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Okay so here goes...
I love that the story is in NY 😃
Some scenes where you have tried to capture the essence of it are very special to me.
The Brooklyn bridge scene, the chinatown noodles, love love love
mugging scene.. sad but true.. it does happen here
For the first few updates, I could not visualize Geet as DD since you said it was a continuation if the movie, I kept thinking Kareena.
I am glad that you have shown her as still missing what she percieves as love for Raj.
It is not easy for someone like her to give up her dreams and the only person she had was him.
Loved her friendship with both Ranbir and Ana.
It is not easy for me to write family scenes but you show them so effortlessly that I can visualize them.
I like the character for Maan so far.
Hardworking, loyal to his Daadima, professional and a protective brother.
The equation with Geet is about to change, I feel.
There is a lot of room for push and pull.
As others have complained about the lack of romance, I don't know what to say of it.
There is no tada moment yet for each one but they are becoming important to each other.
Maan is guiding her in his way and forcing her to live in the real world and though he is right, I did not like it.
Sometimes being innocent has its own charm and appeal that cannot be replaced.
I loved the peacock story❤️ and her love for Kanha.
Nice going Aish but I am not a patient waiter like the rest of your readers.
Update fast..
More NY scenes and more family scenes too.. farmaish humari hai..
Steel grey trousers and white shirt made me think of Frosty's Back to you 😃
I am crazy like that to notice such things 😆
update karo 😲
I love that the story is in NY 😃
Some scenes where you have tried to capture the essence of it are very special to me.
The Brooklyn bridge scene, the chinatown noodles, love love love
mugging scene.. sad but true.. it does happen here
For the first few updates, I could not visualize Geet as DD since you said it was a continuation if the movie, I kept thinking Kareena.
I am glad that you have shown her as still missing what she percieves as love for Raj.
It is not easy for someone like her to give up her dreams and the only person she had was him.
Loved her friendship with both Ranbir and Ana.
It is not easy for me to write family scenes but you show them so effortlessly that I can visualize them.
I like the character for Maan so far.
Hardworking, loyal to his Daadima, professional and a protective brother.
The equation with Geet is about to change, I feel.
There is a lot of room for push and pull.
As others have complained about the lack of romance, I don't know what to say of it.
There is no tada moment yet for each one but they are becoming important to each other.
Maan is guiding her in his way and forcing her to live in the real world and though he is right, I did not like it.
Sometimes being innocent has its own charm and appeal that cannot be replaced.
I loved the peacock story❤️ and her love for Kanha.
Nice going Aish but I am not a patient waiter like the rest of your readers.
Update fast..
More NY scenes and more family scenes too.. farmaish humari hai..
Steel grey trousers and white shirt made me think of Frosty's Back to you 😃
I am crazy like that to notice such things 😆
update karo 😲
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