MehRya OS * In his arms * updated part 9, page 50 !!!! - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: christasr

pls contuine what is going happen next




Will be updatong tonight
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: ahuti_2069

Nice one loved it

Continue soon


Thanks dear

Glad u liked it

Will be postibg yhe next update tonight
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: christasr

pls contuine it is really very nice



Thanks dear

Really happy u liked it

Wil be posting it in gew minutes
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: rajvilover

update soon i can't wait more... plzzz




Sure dear will be updating in few minutes
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: angel_writer

what a writing dear..👏

really loved it...❤️
when i started reading it i thought that it will be going to the hot❤️one..but when i read the ending i was like what...
hey MehRya are married na..but how this happened
and i think may be they were married in wrong circumstances...but now both had fell for each other...and they are not expressing it to each other may be because they think that the other don't feel the same...and for shaurya i think its his guilt which is not allowing him to express his feelings to her...
really awesome one...actually when i read the second part i felt like why did it finish so soon...
will be waiting eagerly for the next part...
plzz dear cont. soon...
and plzz do let me know through PM...
will be waiting...
❤️❤️




Thanks dear

Yes dear

Althoygh he still haves the revenge in hus head ...sonewhere his heart slips off his vontrol .. And does what he really wants to

The upcoming part has the answers plus yhe cobtinjation
Will be updating in gew minytes

Ok
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Hello guys ! Heres the next part of this story ...hope you like it ... Please let me know how itis ... Thanks guys
Part 3

Sunrays were falling on his Face ... Which made him open in his eyes slowly ... He felt a silk cloth underneath his hands and a fruit scent hair onher neck slightly Face ... he realized his position after some seconds looking around him ... He was tightyly side hugging mehek... After remembering the last night... He took his Hand off her releasing her... And sat on the bed nervously clutching the bed sherts out of anger ... He was really mad ... St himself .. Still having flashes of lasts night lost of control by his side... And the way he woke up today...

He just wanted to get fresh and get out of that room , of that atmosphere ... He took his clothes and placed her tie on his side of the bed and got inside the bathroom... He stood there for some moments ... Undr the shower ... Under the warm water ... Couldnt help getting those flashes of last nihht
He thought " what i went to do and i had ended up doing , wanted to torture her more even with my proximity ... Torture her ... For that slap ... "

Out of anger. ... He banged his Hand on the wall... Out of rage... For doing what he was going to do...The warm water was falling on him... Calming his nerves... Falling on those well toned arms... That slit back ...

He finished his shower ... And got out of the washroom... With his shirt on but unbuttoned ...His eyes fell on the bed... Mehek had woke up... And was sitting on his side of the bed ... Touching the bed sheet ( of his side ) Lost in her thoughts... Sadness and deep pain overpowered her ... He could understand what thoughts...
She felt like he took her everything ... Her pride ...her Family... Her relations ...everthing away from her... And that person was no one else than her own husband ...

He looked at the tie at his bed ... Her other hand was on it. ... He took few steps towards the bed ... Buttoning up his shirt ... She felt his steps coming towards the bed ... But she didnt look at him... he stopped when he saw her Face clealy from a short distance ... It was Pale... Asif she had cried the whole night... Emotionless ... He continued Waking towards the bed ... Three buttonswere left...but he didnt button them up...he Walked till the tie...
She didnt spare him a glance... Hr eyes werelow... Not willing to seehim...
S. ( in angry tone ) meri tie ke upar se utho !
She had no reaction... She was lost in her pain...
S. Natak bandkaro apna ! Aur utho !
. His shout made her cone outofher thoughts... She looked at him and got up . ... Then she took her clothes and went to the washroom...

