Originally posted by: MohabbatGirl.x
Beautiful Piece Of Writing, Choti. βοΈ
Your words come alive as if they're weaving a world of their own.Loved Krishna and Balram's mischief.The way he was going check. check. check was so hilariously cute. ππThanx For PM.Keep Writing.
Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06
awesome os...βοΈβοΈβοΈ...Kanha gets punishment of not going to play outside from his maa for bringing bees at home...ππ...Balaram with his army decides to help him...π...Radha shares the plan with everyone...π...finally they becomes successful in saving Kanha...πππ...both brothers fooled their mothers...π€£...loved it...β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ...thank u 4 pm...π...
Enjoyed a lot Pro π
Balram rocks in this story. Brave boy.
Cutiepie Radha lob her (I'm always on girl's side π )π€
So cute and beautifully written with beautiful choice of words.
You're a yummy writer tnkooo π³
Originally posted by: LakshmanMila..1
So beautifully written Pro ... β€οΈ
I loved it... [:**] β€οΈDau - Kanhaiyaa ... βΊοΈ They are cho chweeet...π³
Originally posted by: FlauntPessimism
Thanks for the PM dear, after so many days I read such a cute OS, we generally have Kauravas and Pandavas or Krishna and Arjun/Draupadi, even if it is for Krishna's family it is between Krishna and Rukmini or Krishna and Subhadra, something between Krishna and Balram is so refreshing π π π
Coming to the OS, Balram ji wants Krishna to be punished, but still doesn't want him to get the punishment, such a cute sibling rivalry and love, and what an intelligent plan the kids made Adrishyasur like really but yes they were all the friends of Krishna ji so dosti to influence to hona hi tha, and then Krishna getting into Vishnu mode and applying filters into the database and various spreadsheets on whether someone with this name appears π π , I think He should have telepathically connected with Brahma ji to check if He had created someone like that, or else connected Shivji to check if He had given a boon to some such Asur or not (afterall He is the one who gives boon to all the Asurs and Rakshas)
But mothers got into their trap, that was sad, in so many years they must have been immune to all the excuses
Awesome OS, please keep me updated whenever you write anything
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