Commitment~~SS{Part 8_Pg.35}05-08-17 NO PM - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

Beautiful and cute one...
Shravan is always very mature, leaving the side seat for sumo...
Shravan knew sumo but sumo didn't know him ๐Ÿ˜‰
Chemistry lab mai perfume banaya, Main toh apne college time mai chemistry lab mai aisa kuch nahi kiya tha
Sumo started thinking about Shravan ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Anjali ka band baza rahe hai sab ๐Ÿ˜‰
Shravan and sumo both got punishment ๐Ÿ˜ƒ for getting late...
They became friends, that's nice...
Shravan helping sumo out in electronics project ๐Ÿ˜Š
Both songs are beautiful and when sung by ShraMan it is more beautiful...
Like Shravan the way he let sumo understand their situation and like they commited to each other...
Beautiful one and thanks for pm


Thanks Arpi...
Really think that dono ko eksaath punishment mila??๐Ÿ˜‰
Glad u liked it...
Thanks for commenting...๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Res ๐Ÿ˜› jaldi de 

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UNRESS 

oh god you did this finally...
Oh yes I did it...Juz in 45 mins๐Ÿ˜†
Mene bola tha you'll do this best and it was the cutest I ever read ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Thanks bolne ke liye..๐Ÿ˜†
And the first os that I read not imagining shraman๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† #iykwim
๐Ÿ˜ณโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธI know what u mean๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Seriously THE TWO were sooo cutest
THE TWO are cutest...๐Ÿ˜ณ
The cutest one seriously 
And tell me did this really happen...if yes you got the cutest one girl!
YESโ˜บ๏ธ
The bus scene was just...
Its just...
The soothing dialogues and the way he convinced wooowww adorable peice
Isn;t...Exceptional piece of mine๐Ÿ˜ณ
You seriously made me think about having one HIM too๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
U should have๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ
And how can I forget those songsโค๏ธ
This was seriously loveee
U killed it PCMB๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘


Thanks a ton meri judge...Teri vahaj se prerit hoke likha...Luv ya mah soulsis..!!!โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
hey anu di 
apke bhi exams aane waale hai aur mere bhi toh ๐Ÿค—
pehle se hi  "ALL THE BEST"๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
can't be active from monday๐Ÿ˜ญ
but after that phirse no more mounvrat๐Ÿ˜‰
cming to ur update di cllg life is 
just amazing jab shravu jaise koi cute mil jaye toh bus๐Ÿ˜ณ
as a student i am damn scared with physics lab๐Ÿ˜†
sacchi me yeh toh fairytale hai  jo reallife me true ho jayeโ˜บ๏ธ
sumo's song was soulful haan๐Ÿ˜Š
hua hai aaj pehli baar se toh shravu stole not just sumo ka heart but mera bhi
kyunki it's my favvv song ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
there "commitement" and rules kya batau mai tohโญ๏ธ
loved ther possesiveness towards eachother๐Ÿ˜‰
cutest ever update di still can't get over from it๐Ÿ‘
loads of love ๐Ÿค—
~princess~



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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Good job anu
Its the most cutest is i have ever read yaar
I have never this kind of shraman
Lovely ๐Ÿ‘
Love the end most ..comitted hoh kar bhi committed nahi
So wise shravan

And all the best for your exam ! Do well
And return with a bang

Luv tina
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
amazing
young love
so cute
loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
cute one...commitment for life 
loved it anuโค๏ธ
all the best for your exam kiddo..will miss you here but pahale padhai ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27
Ressi res!
Dekh lo res kardea...ab unres bhi karti hon!๐Ÿ˜›


Blackmailer kahen ki๐Ÿ˜•
***
Unres


Shonaa!!!...Meri Blackmailer...๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
Dekho mein agae...Finally! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Hmm..tu yeh ap ki looong vacation hain madam...FB n IF dono sath sath handle karna..han..yeh mjhy blackmail karnay behti thi...bachoo koi nhi mera waqt bhi aay ga...๐Ÿ˜ˆ

Aur yeh kya...If am not wrong tu abhi kuch time phley tum bhi tu camping par gae thi na..rite??๐Ÿ˜ƒ...Kahein yeh OS wahein ka haal hawal tu nhi..mtlb...apki hi kahani par Shraman ki zubani...han..han...bolo...*smirking* 

Chalo bas bhai...blushing ko hault par lao zara..Strawberry banay ki zarorat nhi hai๐Ÿ˜†

Okay...now finally coming to ur upii...

