated to Shakaib who gave a jodi name to Veer Sanjana-VeeNa



After a few days...

Naina got a parcel.A black dress and read the note:Wear this and come to the garden.
Naina smiled:Must be Raghav's gift.But why did he gift me this today?Today is not a special day.

Naina wore the dress and stepped out of the house.
N:Raghav must be waiting for me.I have to go fast.



She went to the garden.
She was shocked to see Veer there.
N:Veer!
Veer smiled:I am happy that you came here as per I told wearing this dress.Thank you Naina.I doubted whether you will come.
N:So you only called me here?


V:Yes.Why?
N:Nothing.I had a doubt.


Veer looked at Naina.He was lost in her beauty.
He thought:I always considered you as a behenji.But you proved me wrong.You look gorgeous in modern dress Naina.
Veer:You are so beautiful Naina.I have never seen a beauty like you.
She blushed:Really?




V:Yes.You are the most beautiful woman I have ever seen in my life.
She was shy.


He caressed her face romantically.

He moved towards her cheek to peck her.Naina blushed.


Suddenly he realized that it was only his imagination.He was embarrassed thinking:Naina is very conservative.Still i simply imagined romancing her.I am stupid.
N:Veer..why did you call me?
Veer held her hand and put a diamond ring on her finger shocking her.
N:Veer...what is this?
V:Naina..when our marriage got fixed by dadi I was'nt able to love you.It was a forced relationship.But now nobody forced me.But the truth is that I lost myself for you.I love you Naina.Will you marry me?
Naina was shocked.She remembered dadi and Raghav asking her to give one more chance to Veer.
Naina nodded:Yes Veer.
Veer was very happy:Thank you so much Naina for accepting me.I am on top of the world now.
Naina gave a fake smile.



Raghav watched this from behind with tears in his eyes and ran away.

Bejaan Dil Ko , Bejaan Dil Ko Tere Ishq Ne Zinda Kiya,
Phir Tere Ishq Ne Hi Is Dil Ko Tabah Kiya

He remembered his moments with Naina tearfully.

Tadap Tadap Ke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi, Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki,
Aisa Kya Gunah Kiya, 
Toh Lut Gaye, Haan Lut Gaye, Toh Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein,
Tadap Tadap 

He cried:Yes..I love Naina.But I lost her.First I loved Sanjana.I lost her.But when I fell for Naina I lost Naina too.Why God?Why are you doing this to me?

Ajab Hai Ishq Yara, Pal Do Pal Ki Khushiyan,
Gam Ke Khazane Milte Phir, Milti Hain Tanhaiyan,
Kabhie Aansoon, Kabhie Aahen, Kabhie Shikwe Kabhie Nale,
Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye,
Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye, Mujhe Din Ke Ujalon Mein Teri Yaadien Tadapayein,


Raghav kept crying.

Teri Yaadien Tadapayein, Raaton Ke Andheron Me Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye,
Machal Machal Ke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi, Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki,
Aisa Kya Gunah Kiya, Toh Lut Laye, Haan Lut Gaye,
Toh Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

Suddenly he heard a voice from behind:Raghav!
He wiped his tears and looked back.It was Sanjana.
Sanj:What happened Raghav?Your eyes look red?
Ragh:Dust got inside.
Sanj:But you look sad.
Ragh:Nothing like that Sanjana.


He tried to walk away.But Sanjana held his hand.
Sanj:I know why you are sad.You are sad as I gave you pain in return of your love.Right?
She cupped his face:But don't worry Raghav.I will give you so much of love that you will forget all the pain I gave you.
Raghav looked at Sanjana:Sanjana...
Sanj:I love you Raghav.Marry me please.
Raghav remembered dadi and Naina asking him to accept Sanjana.
Raghav nodded:Yes Sanjana.I will marry you.
Sanj:You don't know how happy I am Raghav.You made me feel like a princess.

Sanjana was so happy that she embraced him.
Naina who was going back home saw it and became dull.Then she smiled emotionally.

Raghav Sanjana and Veer Naina got engaged in a party.

Music was played.

Raghav Sanjana,Veer Naina were dancing.
But Raghav's eyes were on Naina and Naina's eyes were on Raghav.Still in front of Sanjana and Veer they faked smile.

Jab tak tujhe pyar se
Beinteha main bhar na dun

Jab tak main duaaoon sa
Sau dafa tujhe pad na loon
Haan mere paas tum raho
Jaane ki baat na karo
Mere sath tum raho
Jaane ki baat na karo
Woh oh o.. (x4)
Tum aa gaye baazuon mein mere
Sau sawere liye
Sau sawere liye
Haan baadalon se utaara gaya
Tumko mere liye sirf mere liye
Jab tak meri ungliyan
Tere baalon se kuch kehna le
Jab tak teri lehar mein
Khwaahishein meri behna le
Haan mere paas tum raho
Jaane ki baat na karo
Mere sath tum raho
Jaane ki baat na karo
Woh oh o.. (x4)
Edited by jasminerahul - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38
awesome update di
thanks for the pm
short comment isliye bcoz net is slow its raining in pune
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Posted: 6 years ago
#39
Beautiful update nice to read thanks for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
#40
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Interesting Part.😊
The Whole Conversation were So Nice.😊
The Story is getting So Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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