He was taken by her silence...he wore his tie... And took his coat ...and he left for therestaurant...
Mehek on the othr Hand ... Went to the dhaba cum motel ... Where now she worked the whole day... Mainly to forget about herpain... To keep her busy...
The whole day passed ... With time to time rainfalls ... At night... When he was driving ... His phone stsrted ringing...it wss his moms phone He stopped the car in a corner ...
M. Hello shaurya...
S. Ji maa ...
M. Beta aaj baarish bshut tez padi hai ... Upar se aur bhi padne wali hai... Tu please mehek ko saath mein pick up karle na
S. Maa. ... Mujheuse pick up karneki kya zarooeat hai ...woh khud aa jayegi ...( he said pissed off )
M. Shaurya. ... Agar tu usse apne saath nahi laya ..toh... Toh... Mein tujhe gharmein ghuss ne nahi doongi ... Tujhe merikasam... Ja jake usse apbe saath gaadi mein laa
S. Maa...
M. Bye shaurya
And mrs khanna cutthecall...
S. Maa kitne ache se phasaliya iss dhabewali ne ... Wah...
Saying this... He drove till her dhaba... Raibdrops falling on his car's windows...remimding him last night... With the sound of the rain... The more he was getting close to her dhaba ... The more hewasfeelinv confusibg...disturbed... How will he tell her to come with him... Since he married her forcibly two weeksago ... He had just started to take revenge from her ... In the best ways possible ... And will continue until he sees what he wants to see ... Until she breaks into millions of pieces...he wanted hisrevenge ... For the slap ... For the way she spoke to him the day she came into his room ... For the way kantA chachi spoke about his class... The way he left her with no choice ... Used his power to sabotage her family... Her family had to put their house and mehek her mothers jewellery " girwi " due to seversl cinrcumstances snd bought the house and her mothers jewellery ... dragging her into marrying him or else... He will get her family to leave the house and come on theroad ... Abd most importantly... Not telling his mom..as if she tries to tell her the reason... He will disclose about her cousin sister affair with the boy who came to see mehek causing the defsme for her family. . ... his head was flooded with these thoughts... With the main condition of the marriage
Flashback stRts :
In the rainy evening... In the middleof the treees ( shaurya wearing a white dhirt with tie andmehek white churidaar with red dupatta , wet from head to toe ) mehek was standing behind him.. Shocked athim. . :
S. Aur sabse importNt baat ... Mein jo bhi kahun... Jo bhi karun... Tum mukhe kuch nahin kahogi... Bilkul nahi rokogi ... Haan agar tum aisa kuch bji karne ki koshish bhi ki... Toh tumhe pata hai ki mein kya kya kar sakta hoon...
Mrhek was crying ...shocked... Helpless...
Flashback ends


( Flashaback ends when he reached hhe dhsba ) he reached the dhaba. ... Her shift was now going to finish now ...he got outof the car...he was wearing his coat ... And looked at the dhaba... This is the place Where she hurt his ego and his pride for the first time ...

They were packing everything... But she wasnt there... He walked towards the dhaba and askd a msn who was taking the table inside...
S. Yeh apki cook kahaan hai ?
M. Ji mehek ? Woh toh andar hai hai ...

