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Posted: 7 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: crazyparrot

It is so emotional😭

Aansu nahi rukh raha hein! 
Good oneπŸ‘
Keep writing! 


Sorry rulane ke liye...Par tissues hai na paas mey??
So happy u liked it...!!!TYSM...!!!!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: amlavs

Omg...

Am πŸ˜­πŸ˜­
Wat an emotional story this is...
Veryyy touchyyy...
Oh god y u did this to our ShraMan...
But it is purely amazing...
Donno wat else to say...
LavSriya 


Aaw...!!So sorry itna rulane ke liye...
Zyada emotional hua kya??
Glad u found it amazing...!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Anu yaar. ..I am standing at that divider  between having an applause in my mind and a cringe in my heart.

The writing is beautiful, the flow is smooth  and the emotions were portrayed with conviction. 

As much as I hate any death in Shraman's case,  it's a fact that death is certain.  It's life that depends on the possibility factor.

All that said, mera  sawal yeh hai, Anu ,tu ne Sumo aur uske baby ko kyun maara? 


Resh...πŸ€—
@bold true..!!
Resh saach batau toh pehle the plot was ke Sumo has died alone in a accident par uske baad dunno what came in my mind and I wrote this...
Moreover Only about Sumo's death was written once and only about baby's death was also written...So maine dono ideas ko merge kar diyaπŸ˜‰
So happy that you liked it...!!!😳

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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Hayeee kamini aurat tune sumo ko maar dala..upper se baby ko bhi πŸ˜­ ese rulata h koi. ...ye to mere os se bhi bura tha 
Haye yar kitna rulaya  tune meko upper se that song oh god that made it more worse😭😭😭 last part mene kese padha only i know it

But as usual likha to apne mashallah h!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ penned beautifully 

P.s:- reshma now you have one more person in the queue to blame and question...AB ISKO PUCH ISNE SUMO OR BABY KO KYU MARA???πŸ˜†πŸ˜­πŸ˜­

P.ss :- beta zyada padh k dimag kharab ho gaya or paper acha nahi gaya tu tune physics ka gussa ispe nikal diya????πŸ˜•
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: anukulgr8


Aaw...!!So sorry itna rulane ke liye...
Zyada emotional hua kya??
Glad u found it amazing...!!!

S absolutely i felt too much emotional while reading it..
As am a single mom...while reading it gave me lot of feels...
But it is beautifully written..
Plz do write more...
Luv.,.
LavSriya 
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Hayeee kamini aurat tune sumo ko maar dala..upper se baby ko bhi πŸ˜­ ese rulata h koi. ...ye to mere os se bhi bura tha 

Haye yar kitna rulaya  tune meko upper se that song oh god that made it more worse😭😭😭 last part mene kese padha only i know it

But as usual likha to apne mashallah h!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ penned beautifully 

P.s:- reshma now you have one more person in the queue to blame and question...AB ISKO PUCH ISNE SUMO OR BABY KO KYU MARA???πŸ˜†πŸ˜­πŸ˜­

P.ss :- beta zyada padh k dimag kharab ho gaya or paper acha nahi gaya tu tune physics ka gussa ispe nikal diya????πŸ˜•


Itna emotional tha??My god...Terese emotional bando ka kya haal hoga re??πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Thank you so so much dollu...!!!
And regarding the Que maine Answer kar diya hai in reply to reshma's post...Jaa padh le..
@bold 🀣🀣ghussa nahi re maine bade pyaar se likha...😈
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: amlavs

S absolutely i felt too much emotional while reading it..
As am a single mom...while reading it gave me lot of feels...
But it is beautifully written..
Plz do write more...
Luv.,.
LavSriya 


@bold Oh..yeah I got that...
Will write more for sure but y'all have to sit woth tissuesπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
So glad u liked it...πŸ€—
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Anu... 😲 😲
Just read the ending first and and WTH!!
Am not gonna read it now Anu baby...!!
Was going to write happy happy moments...No No No...cant handle it now!!
Will read it but not now!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Anu!😲
Kya bolun samaj mein nahi aatha...
But it was such a wonderful pieceπŸ‘
Mein dhukhi tho hui par aakhir dukh bhi zindagi ka ek hissa  hai na!
So never mind,i am happy in a way because I have read an amazing story!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Nik03

Anu... 😲 😲
Just read the ending first and and WTH!!
Am not gonna read it now Anu baby...!!
Was going to write happy happy moments...No No No...cant handle it now!!
Will read it but not now!!


Ending kaiko padha pehle??😲😲
So tu hai emotional baachaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Maine happy moments ko kho toh nahi diya na??Plz plz likh de pehle aur baad mey ye padh...No probs...
Par tera RES sabse pehla hai...Better UNRESS thereπŸ˜†πŸ˜†