Woah Shona!!...Absolutely lovely concept..Colge romance han๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Really it was hell brilliantly penned!โญ๏ธ

I mean the way you penned their bonding...their chemistry...their friendship...their eye locks...their moments...specially Suman's predicament...arey baba sab kuch...everything was just Wonderful!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...I soo loved it!โค๏ธ

Dono ny kya kismat pae..always got bumped into eachother..chahay woh project ho yeh roaming...๐Ÿ˜†

Perfume practicals part was really cute..thy both exchanged their perfumes...Wowโค๏ธ

Ohh..seriously even i dont like tea too...I only prefer green tea,coffee or Kashmiri chai...normal chai tu yukkie lagti hai mjhy๐Ÿ˜•

Bechari Anjali...sabney ussy personal massager hi bana lea ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† 

Awi awi awi...i do the sammmeee...han sachi๐Ÿ˜ƒ...๐Ÿ˜†
Mery bag mein kuch aur ho na ho..ek cadbury zaror hoti hai..just in case during lecture agar neendh ka bukhar charna shuru ho tu medicine tyar ho ussy supress karnay k lea๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...Mera todka itna famous hai..mjhy aj pata chala๐Ÿคช
Oye..btw tht part was absolutely lovely..and the way he offered her...and asked her if thy are friends or not..was...โค๏ธ

Blushing blushing Suman...such a cutie pie..no๐Ÿ˜ณ

The gaming banter was fun...and their physics project par...terrific!โญ๏ธ
The way he taught her and after learning from him the way she got all excited and the way he was admiring her...was..Beautiful!โค๏ธ

As i said before...Suman's predicaments every time...were penned really really brilliantly!..so expressive!๐Ÿ‘

Ooo...My favorite song......Teri Dewani...โค๏ธ...apt choice yar and the way thy both were staring at each other ...their moment...tht made this part more and more beautiful!โค๏ธ
His song was also lovely..thy both intentionally sang thoz songs...dedicated to eachother...Wowโค๏ธ

You knw wht...for me..Physics sucks!!!๐Ÿคข...never was a fan of physics..aur jab bhi lab jaty thay..adha time practical aur baki time tafree karty thy๐Ÿ˜›...obviously practical khatam karnay k baad...usually apparatus say hi khaltay thay๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†

Ohhh...their bus convo...the best part!!!โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
The way thy promised eachother to be commited...never to forget eachother..their confusions..their solutions..everything was Tremendously penned!..really!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
I so loved the end part...was the jaan of this OS!๐Ÿ˜ณ

He knew she liked him and was acting all nonchalant..and when he confessed Suman was all red like a tomato...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜†
His reasoning was justified!
Their selfie..their intertwined hands..their heads on eachothers shoulder...ahh..every part was soo beautiful!โค๏ธ

Finally...Committed!โญ๏ธ...โค๏ธ...๐Ÿ˜†

Ohh...Shona..i soo loved it!..Really was a wonderful OS!โญ๏ธ
Love you soo much Shona๐Ÿค—


Tadaa!!๐Ÿฅณ
hogaya!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Chal ab meray post par bahad furan aur unres kar..warna๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก


Love
Nainaโค๏ธ
Edited by Sunain - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Unressed!
Finally!

Ab tu mery post par unres kar do...dying for ur reviews๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Shhoonaa!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Awww cute lovelyyy dear


All the best...See u back soon!!


Love,
Spandana
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
This story connects with every teenager .. College Ki love story... Beautiful yaar