Ariya SS::Tu Meri Adhuri Pyas..(Completed) - Page 2

awsm concept. haayee mera bala bhi hai means iqbal khan, riya or jeet k scene superb thy, chalo ye thek hai ending happy nai hogi kabi kabi kuch hatt k bhi hona chahiye, thanxx for the p m conti soonish

awesome
loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon

Awesome concept n amazing update...but aesa kyun likha ke ending sad wali hogi??

Nice update
continue soon.
thanks for pm..

Interesting start...
Luvd it!!
Abhijeet entry was a blast...
Is abhi in love with Ri??
Can't wait to read next update!!
Continue soon
Thnx for pm

Amazing
Continue soon

Amazing i love stories like this with not happy ending kinda

superb start..

interesting concept

Sad ending. ...

Ohhh nooo...

Ariya or abhijeet. ...kiska pyaar pura hoga or kiska adhura. ..


Soch kar hi bura lag raha he...

Lekin fir bhi first part Owesem. ... .