Ariya SS::Tu Meri Adhuri Pyas..(Completed)

Posted: 7 years ago


Characters:-

ACP Arjun suryakant rawte:-etf officer,2nd in command of etf,a rude,arrogant ruthless but intelligent n brave officer..his life's only aim to find n take revenge from sikandar as sikandar has killed his first love,his wife Roshni cruely..he has feelings for Riya..he loves her n knows she too loves him..but he afraid to loose her..

ACP sameer rathod:-etf chief,a best officer of etf..he is best friend of Arjun..but don't believe Arjun that sikandar exist n this has created differences between him n Arjun..Roshni was his best friend..though he behaves rude to Arjun but still cares for him..

Shreekant sen:-technical expert of etf..best friend of Riya..

Chotu:-commodo of etf..consider Shree n Riya his best friends..

Riya mukherji:-research specialist of etf..she is a chirpy,cute girl..she is karate expert n want to become a good police officer..she loves Arjun very much but had not confesses him yet..

ACP Abhijeet Roy:-a good,intelligent, n handsome police officer,soon he is going to join etf team..he is best friend of Riya since childhood n he loves Riya very much..


Roshni rawte:-arjun's dead wife..curely murdered by sikandar n was best friend of Sam..


Prologue:-

Har baar apna pyar aapko mile aisa toh zindagi me nahi hota..kabhi kabhi woh pyar adhura reh jata he..ek adhuri si pyas bana kar..

Someone who loves but don't say it just because he want to keep safe his love..just because he don't want to loose her..

Someone who sacrifice her love so that he don't have any difficulty on path of His revenge..his reason of life..

Someone who loves a person unconditionally though he knows his love is not actually his..

Koi apne pyar ko khatro se dur rakhne ke liye apne pyar ko hi khud se dur kar deta he..

Toh koi apne pyar ke raste me rukawat na bane issiliye kisi aur ko apna bana leta he..

Story of unconditional love of Arjun,Riya n abhijeet..

The story which may won't have a happy ending..

Ek kahani Jo adhuri hogi..

(Don't know aap logo ko concept accha lagega ya nahi..but its sure this story may won't have happy ending..)

Should I continue with this story..??



Edited by ariyabestfan - 6 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago


Part 1:-

Riya open her eyes.. The same room which she is looking since last six months good morning her..

She sigh..

What she wanted to do is to run away from this room since last six months..

She is now very irritated seeing that hospital room..but its good luck finally the day of her resue had come..

Doctor come inside room..

Doctor:-good morning Riya..

He started checking her..after that..

Doctor:-u r absolutely fine..u r blood reports are also normal..

Riya:-u mean to say ke muze discharge de rahe ho aap..?

Doctor:-yes of course..Aur aapki team bhi aapka intzaar kar rahi he..

Same time team including Arjun come inside..

Riya:-uff thank god..finally..

All smiles seeing her reaction on her discharge..

Riya get discharged from hospital..

After some days rest she then joins etf again..

After some more days of she joined etf..

Etf me baki sab waise hi he..bas ab sab yahi ki four boys (choree samjun)Riya ki care lene lag gaye he..

Riya ki shooting skills ab aur bhi behatar ho gayi he..

One day..

Riya's home..

Riya is taking breakfast with her parents..

Riya's mom:-Riya beta..hame tumse kuch baat karni he..

Riya:-bolo na mom..

Riya's mom:-beta itne acche acche rishte aa rahe he tumhare liye..hame lagta he tumhe ab shadi ke bare me sochna chahiye..

Riya:-oh ho..mom..aap fir suru hui..meine kaha na..muze abhi shadi nahi karni..meri samaz nahi aata aapkoeri shadi ki itni jaldi kya he..

Riya's dad:-Riya ..bacche ham log tumhe force nahi karna chahte..but the fact is ke bas mein Marne se pehale tumhari shadi dekhna chahta hu..

Riya:-dad..plz..aise baate kyo kar rahe he aap..??