He continued walking there ... Few raindrops fell on him... He was niw under a roof and the corridor lead to the kitchen... He noticed... There wwas a broken glass bottle there i to lots of pieces ... How he wishes to see meheks self confidence and ego broken like that botttle ... he tried to remove those pieces a bit to the sides with hisshoes... When he stepped up the only stair ...she came out of the kitchen ... He looked at her ... She saw him... Confused ... It started to rain properly...
M. Shaurya ?
When she said his name ...which she never had used ... Both reminded last night moment when she moaned his name after he had bit her earlobe ... Both looked down in shame... Mehek had a soft blush on her cheeks...
M. Mr shaurya khanna... Ap yahaan kya kar rahein ho ?
S. Woh... Ma ne bola hai ki tumhe ghar apne saath laun... ( he said in a confused manner )
M. Woh... Mein... abhi ma ko hi phone karne wali thi... Ki main aj raat dhabe pe hi ruk rahi hoon... Bahut baarish pad chuki hsi aur padegi ...toh... Mein apke saath nahi aa rahi...
S. Mehek ... Chup chaap mere saath chalo. . ...
M. Nahi a sakti ... Aur waise bhi... Apki" sabse important " contidion jitna mujhe yaad hai... Woh ye yoh nahi thi ki jo sp bolo mein woh karun... Balki jo ap bolo ya karo...mein apko rooku ya kuch bolun nahi... ... .
S. Mera patience test mat karon mehek ! ( he said whilehe fumed towards her )
Then , He Grabbedher wrist and dragged hr away from there... When he had stepped down the stair... She had slipped due to the water on the edge of the stair and lost her balance... Her wrist slipped out of his grip due to the rain ... falling on the ground... There...where those broken bottle s pieces were ...
M. Ahhhv !!!!!
Her painful cry made him turn back and look at her ... Who had fallen to the ground ... And softly curled her body due to the pain ...
S. Mehek !!!!!
completely baffled... He rushed towards her and kneeled down...
M. Ahhh ...!!!! ( She saidputting her hands on her stomach still her back facing him... )
he turned her from her waist and placed her head on his lap ... Herhands were on her stomch ... her wounds were bleeding ... And Her head had rashes ...
M... Shaurya pleaaae. ...shaurya please ( ... She said holding his tie... ) shaurya... Bahut... She ( wasnt able to uter more words ... The pain was getting really bad and she was feeling really cold due to the heavy rain fall )

There they were ... In the middle of the heavy rain... Shaurya was afraid... Afraid like hell... and moreover...guilty... He was feeling like a his heart was drwaining ... He had to admit it... She was there in this state becayse of him...
S. Mehek... Kuch mat bolo... Tum...
Shaurya gently picked mehek up in his arms... So as not to hurt her more ... Her eyes were getting closed time to time as the pain was increasing ... but she was trying to keep them open... Then ...the owner of the dhaba came ...
O. Beta kya hua mehek ko !? Isse jaldi se kamre me leke jao..
He followed the dhabha owner to the room ...
O. Ao beta ..

the owner opened the door , turned the lights on and kept the key on the table
O. Beta ek min ruko mein haldi aur haldi ka dood lata hoon ...

The owner went from there and shaurya walked towards the bed... He placed mehek carefully on the bed ... Her condition had got worse... He took out his phone and tried calling the doctor... But there was no net work...
S. Jab sabse zyada zaroorat hoti hai ...tab hi phone nahi chalta hai ...
The owner came with the glass of haldi milk and haldi in a littlebowl for her wounds...
O. Beta ...kuch aur chahiye toh bata dena...
S. Ji...
The ownerleft the room and closed the door ... Shaurya removed his wet coat asz it was really disturbing . ... and kept it aside ... Thankfully... Hisshirt wasnt that wet ...
He looked at her... She had started to shiver slightly ... Her clothes were drenched... He rushed towards her ...
To be continued ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow...Shaurya is having some trouble controlling his feelings for Mehek...is Shaurya going to change after this? Can we expect anything steamy here?...update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Hi there dear! Beautiful update. Loved every bit of it. So Shaurya married Mehak forcibly and under really sensitive conditions. Felt so sorry for Mehak. But he seems to have no control on himself. Heart and mind wants 2 different things. Continue soon.😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Wow...Shaurya is having some trouble controlling his feelings for Mehek...is Shaurya going to change after this? Can we expect anything steamy here?...update soon.



Hi dear

Yap hes struggling with himself

The next part s gonna be a really romantic one

Bush blush 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Such Turmoil in this update. I loved the way you wrote of Shaurya's confusion over the situation. Torn between exacting his revenge and his feelings for his wife😕 ( how bad was that forcing their marriage) Shaurya seems at his wits end trying to decide how he truly feels about her.

However in the end, when Mehek gets injured, I think his true self appears.
Hoping Mehek isn't seriously hurt, and that this unfortunate incident bring Shaurya to the conclusion that in the face of his wife's injury, that maybe revenge isn't as important.

Update soon😊


Edited by crtkelly - 8 years ago

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