RISHBALA SS- Love You Gudiya (Last Part pg 15 dt 14/4) - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Nithunavi

Wow.. aishu.. ! 

Update is super. :)
So this's going to be a suspense thriller .
Story plot is cool. Continue writing :)
Tq for pm

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Posted: 7 years ago
#42
Thank you so much πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Superb update, loved it.

What happened and who did wrong with her and why is she punishing RK for that. 
Madhu is Maya's sister.
Does Madhu have doubt on RK that he is normal but pretending to be a special child and that's the reason she wants to know the secret.
Does RK want to tell her the truth.
Thanks for the PM Aishu.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: sapnaf52

beautiful update. .aishu
madhu have sister. .
she is the reason ..that rk acting like mentally challenge. .
feeling sad for rishbala. .
thanks for pm

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Posted: 7 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: pirl18

Kya baat h...
So fabulous

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Posted: 7 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

Great start.. Ash..
Very nicely..
And sweet title..
Thanks for pm :)

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Posted: 7 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: manna43

Awesome start.A supernatural Maya forcing rk to play a MR.How sullu n rk r going to find who killed Maya.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
Hi friends..here is the next part..so many things are revealed in this part...pls ignore grammatical mistakes..past is written in blue πŸ˜Š



 Love You Gudiya



Part-2



"what u call me now..??"madhu asks him by coming towards him..he remained silent.
"madhu..hah..u called me madhu..my name..this is not the voice of a child..now tell y..y this.."madhu.
"u dont understand anything.."rk.
"oh..u r the one who knows everything in the world hah..yesterday itself i came to know that u were acting brilliantly..u know how..what u thought i were slept last night..?no yesterday was a sleepless night for me by thinking how i adjust with u but u r enough smart to fool anyone behind the mask of a child..i heard ur conversation in phone..& from that i came to know sultan is helping u..& this too i heard that u told sorry to me...u know y i remained silent after knowing all these..to find out ur truth..today when u leave with sultan i checked ur shelf for the phone but instead of that i got an album..so i asked ur ma about this & i came to know that 5 years before u met with an accident in madhaya pradesh & after that u became like a...but its not true..u r a crook who is betraying all including ur ma..tell y u r doing this all.."madhu..
"i cant tell it u...its my personal matter.."rk.
"personal matter...i am ur wife.."madhu..
"but i cant be ur husband..pls leave me alone.."he tries to leave but she holds his hand & stops him..
"i want the answer or else i will tell everything to ma.."madhu.
"no...pls..she cant bear it.."rk.
"so u know that then y r u doing like this hah..?"madhu.
"madhu...i...i will tell..."rk...madhu looks him..
"when i went to madhya pradesh with my friends there..."before he could complete he hears maya's voice "rishab no..if u tell anything to her...u know na.." madhu did'nt hear her voice...
"tell..what happend there.."madhu..
"no..nothing.."she saw sweat in his forehead..
"tell me the truth i want to know..y u r afraid to say it..??"madhu.
"pls..dont force me..i cant tell.."rk..
"no rk..i want to know..or surely u tell to ma.."madhu.
"no..u wont.."he said in a strong tone..
"yes i will.."madhu.
"if u tell this to my ma.."he moved towards the desk & took the knife placed near the fruit & placed to on his wrist.."i will kill my self.."he concluded..she looks him bewildered...
"will u tell this to ma.."he asks like threatening her..
"no i wont..."madhu..tears rolled from her cheeks..he placed the knife back & went to bed..