Riya's dad:-sach hi toh he beta..isse pehale 2 baar muze heart attack aa chuka he..ek baar tumhe goli lagne ki news se..aur dusaro baar tab jab tumne woh exora virus kha liya tha..

Riya(emotionally):-dad..woh toh issiliye kyo ki aap meri bahot jyada fikar karte he..plz..meri chinta mat kijiye..

Riya's dad:-kaise na Kare beta..tum hamari ek lauti beti ho..kya pata kal.ko agar muze firse heart attack hua aur mein Bach na paya toh..

Riya:-dad..

Riya's dad:-issiliye ham tumhari shadi karana chahte he bas..

Riya don't know what to say..she remain silent..

She don't know how to tell her parents that yes..she also wanted to get married..but the person whom she wanted to get married is already married..her Arjun sir..

She left for office..

Etf office:-

Conference room:-

Sam jun are in their respective cabins..

Choree are doing chit chat..n Riya is sitting with tensed expression..

Shree:-ri..hua kya he..?aise kyo baithi he..?

Riya:-yaar tum logo ko pata nahi he ke kya kya ho raha he..

Chotu:-ab tu batayegi nahi toh kaise pata chalega ri..

Riya:-mere mom dad chahte he mein shadi kar lu..

Shree:-gr8 toh kar Lena..finally etf me single rehane ka shrap tut jayega..

Riya(glaring):-shree I m serious..

Shree:-OK baba..toh problem kya he..kar le na shadi..

Riya:-tum logo ko pata he na ke mein..

She stop abruptly..

Choree look each other..

Shree:-hame pata he ri ke tu Arjun sir se pyar karti he..par unke dil me kya he..?

Riya remain silent..

Chotu:-ri aise toh life nahi kat sakhti..

Shree:-yes ri..chotu is right..

Riya don't said anything.. Just lost in her thoughts..

After 2-3 days..

All are in conference room..

Chotu (mutter to shree n Riya):-guys..pata he aaj koi new appointment hone wali he..

Riya(mutter):-kyon..?

Shree(mutter):-kash koi ladki ho..toh mere liye koi chance hoga..

Riya shook her head in disbelief..

Chotu(mutter):-ladki nahi he ye fix he..koi acp he joining as 3 rd in command..

Riya:(mutter)-are par naam kya he..?

Chotu(mutter):-naam nahi pata sirf pata he ke ek case me liye hame join karne wala he..

Same time one handsome man (imagine Iqbal khan here..oh I just love him)..open the door of conference room n entered..

All gaze turn to him..

Mostly Riya is so shocked.. Yet happy..

N without thinking anything..she run to him..n hug him..

Riya:-jeet..

Man:-Ritz..

He too hug back her..

Rest of the etf team looking the scene shocked..

Arjun is shocked yet sad seeing this..

Both broke hug..

Riya:-tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..?

He smrik..n walked to Sam..

Man:-acp abhijeet banerji reporting sir..

Sam(shaking hand with abhi):-welcome acp abhijeet..

Sam then turn to whole team..

Sam:-guys..ye he acp abhijeet banerji..he is joining us as 3rd in command of our team..ye abhijeet ye he..

(Saying this Sam introduce abhi with Arjun,shree,chotu ..n then about to introduce him to Riya)

Abhi:-its OK..inhe(means Riya) introduce karane ki zarurat nahi..isse muzse acche se koi nahi jaan sakhta..my bestest friend he na..

Riya smiles..

Abhi:-waise sameer sir..

Sam(cutting him in mid):-can call me sameer..only..

Abhi:-sure sameer..waise mein toh as temporary position pe aaya hu..kuch 2-3 cases me etf ki help karne..

Sam:-yes..n u r welcome here..

Abhi:-thanks..

Abhi then turn to Riya..

Abhi:-toh madam exora 2 virus ki teast kaise thi..?bahot tasty tha kya Jo pura ka pura kha liya ..

Riya giggle n hug him..

Abhi push her little away..

Abhi:-nahi tu muzse baat mat kar..

Riya:-kamal he naraz toh muze hona chahiye..tum etf join kar rahe ho muze bataya bhi nahi..

