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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
            Fight between father daughter going to be intresting 😉
Keep writing
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi dear..
Again a nice update..
I wish marya gives Ram a tough time...lol..and then Ram wins over myra and priya..:)

ya we know he is guilty,he love his kids and priya so much but ram is Ram, he has his own tempers and attitude even now it seems...he talk of court orders and wanted to hv them by anymeans..insensitively he said but priya tackled it by giving her challenge or game of winning myra's heart..

Priya's and myra's hurt is inevitable..they are right in their own stands but as priya said,already 7yrs of punishment Ram had, being away from them and he regrets for his mistakes too, so as peehu and priya wish,ram needs to be given that second chance...

So anyway this game of winning will bring Raya closer ultimately and we know the love they hv for each other is intact still and from their talking in heart,we know ram loves priya so much,want them back and priya understands ram and know this too..and she wasnt even anger and eventually she will forgive him..

But i wish priya too show some anger or dissapointment in not trusting her in khush case...


Thanks for the pm...
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Part 22

Marya- bolo na maa..

Priya- I respect him, when you say that words to him, he is so much hurt Marya and I feel that how much he is pain when you say those words..

Marya- I said sorry to him for you only maa..

Priya- I feel sad that's why you say sorry to him..

Marya- Haan maa.

Priya- lekin Marya..

Marya- sorry maa but I can't help it..

Priya in heart- one fine day you feel sorry for him Marya and same time you love him also..

Pee- Tom boy..

Marya- Petu chupkar aur chal mere Saath..


They both came to hall were ram seat, he reading something..

Marya- Mr.kapoor do have only 2 mins..

Ram stop reading and look at her..

Marya- actually...

Priya also came there, she knows very well that, like father like daughter, she never say sorry to anyone, same like ram but for only Priya Marya agree to say sorry to ram..

Neha asked- Priya what happened here Marya again...

Priya- no.. no.. no.. see like father like daughter drama here..

Neha- means...

Priya- never say sorry to anyone..

Neha- ohh..

Marya- actually my maa feel bad, that's why I came here to say, I m sorry, with little attitude..

Ram not believe on her- aahhh...

Marya close her eyes- I am sorry, now don't think anything from me and went from there..

Ram again asked- she say sorry to me..

Priya- yes she say sorry to you, and she turn to move..

Ram- like mother like daughter..

Priya turn herself to him- hello she is just like you OK, how much efforts to handle her, you want believe OK..

Neha cut them midd- ab Tum dono start mat karna..

Priya- he started first..

Ram- ek minute you started first..


Sound echoing there ears, all are go there..

Marya- don't called me Tom boy, I will not live you peehu, give me my book..

Pee- Tom boy I will not give you book, you have to play with me..

Marya- Petu book de, I want read that book, give it to me..

Peehu show her thumb to her and run behind sofa..

Marya- a Petu book de other wise I throw your teddy from balcony and she pickup her teddy..

Pee- noo..

Marya hold teddy at out of balcony- give me my book..

Priya- Marya..

Pee- mom see my teddy in Marya's hand..

Marya- don't blackmailing by your tears to maa, other wise t I dropped your teddy..

Priya- Marya...

Marya- usse bolo mera book de..

Priya- peehu..

Pee- maa usse bolo mere Saath khele..

Priya- Marya..

Marya- book!

Priya- now stop you both Marya give her teddy and peehu give her book right now..

Peehu give her book with show her tongue to Marya..

Marya took her book in her hand and give her teddy to her with smile..

Priya- dono me se koi bhi argument, fight, thodi si bhi baat, ek dusre ki taraf dekh kar face making, inn me se koi Kuch bhi nahi karega, agar dono me se koi bhi awaz Dega inn sab baat ke liye toh I will be not talk with her for 2 days, got it..

Peehu & Marya only nodded, and Priya went from there..

In room peehu seat on bed with full face, Marya search her specs, ran came in room and asked..

Ram- princess peehu why are you so sad..

Peehu in sad tone- Marya is not plying with me...

Ram- why..

Pee- she want reading her book..

Ram- toh..

Pee- toh I wanted play with her..

Ram- now tell me, what she searching..

Pee- her specs for reading..

Ram- she can't read without specs..

Pee- not like that actually maa not allher without specs reading anything..

Ram- ek kam Kare..

Pee- Kya..

Ram- can we hide her specs..

Pee- noo... if she knows that she eat us...

Ram- Kuch nahi hoga Mai Hun na..

Pee- again she hurt you by her words..

Ram- I don't care you know what your maa is like same now a days..

Pee- seriously...

Ram- Haan and I know how to mollify them..

Pee- OK then we hide it..

Ram- but where it is..

Peehu show him specs, put on table, and Marya search in bag..

Ram hide that in drawer..

Marya search in bag, and table too but didn't find, she wanted call Priya but she reminds priya's words, and she declined to call Priya and started reading book..

On dinner time, everybody came to dinning table..

Amar asked- Marya nahi aayi..

Pee- book read kar Rahi hai..

Priya- Mai bulakar laati Hun..