After 1 week

Sultan came to kundra mansion & as usual took rk with him..but this time they went to a secluded area instead of his home...
"sullu y v came here...?"rk..sultan smiles..."what happend..u r looking happy today..after a long time u r looking like this.."rk.
"our all problems solved.."sultan.
"what..?"rk.
"yes rk...maya killed her murders & v r free now.."sultan..
"what is it true..??"rk..
"yes.."sultan..maya appeared there..they looks her..she smiles..
"u r free now.."maya.
"but..how this happend..u told me na u dont the people who killed u.."rk.
"y u want to know more...u can lead a normal life now..thats all.."she told this & disappeared..
"sultan i cant believe it.."rk hugs him..

~~~~~~~

Rk mansion

"ma..."rk runs & hugs radha..
"rishu.."radha gets surprised in rk's normal behavior..
"ma..now i can live like everyone.."rk..radha looks him confused & asked sultan "what happend sultan..??''radha..
"aunty ji u v can sit & speak.."sultan..madhu also came there..

"aunty ji..rishab were acting thought out all these 5 years.."sultan..
"but y..??"radha..
"u dont know what happend in our life before 5 years..that trip changed our whole life..

**Flash back**

Madhya pradesh..

"hey dude i am getting bored by sitting this room..v can do anything.."sultan tells to rk..
"hm..v can go to sikky's & mukund's room & can ask what they r doing.."rk.
"what else..like everytime boozing.."sultan.
"then v can also join them.."rk smirked..they went to sikky's & mukku's room & knocked..
sikky opened the door & mukund tries hide something..rk saw it & asks"is it bottle..??"
"no.."mukund..
"then what..?"sultan...mukund shoes it to them..
"ouija board.."rk & sullu.
"yes..v tried to play it.."sikky..
"oh..i heard about it..v call talk with ghosts using this.."rk.
"yes..me too heard about it..so rk.."sultan looks him..
"sorry dudes..v r taking this.."he tells this & took it with him..sikky & mukku looks them dumbstruck..

Rk & sullu's room

"so lets start.."sullu..rk looks tensed..
"what happend..?r u afraid..?"sullu.
"no..it was my first experience.."rk.
"mine too.."sullu...
"u know how to play this..?"rk.
"yes..i heard about it.."sullu..he light a candle & turn of the light..they starts playing the game...


***** **** ****

"v thought it was just a game..but.."sultan.
"v encounters with a real ghost named maya..she was searching for her murders..& she tells us v want to help her..v get afraid & runs out of the hotel that only v know..after that v find our self in hospital.."rk completed..
"v thinks all over but she followed us..haunt us..& told us v cant marry anyone until v find her murderers..& prohibit us from telling this to anyone..i am a orphan na..so i have no problem..my life is in my hand but rk in bonds of relation..so he done all these...but now she let us free & told she finds her murders & punished them.."sultan..radha looks rk with teary eyes..
"sorry ma.."rk..radha hugs him & cries..
"its unbelievable.."madhu..
"one more thing..that maya us none another than your sister.."sultan.
"what..??"she stood in shock..
"yes madhu..."rk.
"no..no its not true..my didu was not murdered.."she cried..
"madhu cool down..v can understand ur situation.."sultan.
"no..she was not murdered..it was an accident.."madhu.
"what..?may that culprits created it like an accident.."rk.
"no..its not like that..u know how she died.."madhu..


**flash back**


"didu..didu where r u.."madhu called her..
"ha madhu.."she came..
"wow didu..today u r looking beautiful..where r u going..?"madhu.
"its secret.."maya.
"pls..tell na.."madhu.
"today i am going see a special person.."maya..
"who is that..?"madhu smirked..
"u dont want to know about that now..after coming back i will tell..."she leaves..madhu smiles..


***** ******

After that i only saw my didu's lifeless body..but it was not a murder her scooty loss its balance & hits a tree..tears rolled from her eyes..
"then y she told lie to us..??"rk thought..

After 1 month..

Night..

Rk went to his room & closed the door..madhu runs to him & back hugged him..
"madhu.."he turns..
"shh.."she palmed his mouth..
"what happend to u..?"rk.
"it has been a month since v got married.."madhu.
"so..?"rk.
"v did'nt start our relation yet.."madhu..
"i am ready now.."she tells & pecked his lower lips...rk stands without understanding anything...first time she is behaving like this...
"Make me urs rk.."she broke the kiss & tells...he smiled..a confused smile..she scoop her in his arms & placed her on bed..she grabbed him & bring him closer to her & raise her head to kiss him but he jerked back..she looks him confused..
"sorry madhu..i dont know y i feel like this..but i am not feeling comfortable today...v will do it later.."rk..she raise
from the bed & tells "what happend rk..i am ur wife..& i have right on u.."
"yes..u only have right on u me..i agree but.."rk.
"but what rk..dont u love me..?"madhu.
"yes..i love u madhu..i love u more than me..more than anything in this world.."rk.
"then whats ur problem.."she came near him & hugs him..
"v have only three days..before that i want u..i want u now..."madhu said like ordering..
"three days...what u mean..?"rk.
"aa..nothing.."madhu told.
"madhu y r u behaving varied..?"rk.
"becoz of love..i love u so much rk..& i want my love..no one can separate after this..."madhu.
"u dont worry..no one will separate us.."rk..
"but she will.."madhu.
"who..u r talking about whom..?"rk.
"My sister.."madhu.
"Ur sister..?u meant maya..she will not come back again.."rk.
"how can u talk like this rk..i came back from death for u only...then y r u doing like this..?"madhu..
"madhu.."rk calls her confused..her eyes turned red..
"which madhu...i am maya.."Madhu fell on the bed & maya came out of her body..
"maya.."he calls shocked & moved back..
"y rk..y u r avoiding me...u r only mine..only mine..if she come between us i dont even think a second to finish her.."maya.
"y r u doing all these..what u want..?"rk.
"i want u rk..only u.."maya..
"what have done to u y u r torturing me again.."rk.
"this is not torture..this is love..i love u rk.."maya.
"what..?"rk.
"yes..u know maya only as a spirit..u know the maya who loves u a lot..u know the girl who loss her life before telling her love...u know the real story of maya..???"maya..rk looks her..




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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Superb update 
After half of update i was so happy that finally maya left now rk and madhu's lovestory will start 
But she came back in last part 
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
Maya is obsessed for rk she is forcing rk to love her n how can she do this to her sister who loves her a lot
Poor rk hope he found solution of this Maya