Chapter Eight FOR AN UNUSUAL SUSPECT ON PG 17 - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: itsmeg3

What a twist ๐Ÿ‘ written like a pro.


Too good ..Thanks for pm

Thank you for liking and giving feedback!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: amzz12

Your skill of describing things is beautiful ...keep it up!!

really appreciate your comments...thank you!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Rayaland

Beautiful part n loved it n pls update soon next part

thanks..will try and update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ic_2000

Read all the updates...
Awesome
Loved it
Thanks for pm.
Waiting for next part.

oh nice! Thank you for appreciate my work๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

I am yet to read my dear
Will soon do this and than comment ๐Ÿ˜Š

Dear Aanchal, your feedback is always looked forward to ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: kavyaaakapoor

Nice update
PLZ continue soon

thanks...hopefully will be able to update in a few days
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Mitwaa

Awesome update
Eagerly waiting for ur update
Continue soon
Intersecting story plzz update soon

thank you for liking this story and for taking the time to give feedback ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kiruthikaaaru

All the parts are awesome Yar pls do continue soon ...

Thanks a ton for liking and commenting!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

The past or say a beautiful night which cause two lovers to unite as one died with the witnessing of her beloved in someone else embrace. 


Ram is still fighting with his past demons which is why he decorated a Playboy picture for Priya to mu him.

Without any hope for them she said everything in anger which he only was a mute listener. Can't he figured out their is more of concern and care for him from her words.

The present bring a more strong individual which Priya became of Ram rejection but seems these gap of eight months unable to create distance between these two who wanna be with each other only. 

Thank for the pm dear and for another terrific chapter.

P.S. Did u subscribe alt Balaji or not 

Both Ram and Priya are growing mentally because of this love. Bittersweet moments will hopefully make them realize not to let go what's precious hopefully before it's not too late. Thank you for providing feedback as always. Yes dear, I did subscribe to ALTBalaji...how could I not...counting down minutes and seconds just like other Balhians๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

so so so superb. fantabuous. kya bolu yaar..too gud. priyas outburst was mind blowing. and finally RaYa dance...ohhh.
.wow . u write so beautifully. pl continue jaldi.

thank you for liking Priya's outburst...even though she has momentary weaknesses but this Priya is a strong person. And whenever RaYa are in the same space toh fireworks toh bantey hein. I am working on the next chapter...let's see when it comes together