RISHBALA SS- Love You Gudiya (Last Part pg 15 dt 14/4)

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Hi Buddies...
Here starts my new story..
i know i have a handful of stories to complete but this idea strikes on my mind 2 days before & its forcing me to write..will you like if i write rishbala story in rajbala style..?Thats what this story is..so giving a short prologue...



Love You Gudiya



prologue



"Madhu r u sure..?"bittu ji her chacha asked madhu..
"Yes chacha..i have no other option..they gave 1 cr to my family for this marriage.."madhu wipes her tears..
"but u know who is the groom..?"bittuji.
"hm..rishab kundra..son of mohan kundra..physically perfect...but..mentally.."her voice faltered..
"if u dont like this marriage then v can call off this..."madhu.
"no chacha..tomorrow is the marriage..v cant do anything..my ma & papa also dont like this proposal but our situation is forcing us...papa need a heart surgery and it costs 5 lakh..they r thinking after marriage he will become ok..but i dont know marriage can change a person..tomorrow is the end of my life.."tears continually falls from her eyes..bittu ji leaves from there as he cant see her pain..



Next morning



padmini gets madhu ready for marriage..madhu notices tears in corner of padmini's eyes..
"ma..plz..dont cry.."madhu wipes her tears.
"madhu do u feel v sold u for money..?"padmini.
"ma..y r u talking like this..i know u na..i am happy.."madhu pretend smile..
"y u r acting..i can see pain ur eyes.."padmini..
"ma.."she hugs her & cries..
"padmini.."they hears the voice of shamseer..
"i will come now.."padmini leaves..madhu sat on the chair & looks at her palms..the mehndhi is deep red...but she ignored it..

"madhu come groom's family arrived.."padmini..she feels pain..but without telling anything he leaves with padmini...

pandit starts chatting mantras..padmini makes madhu sit on the mandap..radha brings rishab who is playing with his teddy bear..
 "rishu what is this..stop playing.."she snatches teddy from his hand..
"my..my..my teddy...my teddy..give.."he tells in baby tone & starts crying..everyone present there looks madhu with pity..she feels like some one stabbing in her heart..malik & padmini looks away..
radha forcefully makes rk sit on the mandap..ritual starts..they exchanged  garlands..
"now stand up for pheras.."pandit.
"no...i want to sit.."rk.
"rishu..u r a good boy na.."tears filled in her eyes..he stands..they complete the 7 pheras..
"now tie magalsutru on her neck.."pandit..he took it & starts playing with it..
"rishu..tie it on her neck.."radha..he obeys..
"now fill sindoor on her maang.."pandit..he spread sindoor all over her maang..
"vivaah sampan hua..now take the blessings of others.."pandit..they took the blessings..
"hi..will u come to play with me.."rk asked madhu..
"rishu she is ur wife.."radha.
"wife..that means..?"rk.
"ha...ur girl..she is owned by u.."radha.
"ha..i understood..like my gudiya..u r my gudiya.."he smiles..tears filled in her eyes..he is seeing her like a doll..an expensive doll..

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Kundra Mansion




After grahpravesh madhu went to her room & cried her heart out..rk saw this..
"y r u crying gudiya..?"rk.
"nothing.."madhu.
"dont cry ok..good girls will not cry.."he told this & went to his bed..madhu slept on floor..

After sometimes


The clock strikes 12.00 am..rk slowly opened his eyes & get off from his bed..without making noise he stepped towards shelf..he opened it & took a phone from inside..he switched on it & makes a call..
"Hello.."a man's voice came from the other end..
"Hello..sultan things r getting complicated..my marriage over.."rk speaks in manly voice..
"what..?"sultan.
"yes..today morning..& that girl..she dont know anything about me..unknowingly i am hurting her..i dont want to cheat an innocent girl.."rk..
"Ok..i will come tomorrow...v will talk tomorrow.."sultan cuts the call..
Rk switched off the phone & kept back it in shelf..he went near madhu & says.."sorry..i am really sorry.."
madhu opened her eyes..rk looks her bewildered..





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Posted: 7 years ago
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   INDEX

Prologue - Updated Above

   Part 1


   Part 2 


   Part 3


   Part 4


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice episode.intriguing too.firstly I thought he is a mentally challenged one but he is acting.please update soon.Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Aishu congrats on the new story.
Amazing prologue.
I thought RK is a special child but he is acting but why?
Madhu heard him saying sorry,hope he tells her the truth.
Continue soon waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for the new story,
Superb prologue,
Madhu agreed to marry Rk for money,
Rishbala got married,
why Rk is acting like this,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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interesting prologue
rk is well but acting as a mentally person
why he do this?
did madhu is listening his conversation 
continue...
thanx for pm
Congrats once again 
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow Aishu..Again new one..
Congrates for new one...
Nice start..
Madhu married him for money problem..
Why RK is acting ?
What is his motive?
Waiting..
update soon.
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: magicalmirage

Nice episode.intriguing too.firstly I thought he is a mentally challenged one but he is acting.please update soon.Thanks for pm

Thank chechi..this is a supernatural one..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya2010

Aishu congrats on the new story.

Amazing prologue.
I thought RK is a special child but he is acting but why?
Madhu heard him saying sorry,hope he tells her the truth.
Continue soon waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear

Thanks ananya..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: harini_

Congrats for the new story,
Superb prologue,
Madhu agreed to marry Rk for money,
Rishbala got married,
why Rk is acting like this,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm

Thank you..will update soon
.