~THE UNDOING~(MG) (UPDATING & Note-Pg 32) - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
#41
Lovely FF dear
Loved it!!
Lovely Banner and individual chapters banner too were fab
The storyline increased my curiosity with its crafty touch of thrill by arousing great interest dear
Geet was wild with her thoughts that confined into her reticent beautiful demeanor
She loved being into her small room and with thyself with a mix of secret life of introvert!! Cherry on top with her nerd aloofness embracing solitude
She needed to relocate herself into a new place vowing to his dad's new job
The place had a touch of prominent heritage with the old fashioned buildings and cultural landscape encompassing of myths and stories with follow up from Angels to witches
Geet felt a hard blow that she landed up on floor and with her gesture back she found none around her
She found her room pleasant with her demeanor with colors of tomboyish touch 
The sign which caught up her eye was intriguing her curiosity that she couldn't close-up her eyes to get peaceful sleep
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anu5 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42
Will be waiting for the next update
Do add me too ur pm list
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
nice update
geet dash with invisible object n fall on road
after settling in new home geet's mind goes towards sign in temple but she brush it off

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Posted: 7 years ago
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so whose presence did she felt
n why is she intrigued by the mysterious words 
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45
lovely update
geet felt she pushed by some one & so she fall down
at the entrance of her home she she felt breeze
she intrigued by some mysterious words of temple in her sleep
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
lovely update, well written! Thanks 4 da pm! Geet thinks abt the wt she heard! update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Part 1 was interesting... geet is in her thoughts...
Part 2 geet felt she bumped into someone...want to shift to new place
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
Someone dashed with geet !!!!! :O
Voot 0_0 
Hmm...  what's the mystery of those symbols :/.

I'm damn excited for it :D
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
geet felt some force pushed her n she fell down but there was noone seen... finally they settled in the new house.. now what's further to be unfolded by geet
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
wow nice updates..
interesting concept..
continue soon