Devakshi SS:- Love Till Eternity A/N on Pg 29 - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago

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love the chapter very much

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Sharica

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Very intetesting start Adi...writing style is good as usual..

Dev ki ego hurt ho gayi in the first chapter coz he came second for the first time..Awww..

Ab kya toofaan layega ye DD? Ya khud iski jindagi badal jayegi..

Update soon...waiting...

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Very nice chapter. :)

Your stories has a kind of peace and calmness in them which i really like.

Story progression is very natural and relateable, so no worries for that.

So Dev Babu ka ego hurt ho gya second aane pe.

Lets see kya dhamaka krte hai yeh. 😆

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Swarna

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Hi dear !!😊

Awesome update...I'm liking the concept.⭐️⭐️

Please continue soon.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: binuuu
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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Ria_Ca

Perfect start Aditi..luving it already ⭐️

Yayy Sonakshi came first..Dev jelo 👏

Looking forward to next part 😃

Thank you so much...I am glad that you are liking this story too...

Oh...so you are supporting Sonakshi over Dev...very good

I will try to update soon

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AnanyaGhosh

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Posted: 7 years ago

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I have already read this chap.. And comment bhi ho gya tha.. Baas yehi kahungi do update soon and new writing style is really good... And yes i m keeping an eye on ur insta acc...

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anjali333
Awesome...
Or writing style... That is also as always wonderful
I found it just perfect

Dev dikhshit ek kanya se haar gaya😆...
I loved it

Update next part soon

Thank you so much Anjali...I am happy ki sabko yeh story first chapter se acchi lag rahi hai...

Hehehe...accha dialogue tha naa...my creative mind ka ek piece tha...lol

I will update soon😊

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Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh
I have already read this chap.. And comment bhi ho gya tha.. Baas yehi kahungi do update soon and new writing style is really good... And yes i m keeping an eye on ur insta acc...

Haan mujhe pata hai...I will update soon and thank you so much dii...hehe...stalker Anu dii😊

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: DEFOM
love the chapter very much

Thank you so much😊

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