AarYa OS: Colors of Passion

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is one BEAUTIFULLY Written OS ⭐️


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Tess, this time I won't much comment on the OS but rather comment on you and your writing skills. ⭐️

You know I am past the stage to think which of your stories (from OS's to SS's to FF's) are my most favorite. Cause every time I think I have found one, you manage to come up with something more mind blowing.

You know very well that from your FF's my most favorite is "Dark Angel" and from OS's is the one where you made me cry buckets (sorry I don't remember the name). But it's the one where I actually cried so much and could not comment. Yes I was that shaken.

Till date I remember so many many many scenes from Dark Angel. You'd to surprised to know that these days I don't even remember scenes from my own stories so you can imagine what DA means to me. Tess, in DA, there is this scene when AarYa are getting Married and Aarti stops at the alter.

I had read a similar scene in one of the novels that I love to read. In that story also the heroine stops at the alter, as she is walking towards the hero. As she stops, the hero's heartbeat also stops. The author has described that scene so well that it has become my most favorite scenes. I felt something similar when I read Yash's reaction in DA when Aarti stops for a second. I can't describe how I felt when I read that small scene. Yash's vulnerability and fear was clearly visible through your words. It was like I was going through the same, as if I was living in that moment.

Same I felt when I read the drum beating scenes in this OS. I was so awed by the way you have written that scene. Tess I am not lying when I say once again I felt like l was present there when Yash was beating the drum and Aarti was lost in its beat.

Aarti could feel his emotions in his beats, while Yash could sense her emotions in her dance and I could sense their emotions all because of your writing skills.

In this scene and the one from the DA, the emotions, the fear, the vulnerability of these characters was so raw, so naked as if you have bared their souls to us.

Yes these scenes are so impactful that I got lost in them. Yes these scenes are so impactful that they will stay with me for very very very long time.

Yes my dear you truly are one talented person not just in writing but also in other aspects of life. And it's an honor to know you as a person and to be one of your readers. ❤️











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Posted: 8 years ago
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Another amazing Os ⭐️
Thanks Tessa for sharing 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing,aaryti has forgiven yash after so long which i good bcoz yash shouldnt have put the entire blame on aarti.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing os
beautifully written
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome os
AarYa lost their baby because of yash and aarti was aloof from yash,yash ask forgiveness from aarti but she didn't want to got hurt again,on holi day AarYa finally confence their love for one other.
Thanks for this beautiful os
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing Os, beautiful concept, exceptionally written, thanx for sharing and keeping this forum alive, loved the os
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Posted: 8 years ago
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yet another beautiful OS
ouch bcoz of yash aarti lost their child
in his anger yash hurt aarti very badly 😡
blamed aarti for what happened in Mumbai 😡
poor aarti suffered a lot in past & still bcoz of yash also she suffered 🥺
only bcoz of their kids aarti were in her sense 😭
finally at holi aarya put their past behind & moved on 😊
yash confess his love for aarti so beautifully that aarti couldn't deny his love ❤️
wow aarya love making was so wild passionate 😳
yippee aarti got pregnant finally 🥳
loll after their confession yash became so naughty didn't care anyone he would carry aarti whenever he can 😉
at last this time aarti got her fairytale life❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing how you have captured the painful emotion and tension between Aarya. It was so intense that it felt like you could cut it with a knife😕.

It all started with a miscommunication and denial to culminate to the loss of her unknown pregnancy. Gosh, the matter of fact tone when Aarti said you killed the link was so painful😭, it felt like she would never recover. This electroshock finally woke up Yash but a little too late; what an awful way to discover that you actually love the wife you've been rejecting for months. He has been so wrapped up in his "hurt" that he made Aarti and people around life miserable. I want to say that he was selfish but he simply was lost and did not know how to move on from his own supposed betrayal and pain. Now after the tragedy, he finally saw how his awful behavior hat led to Aarti breaking point. He is sorry beyond belief but also aware of what he did is almost unforgivable so being Yash he set to atone his faults and remain distant because in a way he passed the sentence and deserved to be punished. If only he realized sooner that Aarti only needed him to reach out. She fought so hard and so long for him that her insecurities reaches an all time low because she still think that he can only love Arpita. No wonder she close herself off to further pain. Losing their link was excruciating because it was also the last hope she had to make him realize that she was there.

It was up to him to reach for her, once he understood that the punishment has to end, he set out win her. Both wanting to close the gap but not knowing how to do it. That dance was a brilliant spur of the moment solution. Dance and music can emote so many emotion; longing, pleasure, excitement and temptation. It was all there for them to finally found their way. And boy did they do 😳, it only took a nudge from Aaman, those precious kids and the family to put them back on the right path. I do love the ending with the family fun 😆and yep Yash has a lot of time to make up for. Wonderfully written.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Edited my reserved spot on page one 😃

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