Khush- angel, Mai jaata Hun..

Priya- OK jaldi aa..


Khush reached room, Marya still reading the book..

Khush- hi buddy you not starving yet..

Marya- Yaa starving but..

Khush- Kya chalo jaldi..

Marya- aap bhi maa jaise ho..

Khush- ohh Yaa, wo Kya hai na I m your big bro na..

Marya- aap lagte smart ho phir aapne music kiu chuna..

Khush- oye you are 6 but asking me questions like you 60...

Marya- seriously bro..

Khush- yes dude..

They reached on dinning table..

Priya- pari how much you reading..

Marya- that was quite interesting book, dadu you read India's Constitution...

Amar & laxman look at her..

Marya- Mai aapko dadu bula Sakti Hun na..

Amar- Haan bula Sakti ho lekin..

Marya- Kya..

Lax- aapki aankhon ko Kya hua..

Priya go near her took Marya's chain up- without specs, Marya..

Marya- I didn't find, search every corner of room, bags too..

Priya- OK finished your dinner, don't touch your book after dinner..

Marya- Haan.

Krish- Priya ye sab..

Priya- wo maa iss sports day she was participate in football team and she was goal keeper, that time she was go to save goal and football hit on her face, hopefully Kuch jaada nahi hua lekin doc ne without specs reading Karne se manna kiya hai, if she did then her eyes getting red..

Pee- aur aur football ko goal Karne wali Mai thi..

Marya little cough and she drink the water- Neha maasi aap baata Rahe the siddhi aur Rahul bhi hai kaha par hai..

Neha- siddhi summer camp aur Rahul Amritsar..

Marya- hmm..

Ram- Marya..

Marya- boliye Mr.kapoor..

Ram- sorry..

Marya- I know you hide my specs, and you don't know what affect on me, same like you did with maa, maa bas hua and food is delicious, who make..

Krish- you like it..

Marya- very much Dadi..

Som- then appreciate me..

Marya- Chachi aapko yaha ki sab se best dish aati hai..

Som- Kya chahiye bas aap bolo..

Marya- maa's favorite gajar ka halwa..

Neha- u like it..

Marya- no Petu like it agar Petu ko koi president kar de na toh wo iss dish ko international dish declare kar de..

Priya- don't start fighting again..

Marya- maa Petu also involved with Mr.kapoor..

Priya- peehu..

Pee- sorry maa..

Priya- tumhe pata tha kaha par hai, toh waha se leti na..

Marya- I don't know where it is maa..

Priya stare to ram..

Ram look Priya and say- sorry, Baad me deta Hun..

Amar- ram Tum bhi peehu ke Saath bacche bann gaye..

Ram- Papa peehu wanted play with Marya, that's why I did, no any other intention..

Marya- let it be Mr.kapoor, next time don't touch my any thing! Got it..

Ram- OK Ms.sharma..

Priya in mind- yaha par toh world war  chalu hone jaa raha hai, Priya tujhe hi Kuch karna hoga, Marya samjhne se rahi, ram se baat karke dekh, nahi toh tujhe 2 nahi 3 bacche handle Karne honge, sab se pehle you have to strong for talking with ram, tu bhi Kuch kumi nahi hai..


In kitchen..

Neha- Priya itne Saal tu nahi thi, toh tujhe bahot miss kiya hai, tujhe Kya tu nikal gayi, mujhe pata hai how much handle myself, phir somya aayi, phir bhi I miss you..

Priya only smile..

Neha- waha par tune sab akele kaise kiya..

Priya- akele kaha thi sab the mere Saath I mean waha par ek maid rakhi thi, she do all work, she leave after 8 then in home I'm alone, nuts aur tere saare post padhti thi, reply Karne ka mann karta tha lekin phir Mai hi khud ko rok deti..

Neha- maa Papa really miss you so much, they was went Rajat for your new address, but was told them that you leave that job..

Priya- that was fake news, bas ek resignation letter Rajat ko Diya tha, mujhe koi puchne aaye toh wo letter dikhane kaha tha, usske Baad bank account ke saare paise Rajat ke account transfer kiye usske Baad new account open kiya phir Rajat wahi amount phir mere account transfer kiya.. ek baat baatau..

Neha- Haan bolo..

Priya- don't share with anyone..

Neha- OK..

Priya- 7th month in pregnancy, that time I wanted eat your..

Neha- what you wanted..

Priya- sandwiches by ur hands..

Neha- Priya sandwich ye bhi koi chiz hui khaane ki..

Priya- arrye hota hai aisa..

Neha- tab Kya kiya..

Priya- raat ke 2:30am, you want believe, I woke up and sab ready kiya and that time I can't saw my foots, that time I was so much scared too, but thanks to God, Kuch galat nahi hua, labor pain ke time I was in office, toh office staff send me to hospital..

Neha- you alone there Priya..

Priya- so what, most important, thanks to Rajat, he gave me permission to take them both in office with me..

Neha- Tumhe pata bhi how much I missing u..

Priya- sorry..

Neha- waise Marya kaha par hai..

