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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Nice..

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Originally posted by: heemasomani
Good part

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: LOVE.GOLD
Loved it dear Shanu Awesome update
Love you lots 🤗
Noor and Zeeshan are too cute
Concert was really good ... And the song you choose was also beautiful
I just loved Noor authorization on Zeeshan and the way she shooed the girls away was really good 👏
I really wish that they both can be together
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

Thanks Goldie. Love you lots too. 🤗

Noor and Zeeshan have a really adorable bond of friendship and that will be discovered more in the upcoming chapters.

Well, both are very possessive about each other hence the jealousy. 😆😆

But destiny has something else planned for Noor which will be even more beautiful. ❤️

Stay Tuned. 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Forever...
Awesome

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: akriti154
Amazing start
noor n zee's concert was a huge hit
zee pampering noor n teasing her that her husband wonder do it fr her n her rply was cute
she was jealous of d fangirling zee was getting
continue soon
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Thanks Akriti.

Glad you loved it, Noor and Zeeshan will get more adorable. 😛

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: SaRun.
"Yeh Zeeshan hai koi Adeel Hussain nai" had me in splits!!
Loved the first chap. A nice intro to their world. Loving Noor & Zee's bond!

Continue soonish!!

Aww, thank you Babe. <3

Glad you loved it so much.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Such a cute and lovely update!

Thank you Choti. <3

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: poojasidd123
A very interesting chapter!

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Posted: 6 years ago

Res. 😎

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Unres. 😛

Yeah. Yeah I'm here this early, unlike you. 😆😆😆

Like I say, I unres soon cuz being late or being lazy and unresing after that is a pain in the ass. 🥱

So to start with, Zeeshan is an adorable fella sleeping in the only lecture Noor doesn't has in common with him. 😆😆

I even loved how he smacked Noor's head who was so engrossed in reading. 😆😆

Then his gobbling up the whole of cheese sandwich with ketchup was funnier. 🤣

So, Noor is an avid Nora Roberts Fan like us. Hehe. 😉

And then her whole going jealous over the fact that Zeeshan had complimented Alisha who was showing off. 🤣

I want to hit Zeeshan with a hathoda as to how he can be so dumb so as to not notice that soft blush on her face whenever he talks about him and her. 😕

Guys don't tend to miss such things but I'm glad he does cuz Noor has something more beautiful in store for her. 😳

Zeeshan had have a difficult childhood and one can understand it from the bitterness he holds towards his mother. The way Noor consoled him and the whole flashback was so so beautifully written. 👏👏

Little Noor and Zeeshan, Their friendship, Their innocence is so beautiful.

The way Noor says she has ample time and gave him her chocolate was so so beautiful. ❤️

I don't blame Zeeshan for being against the ideas of marriage, kids and family but Noor's optimistic approach is refreshing balanced with his. <3

The way she fangirls about Shah and hates kjo. 🤣

I cracked up at how she poked ball point into his ear to wake him up. 🤣

Samar likes Noor. 😳

It was sweet of how, he is so nervous yet gentle around her. I for one, absolutely loved their bonding over Prose and John Keats. ❤️

But Zeeshan is jealous and though I somewhere understand the concept of his jealousy but asking Noor to stay away from him was a bit too much. 😳

She isn't a kid to be told as to what to do and what not.

Update Real Soon. 🤗

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