Akdha TS: The Stupid Challenge Completed (30/11/2016) - Page 4

Fantabulous update
thanku for pm
continue soon

waiting for next...😃

wooow diii amazing amazing amazing with sooo hot start dii iam dying to read your next chappies.. great waiting for tommorr dieheartily loved to read your stories very much its your another hot story right haaye I have no words di how much iam happy plzzz keep writing..
and diii your banner is sooo hot to handle ufff only you can make such a hot banner I love your banner very much can't wait to read you next update plzzz update fast fast..
thanks for pm me diii love you sooo much...Edited by Naazrt - 7 years ago

ahhaa payal...another mature writing is waiting Fe me I guess...Ohhh its been a lot of days...love to read your writings...

and special mention ur bannerwas tremendously SEXY...I can't understand by name that what can b the story bt the moment I saw the banner I can easily know its gonna be undoubtedly HOT N SEXY to read...😛

mmuuaahhh love you...want to read more...please update tomorrow n PM me further ur writings...


and a request please write a one shot fr ur welcome to temptation 😊

Payal... It's difficult for me to review without quoting you dear.. but I'll try








Edited by lashy - 7 years ago

payu
first os than bi update and now this
good good carry on
no doubt I love your work
something so different from other stories
which we enjoy reading with out worry
title really suit this ts
interesting concept dear
and I am glad both husband and wife not boyfriend and girlfriend
both jodha and jalal are headstrong
just because of their ego they can't forget their stupid challenge
yes both deeply in love
both know each other too well
even after 5 years of marriage both craving for each other
I really like this in both of them
poor jodha she really trying hard to control her desire
of course how can she control
after all jalal is deliciously handsome na
in my payu language
I love the way you describe jalal
something so unique you said that we can't ignore
both jodha and jalal can't totally ignore each other
both keep an eye in each other movement
I guess jalal also trying very very hard to control himself
he just wanted to teach some lesson to his lady love
he cares for her when he notice sadness in her eye
how affectionately he put his hand on her hand
this single gesture telling us lot
how much she meant to him
this part is all about jodha POV now I am waiting for jalal POV
I don't know who going to won this challenge but in the end both won in their own sweet way
waiting eagerly for next part
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

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uff
stop counting likes payu
you read na rose post in harshu thread
plz now don't stop writing like before
we all love your work
plz continue this and post next part
than you see how many likes you get

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

uff
stop counting likes payu
you read na rose post in harshu thread
plz now don't stop writing like before
we all love your work
plz continue this and post next part
than you see how many likes you get

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I am not feeling bad but I am a little confused. Whether readers have stopped reading my stories only or they have left IF. From 80+likes to 30+ likes.. It does make a difference. Don't you think so??😉</font>

yes of course
I understand its easy say something
but you post yesterday only this ts so it take time na for everyone to read and comment
so many writers are posting their stories may be that's why
I thinking about positive side
may be everybody in vocation mood when they come back they definitely loves your work
than likes also increase sometime likes button also don't work on time na
I hope you understand what I am trying to say
I just wanted to cheer up my payu nothing much you know
love youEdited by binduprasad41 - 7 years ago

amazing chappi payu di
loved it
Jo challenged Jalal
& now regretting
🤣
update asap
😉