Priya- landed on couch, aankho me dropped daal ke aayi Hun, thodi der Baad massage karna hoga..

Neha- Marya tumse bahot jaada pyar Karti hai..

Priya- best friend after you..

Neha- betiyan best friend hi Hoti hai maa ki..

Priya- bas ek hi tension hai, how to handle her she is so much hate ram and she misunderstood too..

Neha- how...

Priya- actually she was read my old diary..

Neha- diary toh tere paas rehti hai humesha..

Priya- Haan but ek diary Jo mere drawer me thi, wo ussne meri absence me padhi, aur ye sab iss wajah se hua hai, aur inn sab me Marya the protective Tom boy bahar aaya hai, iss wajah se thoda tension hai, ram was wrong that time, mujhe ye aaj tak nahi pata chala hai ram ne aisa socha bhi kaise ke Mai Khush aur aapne bacchon me difference.. aisa soch bhi nahi Sakti Mai..

Neha- ek bolu tujhe Priya, tu na tere aur ram ke bich ki baat ek dusre ke samne baithkar solve karo, Marya ko kaise vishwaas dilana hai, ye Tumhe aur ram ko pata chalega..

Priya- wo toh karna hi hoga mujhe, for marya, usski Umar ko samne rakhte Huey, I have to talk with ram..

Neha- all the best for that..

Priya- bacche na Sahi pic toh dikha..

Neha- tu bhi na, and she show the pic to her..


In room, Marya landed on couch, closing eyes talking with peehu..

Marya- dude results are came out and you too again in science..

Pee- how much Mark's you got in..

Marya- only 5 marks..

Pee- you fail Marya..

Marya- no duffer I got 90 only n u 95..

Pee- what about other..

Marya- it's good dude, by the way you listen your other singer star song a new song..

Pee- Justin Bieber, tumse pehle..

Marya- Khush bro told me that here in Mumbai so much places are available, we should visit there, what say..

Pee- OK, I told to Papa he will took both of us..

Marya- I will not came you go with your dad I m go myself..

Pee- duffer you are new here..

Marya- so what I have Goole map..

Pee- stupid uss map se aur books se bahar nikal ke dekh sab de best duniya hai..

Marya- your so called duniya don't teach us how to make money and not give us degree..

Pee- ooffoo tu na Tom boy ki Tom boy rahegi..

Priya enter- Kya chal raha hai..

Neha- hi cutie pie..

Marya- hi Masi..

Priya seat on couch and started massage to Marya..

Pee- not good Marya you hate the words na..

Marya- duffer I like Neha Masi na..

Pee- but maa loves you na, when she called you like these you told her don't call me and now..

Marya- movies jaada dekha mat kar..

Priya- bahot hua Tum dono ka peehu chalo sleeping time..

Pee- good night Tom boy..

Marya- good night Petu, maa bas hua, I want to sleep..

Priya- OK...

Peehu & Marya sleep, Priya wait for ram, he came after long time, and saw his three sleeping beauties peaceful and go near them, and he kiss peehu first then kiss to Marya's forehead but priya's sleep break by his hand touch by her hand..

Ram- sorry wo Mai Marya ko kiss..

Priya- it's OK..

Ram- OK, good night.

Priya- we need to talked ram for Marya..

Ram- OK, wait for me at balcony..

Priya- ya sure, and he went for change..


Ram came after change, Priya waiting there with coffee mug on table, ram came there pickup the mug and sip it and he make a faces..

Ram- 7 saalon me meri taste bhi bhul gayi..

Priya- black coffee meri thi, aapko chahiye thi toh baata sakte the..

Ram give a coffee mug to her- nahi chahiye thank you..

Priya- OK..

Ram- Kya baat karni hai..

Priya- Marya ko Kya pasand hai Kya nahi ye baatana chahti Hun..

Ram- I don't want any advice from you Ms.sharma, she is my daughter, I will understand her very soon, thank you for your concern but I don't want..

Priya- OK then, you don't want any advice about her, agar galti se bhi aap mere paas mat aana ye puchne ke liye, what should I do now, aapki Beti hai handle her, by ur own and she went for sleep..

Ram in mind- I don't want any help from you Priya I know how to handle her..


Continue soon:

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Brother & sister talked...

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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful update..
Waiting for next part.
Thanks for pm.


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Posted: 7 years ago
Ram has to do lots of hard work to win over his other daughter Mayra who is do angry on him for giving the pain to her mother. 
A heart to heart talk between two friends made them remember old days. Neha too want the happiness in Priya life again but seems her husband will take time to solve their issue.
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice update...
priya is helping but ram being arrogant didnt take advice...
hope Myra ll teach him...
thanks for update...
contd soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb n lovely part but show Raya ka past na i mean romance yaa woh i missed in ur ff n pls update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome
going on pretty well... pls continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice update.
let myra give tough time to Ram for his arrogance.
Beautiful going...
eagerly awaiting for next part...
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
As usual nice update... Tom boy Mayra is too adamant .Ram has to do lots of hard work
waiting for next update..thnx for d pm..