Devakshi SS:- Love Till Eternity A/N on Pg 29 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Sharica

Very intetesting start Adi...writing style is good as usual..

Dev ki ego hurt ho gayi in the first chapter coz he came second for the first time..Awww..

Ab kya toofaan layega ye DD? Ya khud iski jindagi badal jayegi..

Update soon...waiting...

Originally posted by: cscs

Very nice chapter. :) 

Your stories has a kind of peace and calmness in them which i really like. 

Story progression is very natural and relateable, so no worries for that. 

So Dev Babu ka ego hurt ho gya second aane pe. 

Lets see kya dhamaka krte hai yeh. 😆

Originally posted by: Swarna_99

Hi dear !!😊

Awesome update...I'm liking the concept.⭐️⭐️

Please continue soon. 

Hold on hold on
Agar main jo soch rahi hoon yeh story waise hi aage badhne waali hai to its gonna be a hell of a solid concept
Yeh maine kyun nahi socha
Chal main nahi tu sahi
Jaldi update karna
Waiting to see my prediction come true

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Hold on hold on
Agar main jo soch rahi hoon yeh story waise hi aage badhne waali hai to its gonna be a hell of a solid concept
Yeh maine kyun nahi socha
Chal main nahi tu sahi
Jaldi update karna
Waiting to see my prediction come true

It's a very interesting no nonsense style of writing. Will wait for next update 

So First Chapter Curtained is Opened...And After long Time I have read the chapter on the same day it was Published...😳😆

Originally posted by: PY18

It's a very interesting no nonsense style of writing. Will wait for next update 

Originally posted by: .kashishbano.

So First Chapter Curtained is Opened...And After long Time I have read the chapter on the same day it was Published...😳😆 Hehehe...I know ek time tha jab humesha yeh hota tha...but ab nahiin 😆😆

First Of All I will tell You about your writing Style ...As usual It is Mind Boggling.👏👏 Aww...thank you dii...thank you so much...

You are very well aware⭐️ with the style of describing the different concepts in different ways and I really loved ❤️ your way of writing. Bolne ki zarorat hai kya😉😃...Nahiin dii...there is still so much to learn...and am still learning...

Coming to the Chapter, It was so interesting And Amazing.👏The story progress is so natural. Thank you so much dii...am glad ki aapko pasand aaya...

Actually I find the chapter very relatable because  reading this chapter make me remember my 12th standard days where just like Dev i was also in shock on seeing my name on second position but I was lucky because i got my position back as I made rechecked the papers.😃😃 Omg!! Aisa hua tha kya?? Yeh toh sach mein kisi ki story ban gayi...!!

Dev ko bhi papers recheck karwana chahiye😉😆 Hehehehe😆😆

Sona is so calm and compose...I liked it that she didn't react on Bunty taunts.Haan woh na bilkul mere opposite hai...Dev ka character mujhse inspired hai...heheh  gussa wala and egoistic

Dev ego is already hurt and On that His Dad rubbing salt on his wounds😆 Hahaha...he is a fun loving and a cool dad...

The best dialogue of this chapter is.And i loved it very much.So great sense of  humour u holds.

Ravindra: "Oh...toh mera putra ek kanya se haar ke aaye hain😆 🤣

Dev: "Aur mann kar raha hai ki uss kanya ka toh main college se kanyadaan karwa dun"😆 🤣. Hehehe...accha tha na...mere creative mind ka piece hai😉😆😆

You always potray the relations very well ..I liked the convo between the Mother daughter and Father son. Thank you dii...thanks a lot

Excited to know which storm Dev will bring and what effect that storm will leave on Devakshi.kuch toh woh karega hi...😉

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Edited by .kashishbano. - 7 years ago