Abhi:-meri narazgi jyada badi he..exora 2 virus khane ja rahi hu ye bataya tha tune muze..?

Riya:-muze bhi kaha pata tha ..situation hi aise thi..

Abhi:-dimag kharab he tera..kuch ho jata toh..

Riya:-par kuch hua toh nahi na..

Abhi:-are par kuch hota toh..mein kuwara hi mar jata..

Riya glare him fakely..n shook her head in disbelief..

Riya:-dekho naraz muze hona chahiye..ek toh tum pure 1 n half year se kisi mission pe gaye the..gayab the..ek call bhi nahi kiya muze..aur ab mil rahe ho toh muzpe hi gussa kar rahe ho..?

Abhi(pulling her cheek):-oh..meri cutipie naraz he ke meine usse phone nahi kiya..itna miss kiya muze..?

Riya glare him..

Abhi:-are mission pe tha..kisi ko call nahi kar sakhta tha..warna kuch bhi gadbad ho sakhti thi..2 din pehale hi mission complete kiya..aur yaha joining ki khabar mili..fir socha ke gharwalo se aur tuzse milu..Kolkata gaya..mom dad se toh mil liya..par pata chala Teri posting Kolkata se Mumbai ho gayi he..woh bhi etf me..aur mom ne tere uss exora 2 ke stunt (Riya rolled her eyes) ke bare me bhi bataya..aur ye bataya ke tum thik ho..toh socha ke tumhe sidhe office me hi big suprize du..

Riya don't said anything..

Abhi:-ab bas bhi kar tera zoota gussa..

Riya:-alright..

Abhi:-ye hui na baat.

Riya:-isaka matlab he ke aap ab mere senior he..aapko toh sir bulana padega abhijee(before she could complete he put hand on her lips)

Abhi:-never ever .tumhare liye mein "jeet" hu..aur wahi rahuga..

Riya smiles..

Abhi:-badi bhul lagi he..chal canteen

Saying this abhi almost drag Riya with him..

Rest of 4 boys looking them lost..


In canteen..

Riya:-bukkad..Zara dheere se khao..itni kya jaldi he..?

Abhi:-OK baba..

Riya:-tumhara mission kaisa raha..?

Abhi:-mast..ussi se related 2-3 cases he Jo etf ko mili he..aur meine woh mission handle kiya tha issiliye muze etf ko assist karna he unn cases me..

Riya:-gr8..

Abhi:-ghar pe sab kaise he..?

Riya:-kuch nahi yaar..mom dad bas ek hi baat ke piche pade he..meri shadi..

Abhi:-toh kar Lena shadi..mein toh kabse tayar hu shadi ke liye..

Riya:-stop it jeet..

Abhi:-are officially mein tumko 10 baar propose kar chuka hu..aur unofficially toh ginati hi nahi..ab toh ha bol de.

Riya:-jeet plz..

Abhi(looking into her eyes):-tumhe kisi se pyar ho gaya he kya..?

Riya:-ham iss bare me baad me baat karege..chalo jaldi ..warna rathod sir gussa honge..

Abhi:-alright..

Both walked to conference room..
Posted: 7 years ago
awesome update ..
like it..
waiting for next..
updated soon
Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update di...
So the jealousy track is soon gonna come
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
😊
Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome start
I love the way you describe prologue
Plz cont soon
Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Interesting concept
Like to read more..
Superbly written
Thanks for PM
Continue soon 
Posted: 7 years ago
Superb start
Continue soon 
But sad ending ðŸ˜”
Please make it a happy ending sad stories parh kar mein bohat depress ho jati hun😔😭
Posted: 7 years ago
Nice start dear Sonu
Beautiful part
Hmmm jeet and Riya ki friendship is really sweet
Jeet really knows Riya well
Let's see what changes jeet will make
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
Posted: 7 years ago
amazing update 
loved it
adhuri kahaani ,sad concep par yeah life bhi to aisi hi hoti hai.na ek adhuri kahani jaisi
abhiya bonding so nice
sabka dil tutega sabka dil royega
feeling sad but eager to know story
update soon
thanks for pm

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